Dreams— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but can be more concise and structured. Try to start with a direct answer, then add specific examples using linking words to improve coherence. Avoid redundancy and keep sentences natural.

Example: Yes, I can remember some dreams, especially if they are unusual or disturbing. For instance, I once dreamed about a plane crash, which stayed in my mind all day because it was so vivid and strange.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Try to complete your thoughts and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid abrupt endings and provide a clear opinion.

Example: I rarely share my strange dreams with others, except sometimes with my mother because she believes in their meanings. However, I am not very interested in discussing dreams in general.

Suggestion: Your answer shows personal belief but can be clearer and more structured. Avoid filler words and explain your examples more precisely with linking words.

Example: Yes, I believe dreams have special meanings, especially from an astrological perspective. For example, I often dream about playing in grass, which I think symbolizes fear and anxiety in my life.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat fragmented. Try to give a direct response first, then support it with reasons or examples using linking words to make it coherent.

Example: Yes, I want to make my dreams come true, especially if they are happy ones. For instance, I sometimes dream about having a lot of money, and I hope to achieve that someday.

× It depends on situations.

✓ It depends on the situation.

The word 'situations' should be singular here because the phrase 'depends on' is typically followed by a singular noun when referring to a general condition. Using 'the situation' is more natural and grammatically correct in this context.

× If it's joyful or if it was something full of happiness, then I don't usually remember it.

✓ If it's joyful or if it is something full of happiness, then I don't usually remember it.

The sentence mixes present tense 'it's' with past tense 'was'. To maintain consistency, both should be in present tense since the condition is general. Therefore, 'if it was' should be corrected to 'if it is'.

× But if it was horrific, strange, something weird, then it obviously disturbs me the whole day and I remember it for a longer period of time.

✓ But if it is horrific, strange, or something weird, then it obviously disturbs me the whole day and I remember it for a longer period of time.

Similar to the previous sentence, the tense should be consistent. 'If it was' should be 'if it is' to match the present tense context. Also, adding 'or' before 'something weird' improves clarity.

× I keep it with myself because my mother believes a lot in dreams coming through On the other side, I'm not interested in all this dream as well because it's.

✓ I keep it to myself because my mother believes a lot in dreams coming true. On the other hand, I'm not interested in all these dreams as well because of that.

The phrase 'keep it with myself' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'keep it to myself'. 'Dreams coming through' should be 'dreams coming true'. 'On the other side' should be 'On the other hand'. Also, 'all this dream' should be 'all these dreams' to match plural form and correct quantifier usage.

× I do think dreams have special meaning as I'm more tilted into the astrological part.

✓ I do think dreams have special meaning as I'm more inclined towards the astrological part.

The phrase 'tilted into' is incorrect in this context. The correct expression is 'inclined towards' to indicate preference or interest.

× For example, I used to have a lot of dreams about playing grasses, which symbolized about your fear, your anxiety.

✓ For example, I used to have a lot of dreams about playing grasses, which symbolized your fear and your anxiety.

The phrase 'symbolized about' is incorrect; 'symbolized' does not require 'about'. Also, 'playing grasses' is unusual; if 'grasses' is intended as plural, it is acceptable, but contextually it might be better to clarify. The correction focuses on removing 'about' after 'symbolized'.

× If it's a joyful, uh, happy dream where I'm just laying over a pile of money, which is once in a blue moon thing.

✓ If it's a joyful, uh, happy dream where I'm just lying over a pile of money, which is a once in a blue moon thing.

The verb 'laying' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'lying' when referring to reclining. Also, the phrase 'once in a blue moon thing' needs the article 'a' before it.