Emails— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 答题要更简洁、语法更准确，并避免重复。开头直接回答问题，然后用一两句补充具体对象、目的和最近一次的例子。注意时态一致和单复数（e-mail→emails；request→requests 或 remove duplicate）。

Example: Yes, I often send emails to my professors and lecturers for academic discussions and to arrange meetings. For example, recently I emailed several professors to request recommendation letters for my graduate applications.

Suggestion: 回答要更直接并包含时间细节，保持句子简洁并使用连接词让表达流畅。改正搭配（working time→working hours 或 during office hours）。

Example: I usually send emails during working hours, especially during professors' office hours, when I need to discuss coursework or arrange meetings.

Suggestion: 避免重复（rather rather），用更自然的表达比较日常和正式的沟通方式，并给出具体例子说明差异。控制在两到三句内。

Example: Not really. People in China tend to use social media apps like WeChat for everyday chats and quick messages, while emails are mainly used for formal communication such as job applications or official notifications.

Suggestion: 回答要更客观和语法准确，避免片面绝对词（Of course）。说明原因时用清晰的结构并修正语法问题（the function of email is too simple；in their → in daily life）。可提供一短预测或对比。

Example: I think emails will become less popular for casual use because email is relatively basic, while social media offers voice notes, stickers and mobile payments that are more convenient for everyday communication. However, emails will likely remain important for formal or official matters.

× Yes, I often send emails to my professors and lecturers for some academic discussions and to arrange meetings, and recently I send e-mail to requests to request recommendation letters.

✓ Yes, I often send emails to my professors and lecturers for academic discussions and to arrange meetings, and recently I sent emails to request recommendation letters.

句子中前半部分谈到“经常”使用现在时（often），但后半部分提到“最近”发生的具体动作应使用过去时（sent），所以需把 recently 后的动词改为过去式。另外原句有单词重复和结构冗余（"to requests to request"），需简化为"to request"或直接用"sent emails to request"。建议注意时间状语与动词时态一致，并避免词语重复。

× I'd like to send emails to professors or lecturers for some academic discussions in working time during their office hours.

✓ I'd like to send emails to professors or lecturers for academic discussions during their office hours.

原句中"in working time during their office hours"冗余且搭配不当。使用情态动词短语"I'd like to"是可以的，但时间状语应使用"during their office hours"。建议删除多余的"in working time"，使表达更地道。

× Not exactly. In China people prefer to use social medias like WeChat rather rather than emails for some daily tokens or conversations. But emails are usually used for some formal conversations.

✓ Not exactly. In China, people prefer to use social media like WeChat rather than emails for daily talk or conversations. But emails are usually used for formal communications.

1) "social medias" 不可数，正确为 "social media"。2) 有重复词"rather rather"，需删除一个。3) "for some daily tokens" 用词错误，token 不合适，应用"daily talk"或"daily conversations"。4) "formal conversations" 更常用"formal communications"。建议注意可数/不可数名词和词汇搭配。

× Of course less popular because they function of e-mail is too simple and the multiple functions social medias like the voice notes, stickers and even payments on the apps are more convenient for people to use in their.

✓ Of course it will be less popular because the function of email is too simple, and the multiple functions of social media, like voice notes, stickers and even payments in apps, are more convenient for people to use.

1) 时态与句子结构：回答关于未来趋势，应使用将来时，故改为"it will be less popular"。2) 句子主语和谓语缺失：原句缺少形式主语"it"。3) 名词和定冠词/介词使用错误："they function of e-mail" 应为 "the function of email"；"social medias" 应为 "social media"；"on the apps" 更自然为 "in apps" 或 "in the apps" 视语境而定。4) 句尾“in their”不完整，删除或补全。建议注意时态一致、主语完整并使用正确的名词单复数形式和介词。