Emails— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevabınızda daha doğal ve akıcı ifadeler kullanmalısınız. "Exceptional times" ifadesi yerine "only occasionally" gibi daha uygun ve yaygın ifadeler tercih edin. Ayrıca, cümlenizi daha kısa ve net tutarak gereksiz tekrarları azaltmalısınız.

Example: I usually send emails only occasionally, such as when I need to contact my game company, submit homework to my teacher, or communicate with my university.

Suggestion: Cümleniz anlaşılması zor ve dilbilgisi hataları içeriyor. Daha açık ve mantıklı bir yapı kurmalısınız. Ayrıca, destekleyici detay verirken bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlelerinizi birbirine bağlamalısınız.

Example: I usually send emails when something important happens that affects someone's life. Before sending the email, I often call them to let them know.

Suggestion: Cevabınızda kesin olmayan ifadeler yerine daha net ve ilgili detaylar vermeye çalışın. Ayrıca, cümlenizi tamamlayarak daha doğal bir ifade kullanmalısınız.

Example: I'm not sure, but since China has very fast internet like 10G, I think sending emails is quite popular there.

Suggestion: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi hataları var ve ifadeleriniz biraz tekrarlı. Daha doğru zaman kullanımı ve daha çeşitli kelimelerle cümlenizi geliştirmelisiniz.

Example: I think emails will become less popular in the future because people prefer texting or sending instant messages instead.

× I usually send emails exceptional times, like I have to e-mail my game company or I have to e-mail my homework to my teacher or I can send mails to my university if I have to.

✓ I usually send emails on exceptional occasions, like when I have to e-mail my game company or my homework to my teacher, or I can send emails to my university if I have to.

The phrase 'exceptional times' is incorrect; 'occasions' is the proper plural noun here. Also, 'mails' is incorrect as 'mail' is uncountable; 'emails' should be used instead. This corrects singular/plural noun usage.

× Is import something important happened into the day affect their life?

✓ Is it important if something happened during the day that affects their life?

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Adding 'it' as the subject and restructuring the sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects sentence structure.

× We just text it or we just sending message, that's all.

✓ We just text or we just send messages, that's all.

The phrase 'we just sending message' incorrectly uses the -ing form without an auxiliary verb. It should be 'we just send messages' to maintain parallel structure and correct verb form.