Dreams— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more fluent and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid sentence fragments, and give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep answers natural and within 3–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I can remember my dreams. For example, yesterday I dreamed I was flying on a dragon with my friends, which felt exhilarating. The dragon was huge and we flew over a city at sunset, which made the dream very vivid.

Suggestion: Combine short fragments into complete sentences and explain reasons with linking words. Use plural/singular and articles correctly (e.g., "a privacy" is incorrect). Provide one specific reason and a brief example.

Example: No, I usually don't share my dreams. I prefer to keep them private because they feel personal, and for example I once had an embarrassing dream that I didn't want others to know about.

Suggestion: Correct vocabulary errors and form full sentences. State your opinion clearly, then give a specific reason and an example. Avoid unclear words (e.g., "gyms") and ensure the example makes sense.

Example: Yes, I think some dreams can have meanings because our subconscious reflects our worries and hopes. For instance, last week I dreamed I was being promoted, which might reflect my desire for career advancement.

Suggestion: Use correct tense and phrasing: a topic sentence, a reason, and a short supporting detail. Avoid awkward constructions like "want it become true." Use linking words to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I want to make my dreams come true. For example, I have always wanted to save one million dollars to secure my future, so I am planning to work hard and invest wisely to achieve that goal.

× Yes, yesterday I dreamed about.

✓ Yes, yesterday I dreamed about it.

The sentence ends abruptly and needs an object; adding 'it' completes the clause. Also 'dreamed' is correct past tense for a past event. Suggestion: always include the object or clause describing what you dreamed about (e.g., 'I dreamed about flying').

× I was flying a dragon.

✓ I was flying on a dragon.

The past continuous 'was flying' is fine, but the verb phrase needs a preposition to show how you interacted with the dragon. Use 'flying on a dragon' to indicate being carried by it. Alternatively, 'riding a dragon' is natural.

× It was a really cool and my friends are with me.

✓ It was really cool and my friends were with me.

Pronoun 'It' refers to the dream, so 'was' matches past tense. 'My friends are with me' mixes present with past; change to past 'were with me' for tense consistency. Also remove 'a' before 'really cool' because 'cool' is an adjective, not a count noun.

× No, I have never shared my dream with others before.

✓ No, I have never shared my dreams with others.

Use plural 'dreams' when speaking generally. 'Have never shared' is present perfect and 'before' is redundant here. Remove 'before' for clarity. Keep present perfect to indicate experience up to now.

× I. Don't like to do that because it is a privacy.

✓ I don't like to do that because it is private.

The sentence has an erroneous period after 'I' and uses 'privacy' incorrectly as an adjective. Use 'private' as the adjective to describe the matter. Also combine into one sentence without the extra period.

× Yes, some gyms.

✓ Yes, some dreams do.

'Gyms' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'dreams'. Replace with 'dreams' and add 'do' to complete the response to 'Do you think dreams have special meanings?' The phrase should be a complete clause.

× May predict what will happen in the future.

✓ They may predict what will happen in the future.

Add subject 'They' (referring to dreams) so the modal verb 'may' has a clear subject. This makes a complete sentence and keeps the modal meaning (possibility).

× For example, last week I dreamed that I was going to have a place for my boss.

✓ For example, last week I dreamed that I was going to have a promotion from my boss.

Original 'have a place for my boss' is unclear and likely incorrect word choice. If the intended meaning is to receive a promotion, use 'have a promotion from my boss' or 'be promoted by my boss.' Keep past tense 'dreamed' and 'was going to' for reported future-in-the-past.

× Of course, I always dreamed about having a $1,000,000 in the future and I really want it become true.

✓ Of course, I have always dreamed about having $1,000,000 in the future and I really want it to become true.

Use present perfect 'have always dreamed' to indicate a lifelong desire. Remove the article 'a' before the amount and add 'to' after 'want' in the phrase 'want it to become true.' Also keep 'in the future' as appropriate. Suggestions: 'I have always dreamed of having $1,000,000 and I really want that dream to come true.'