Dreams— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevabınızda tekrarlar ve dilbilgisi hataları mevcut. Daha doğal ve etkili bir yanıt için, aynı fikri tekrar etmekten kaçının ve cümlelerinizi daha akıcı ve doğru kurmaya özen gösterin. Ayrıca, bağlaçları doğru kullanarak düşüncelerinizi daha mantıklı bir şekilde bağlayabilirsiniz.

Example: When I was 8 years old, I dreamed of becoming a translator because I love helping people communicate. Besides, it is a well-paid profession, which makes it even more appealing to me.

Suggestion: Cevabınızda anlam belirsizliği ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlayarak, neden paylaşmadığınızı açık ve net bir şekilde ifade edin. Ayrıca, bağlaçları doğru kullanarak cümlenizi daha anlaşılır hale getirin.

Example: I usually don't share my dreams with others because I find it difficult to explain them clearly, and sometimes it can be uncomfortable for both of us.

Suggestion: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi ve anlam açısından sorunlar var. Düşüncelerinizi daha açık ve mantıklı bir şekilde ifade etmeye çalışın. Bağlaçları doğru kullanarak cümlenizi geliştirin ve spesifik örnekler verin.

Example: Yes, I believe dreams have special meanings because they can reflect our desires and fears. For example, sometimes dreams help us understand our true feelings.

Suggestion: Cevabınızda anlam karışıklığı ve dilbilgisi hataları mevcut. Doğrudan ve net bir şekilde hayallerinizi gerçekleştirmek istediğinizi ifade edin. Ayrıca, nedenlerini ve nasıl çalıştığınızı açıklayarak cevabınızı zenginleştirin.

Example: Yes, I definitely want to make my dreams come true. I have clear ambitions, and I study hard to achieve them.

× And thirdly, you making a lot of money and you helping each other understand themselves.

✓ And thirdly, you make a lot of money and you help each other understand themselves.

The verbs 'making' and 'helping' are incorrectly used in the present participle form without auxiliary verbs. The correct form is the simple present tense 'make' and 'help' to match the subject 'you' and maintain parallel structure.

× I don't participate with someone because conjugations are very can be awful for me.

✓ I don't participate with someone because conjugations can be very awful for me.

The phrase 'very can be awful' is incorrect; 'can be' should precede 'very awful'. Also, 'participate with someone' is awkward; better phrasing would be 'participate with others' or 'participate in conversations'. However, since only grammar problems from the list are corrected, the main issue is word order and modal verb usage.

× I don't participate with someone because conjugations are very can be awful for me.

✓ I don't participate with someone because conjugations can be very awful for me.

The modal verb 'can' should come before the adjective phrase 'very awful'. The original sentence incorrectly places 'are' before 'can be', which is ungrammatical.

× That's because and secondly, it can be very rough time for both of the both of us and that's why I don't want to participate.

✓ That's because, secondly, it can be a very rough time for both of us and that's why I don't want to participate.

The phrase 'both of the both of us' is redundant and incorrect. It should be 'both of us'. Also, the article 'a' is needed before 'very rough time'.

× Yes, I think because we finding our life meaning in our dreams.

✓ Yes, I think because we find our life meaning in our dreams.

The verb 'finding' is incorrectly used in the present participle form without auxiliary verbs. The simple present tense 'find' is correct here to express a general truth.

× And secondly you can surely say that dreams are the most important in our life because we can sometimes remote.

✓ And secondly, you can surely say that dreams are the most important in our life because we can sometimes remember.

The word 'remote' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'remember'. This is a vocabulary error but since it affects meaning, it is corrected here.

× If you cannot, do we have remorse in it?

✓ If you cannot, do you have remorse about it?

The sentence structure is incorrect. The subject 'we' should be 'you' to match the conditional 'if you cannot'. Also, the preposition 'in' should be 'about' to correctly collocate with 'remorse'.

× Yes, I want a lot in my life if you want to.

✓ Yes, I want a lot in my life, if you want to.

A comma is needed before 'if you want to' to separate the clauses properly.

× We have neat ambition in our life and study a lot for it.

✓ We have a neat ambition in our life and study a lot for it.

The adjective 'neat' is incorrectly used to describe 'ambition'. The correct adjective should be 'great' or 'strong'. However, since only grammar problems from the list are corrected, the article 'a' is added before 'neat ambition' to correct the article usage.