Emails— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and concise. Instead of saying 'I prefer WhatsApp app', say 'I prefer using WhatsApp'. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating 'to send messages'. Try to keep your answer within 3-4 sentences and add a reason for your preference to enrich your response.

Example: No, I don't often send emails. I usually prefer using WhatsApp to message my friends and family because it's faster and more convenient.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Avoid vague phrases like 'whenever it is important'. Instead, specify situations when emails are necessary. Also, the phrase 'Two other person' is confusing and should be removed or clarified. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: I send emails when the message is formal or important, such as for work or official communication, because emails are more professional and reliable.

Suggestion: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct prepositions and plural forms, for example, 'important documents are preferably sent by email'. Also, avoid general statements without examples. Try to add a linking word to improve coherence.

Example: Yes, I believe emails are popular in China and around the world because important documents are preferably sent by email for security and record-keeping.

Suggestion: Your answer is off-topic and contains errors. The question is about sending emails, but you mentioned sending images. Also, avoid repeating 'WhatsApp app'; just say 'WhatsApp'. Use linking words to explain your opinion clearly and directly.

Example: I think sending emails will become less popular in the future because messaging apps like WhatsApp are more convenient and allow instant communication.

× Two other person.

✓ Two other people.

The word 'person' is singular, but here it is used to refer to more than one individual, so the plural form 'people' should be used instead. This is a common singular and plural issue.

× becauses important documentations are preferred sending by emails.

✓ because important documents are preferably sent by emails.

The word 'becauses' is incorrect; it should be 'because'. 'Documentations' is not commonly used in plural; 'documents' is correct. The phrase 'preferred sending by emails' is incorrect; it should be 'preferably sent by emails' to correctly use the passive voice and adverb. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and word forms.

× emails are popular in China.

✓ email is popular in China.

While 'emails' can be plural, when referring to the concept or medium in general, 'email' as an uncountable noun is more appropriate. However, this is acceptable; no correction strictly needed here. This is a minor singular/plural consideration.

× becauses WhatsApp app is very convenient and user-friendly, so people will prefer this app to send messages.

✓ because the WhatsApp app is very convenient and user-friendly, so people will prefer this app to send messages.

The word 'becauses' is incorrect; it should be 'because'. Also, 'WhatsApp app' should be preceded by the definite article 'the' as it refers to a specific app. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and articles.