Dreams— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to use more natural phrasing and correct grammar. Avoid redundancy and clarify your ideas. For example, instead of 'oftenly' say 'often', and instead of 'dreams which I saw in the night' say 'dreams I had at night'. Also, explain briefly why you don't remember dreams to enrich your answer.

Example: To be honest, I often don't remember the dreams I have at night because scientifically, our brain tends to forget them quickly after waking up.

Suggestion: Improve sentence structure and vocabulary for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, say 'When I remember my dreams, I share them with a friend. However, I'm not interested in listening to others' dreams because I find it impractical and boring.'

Example: When I remember my dreams, I usually share them with a close friend. However, I'm not very interested in hearing about other people's dreams because I find it impractical and a bit boring.

Suggestion: Focus on clearer sentence structure and grammar. Use linking words to organize your ideas. For example, 'Most of the time, I don't believe dreams have special meanings. However, sometimes when a dream is specific or related to someone, I tend to believe it, especially because my grandma also believes in such dreams.'

Example: Most of the time, I don't think dreams have special meanings. However, if a dream is very specific or connected to someone I know, I sometimes believe it, especially since my grandma also believes in the significance of dreams.

Suggestion: Use clearer and more natural expressions. Avoid awkward phrasing like 'want to be realistic' and 'want to commit too'. Instead, say 'I definitely want to make my dreams come true, especially if they are positive goals for my future. For example, if I dream of becoming a doctor, I am committed to working hard to achieve that.'

Example: I definitely want to make my dreams come true, especially if they are positive goals for my future. For example, if I dream of becoming a doctor, I am committed to working hard to achieve that.

× To be honest, oftenly I don't remember the dreams which I saw in the night because it is a scientific thing that we can't remember the dreams which we see.

✓ To be honest, I often don't remember the dreams that I saw at night because it is a scientific fact that we can't remember the dreams we see.

The word 'oftenly' is not a correct adverb form; the correct adverb is 'often'. Also, 'which' is better replaced by 'that' in restrictive clauses. 'In the night' should be 'at night' as the correct preposition for time. 'Scientific thing' is better expressed as 'scientific fact' for clarity.

× To be honest, oftenly I don't remember the dreams which I saw in the night because it is a scientific thing that we can't remember the dreams which we see.

✓ To be honest, I often don't remember the dreams that I saw at night because it is a scientific fact that we can't remember the dreams we see.

The verb 'saw' is correctly in past tense to refer to dreams experienced in the past. No change needed here for tense, but the sentence was corrected for other issues.

× When I remembered my dreams that time I shared it with one of my friends and I'm not interested to listen to other dreams because it's not a practical thing and it feels so boring to listen others names.

✓ When I remember my dreams, I share them with one of my friends, and I'm not interested in listening to other dreams because it's not practical and it feels boring to listen to others' names.

The phrase 'When I remembered my dreams that time' is awkward; 'When I remember my dreams' is better to express habitual action. 'Shared it' should be 'share them' to agree with plural 'dreams'. 'Interested to listen' should be 'interested in listening'. 'Practical thing' is better as 'practical'. 'Listen others names' should be 'listen to others' names' with correct prepositions and possessive form.

× When I remembered my dreams that time I shared it with one of my friends and I'm not interested to listen to other dreams because it's not a practical thing and it feels so boring to listen others names.

✓ When I remember my dreams, I share them with one of my friends, and I'm not interested in listening to other dreams because it's not practical and it feels boring to listen to others' names.

The preposition 'to' is missing after 'interested' which should be 'interested in'. Also, 'listen others names' requires 'listen to others' names' to be grammatically correct.

× When I remembered my dreams that time I shared it with one of my friends and I'm not interested to listen to other dreams because it's not a practical thing and it feels so boring to listen others names.

✓ When I remember my dreams, I share them with one of my friends, and I'm not interested in listening to other dreams because it's not practical and it feels boring to listen to others' names.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect when referring to 'dreams' which is plural; it should be 'them'. Also, 'others names' needs a possessive apostrophe to be 'others' names'.

× Mostly time I don't believe that the dreams are a practical thing and it has any special meaning. But sometimes if I see something specific or like related to someone that time I believe in that because according to my grandma dreams I have related. If it's related with someone then.

✓ Most of the time, I don't believe that dreams are practical or have any special meaning. But sometimes, if I see something specific or related to someone, I believe in it because, according to my grandma, the dreams are related. If it's related to someone, then yes.

'Mostly time' should be 'Most of the time'. 'Are a practical thing' is better as 'are practical'. 'It has any special meaning' should be 'have any special meaning' to agree with plural 'dreams'. 'Like related to someone' is awkward; 'related to someone' is correct. 'According to my grandma dreams I have related' is unclear and corrected for clarity. 'If it's related with someone' should be 'related to someone' as the correct preposition.

× Mostly time I don't believe that the dreams are a practical thing and it has any special meaning. But sometimes if I see something specific or like related to someone that time I believe in that because according to my grandma dreams I have related. If it's related with someone then.

✓ Most of the time, I don't believe that dreams are practical or have any special meaning. But sometimes, if I see something specific or related to someone, I believe in it because, according to my grandma, the dreams are related. If it's related to someone, then yes.

The preposition 'with' is incorrectly used in 'related with someone'; the correct preposition is 'related to someone'.

× If it's related with my future and something good, then definitely I want to be realistic because for example, if I say I'm a doctor in my future, then definitely I want to commit too.

✓ If it's related to my future and something good, then definitely I want to be realistic because, for example, if I say I'm going to be a doctor in the future, then definitely I want to commit to it too.

'Want to be realistic' is awkward; better to say 'want to be realistic about it'. 'If I say I'm a doctor in my future' should be 'if I say I'm going to be a doctor in the future' to express future intention. 'Commit too' is incomplete; it should be 'commit to it too' with the correct preposition and object.