Dreams— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammar, use a clear topic sentence and add a brief specific detail. Correct tense and subject-verb agreement, and avoid redundancy. For example, say whether you usually remember dreams and give one reason or frequency adverb. Use linking words like 'but' or 'however' correctly.

Example: I sometimes remember my dreams, but often I don't. For example, I usually recall dreams when I wake up suddenly in the night, however I forget them if I wake up slowly in the morning.

Suggestion: Fix vocabulary and meaning errors, start with a direct topic sentence answering the question, then give a concise, specific reason. Use correct collocations ('share my dreams' not 'share my room') and linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Keep it to 1–3 sentences.

Example: Not really. I don't usually share my dreams because they feel personal, so I prefer to keep them to myself. Occasionally I tell close friends if a dream is particularly strange or meaningful.

Suggestion: Make your opinion clear with correct grammar and provide a supporting reason or brief example. Use linking words such as 'because' and correct verb forms. Avoid repeating words and keep it concise.

Example: Yes, I think some dreams have special meanings because they can reflect our worries or hopes. For instance, before an important exam I often dream about being unprepared, which shows my anxiety.

Suggestion: Answer directly and clearly with correct sentence structure, then give a specific example of a dream you want to achieve and how you plan to work toward it. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to organize your response.

Example: Yes, I would like to make my dreams come true because they represent my long-term goals. For example, I dream of studying abroad, so I am preparing by improving my English and saving money.

× Actually it's depends.

✓ Actually it depends.

The verb 'depend' should be in the base present form after the subject 'it'. Using 'it's depends' incorrectly combines the contraction 'it is' with a verb that requires a bare form; correct subject-verb agreement is 'it depends'. Suggestion: use 'it depends' for present habitual statements.

× Sometimes I remember, but sometime I not remember.

✓ Sometimes I remember, but sometimes I do not remember.

Two issues: 'sometime' vs 'sometimes' (use 'sometimes' to mean occasionally) and the negative present simple requires the auxiliary 'do' (do not) with the base verb 'remember'. Suggestion: use 'sometimes' and form negatives as 'do not' or the contraction 'don't' + base verb.

× Not really. I don't like to share my room to others because it is a personal thing so I prefer to keep quiet.

✓ Not really. I don't like to share my room with others because it is a personal thing, so I prefer to keep quiet.

Use the preposition 'with' (share something with someone), not 'to'. Also add a comma before 'so' to separate clauses. 'Keep quiet' is fine. Suggestion: use 'share my room with others' and punctuate clauses for clarity.

× Absolutely yes I dream dream have some special meaning to tell us before the thing happen.

✓ Absolutely yes. I dream that dreams have some special meaning to tell us before things happen.

Multiple tense and structure problems: repeat of 'dream', missing complementizer 'that' to introduce subordinate clause, subject-verb agreement 'dreams have' (plural), and 'the thing happen' should be 'things happen' or 'an event happens' in present simple. Suggestion: use 'I dream that dreams have...' or 'I believe dreams have...' for clarity and correct present simple usage.

× This is what I always wish for because I wish them I my dream will come true one day.

✓ This is what I always wish for because I hope my dream will come true one day.

Problems: 'wish them I my dream' is ungrammatical and redundant. Use 'hope' to express desire about the future and correct word order 'I hope my dream will come true one day.' 'Wish' can be used but often followed by a different structure (e.g., 'I wish my dream would come true'). Suggestion: use 'I hope' or restructure the sentence when using 'wish'.