Emails— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a clear and concise response with a topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy.

Example: Yes, I often send emails, especially to my supervisor. I usually update them about my tasks and any important work that needs attention. This helps keep communication smooth and efficient.

Suggestion: Your answer is too short and fragmented. Try to form complete sentences and provide more specific details using linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: I usually send emails to my supervisor after I finish my tasks. This way, I can report my progress and receive further instructions if needed.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons or examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

Example: Although I don't live in China, I believe sending emails is very popular there. Many people use emails to communicate for work and personal matters because the internet is widely available.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to give a clear opinion with reasons and examples. Use linking words to make your answer logical and fluent.

Example: I think sending emails will become even more popular in the future because globalization and digital technology make communication easier. Many people will rely on emails for work and daily communication.

× Because of my work I will send the emails to my. Supervisor about the work that got aside from them and so many significant work.

✓ Because of my work, I will send emails to my supervisor about the work that was set aside and many significant tasks.

The original sentence has incorrect verb forms and sentence structure. 'Got aside' should be 'was set aside' to correctly use the past participle passive form. Also, 'so many significant work' is incorrect because 'work' is uncountable; it should be 'many significant tasks.' The sentence also needs proper punctuation and article usage.

× A day. Assign me to send them via the emails or.

✓ Every day, I am assigned to send them via email.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks a clear subject and verb. 'A day.' is incomplete, and 'Assign me' is incorrect; it should be 'I am assigned.' Also, 'via the emails or' is unclear and should be 'via email.' Proper sentence structure and clarity are needed.

× I always send the emails. When I. Finish my task. And sent it back to my supervisor.

✓ I always send emails when I finish my tasks and send them back to my supervisor.

The original sentences are fragmented and inconsistent in tense. 'Finish' should be in present tense to match 'always send,' and 'sent' should be 'send' to maintain present tense consistency. Also, 'the emails' is unnecessary; 'emails' is sufficient.

× I'm not sure 'cause I'm not leaving there, but I think every country use the emails to communicate an. Do that. Ask about work an like.

✓ I'm not sure because I don't live there, but I think every country uses emails to communicate and do that, ask about work and the like.

'Leaving' is incorrect; it should be 'live.' 'Use the emails' should be 'uses emails' (subject-verb agreement and article usage). The sentence fragments 'an. Do that. Ask about work an like.' are unclear and should be combined properly. 'And the like' is the correct phrase.

× I think every country use the emails to communicate an.

✓ I think every country uses emails to communicate.

The subject 'every country' is singular, so the verb should be 'uses' not 'use.' Also, 'the emails' is unnecessary; 'emails' is sufficient.

× In the future. I think it will be popular for sure because. Off our. Globalization and did, she told Disruption Today.

✓ In the future, I think it will be popular for sure because of globalization and digital disruption today.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect words like 'Off our' and 'did, she told.' These should be 'because of globalization and digital disruption.' Proper sentence structure and word choice are necessary.

× And I think many people will use the e-mail for. Maybe every.

✓ And I think many people will use email, maybe everyone.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'For. Maybe every.' is fragmented and should be combined into a complete sentence. 'E-mail' can be 'email,' and 'everyone' is the correct word instead of 'every.'