Emails— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答不够清晰，句子结构混乱，表达不自然。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并补充具体细节。

Example: Yes, I often send emails, especially during my college life, to communicate with my daughter because she is usually busy.

Suggestion: 回答含糊不清，语法错误较多，缺乏逻辑。建议明确时间点，并用连词连接句子，使表达更连贯。

Example: I usually send emails in the morning or afternoon because people are more likely to check their inbox during these times.

Suggestion: 回答较为简洁，但语法和表达不够完整。建议使用完整句子，并适当扩展理由。

Example: Sending emails is not very popular in China because most people prefer using WeChat, which is more efficient for daily communication.

Suggestion: 回答内容合理，但句子结构不完整，表达不够流畅。建议使用完整句子，并用连接词增强逻辑性。

Example: I believe sending emails will become less popular in the future because technology has advanced, and there are now faster ways to communicate with others.

× I often send emails during my college life because where I want to communicate with my daughter, I will send an e-mail to them because they are always busy.

✓ I often sent emails during my college life because when I wanted to communicate with my daughter, I would send an email to her because she was always busy.

句子结构混乱，时态使用不当。'during my college life'表示过去，动词应使用过去时。'where'用错，应为'when'表示时间。'I will send'应改为过去将来时'would send'。'them'指代不明，应改为'she'。建议理清时间顺序，使用正确时态和代词。

× I often send an e-mail to others in the morning or the afternoon because if I send children in the evening is maybe some kind of applied?

✓ I often send emails to others in the morning or afternoon because sending emails to children in the evening may not be appropriate.

句子结构混乱，语义不清。'if I send children in the evening is maybe some kind of applied?'语法错误且表达不明确。应简化句子，明确表达发送邮件时间和对象的合理性。

× Not so popular HRE because nowadays we often use an app called WeChat to communicate with each other. Is more efficient than e-mail I think.

✓ It is not so popular here because nowadays we often use an app called WeChat to communicate with each other. I think it is more efficient than email.

句子缺少主语，导致结构不完整。'Not so popular HRE'应改为'It is not so popular here'。第二句缺少主语，应补充完整。建议注意句子主语的完整性。

× I think it will be less popular in the future because with the development of technology, sending e-mail is so slow. Now has many other ways to communicate with others.

✓ I think it will be less popular in the future because with the development of technology, sending emails is too slow. Now there are many other ways to communicate with others.

句子缺少主语，'Now has many other ways'应为'Now there are many other ways'。'sending e-mail is so slow'中'so'用法不当，应为'too'表示过于缓慢。建议注意句子主语和副词的正确使用。