Emails— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và trật tự từ, tránh lỗi thừa từ, dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và giới hạn tối đa 3 câu hỗ trợ. Cụ thể: (1) Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như "I usually do messaging apps" → "I usually use messaging apps"; (2) Loại bỏ từ thừa như "it" trước "they"; (3) Dùng một câu chủ đề ngắn rồi một câu giải thích với linking word như "because" hoặc "so"; (4) Dùng từ vựng phù hợp (e.g., "instant messaging apps", "convenient").

Example: No, I don't often send emails. I usually use instant messaging apps like Facebook or TikTok because they are faster and more convenient for chatting with my friends.

Suggestion: Sắp xếp lại ý theo cấu trúc chủ đề → chi tiết, sửa ngữ pháp và chia động từ số nhiều/ít, tránh từ mơ hồ như "maybe". Cụ thể: (1) Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng như "I usually send emails for..."; (2) Chia danh từ đúng: "work-related messages"; (3) Nêu ví dụ cụ thể và lí do; (4) Dùng linking word như "for example" hoặc "because" để nối ý.

Example: I usually send emails for formal or work-related matters because they are more professional. For example, I often email my teachers to submit assignments or clarify deadlines.

Suggestion: Tránh ngập ngừng và lỗi từ, diễn đạt mạch lạc hơn, rút gọn tối đa 2 câu hỗ trợ. Cụ thể: (1) Bắt đầu bằng câu thừa nhận giới hạn kiến thức: "I'm not from China, so I'm not sure"; (2) Sau đó dùng câu suy đoán rõ ràng với linking word "but"; (3) Loại bỏ "it" thừa và sửa "more many" → "many" hoặc "more"; (4) Nêu vài tính năng cụ thể thay vì dừng lại bằng "uh".

Example: I'm not from China, so I'm not sure, but I think email is less popular than instant messaging. People prefer apps like WeChat because they offer many features such as voice calls, group chats and mobile payments.

Suggestion: Cải thiện tính mạch lạc, ngữ pháp chủ-động-số, tránh lặp and filler words, kết thúc ý bằng ví dụ hoàn chỉnh. Cụ thể: (1) Mở bằng câu chủ đề ngắn: "I think emails will become less popular"; (2) Tránh lỗi số nhiều/ít: "they have a tendency"; (3) Dùng linking word "because" once and hoàn thiện ví dụ về tính năng; (4) Hạn chế nói "uh" và hoàn chỉnh câu kết.

Example: I think emails will become less popular in the future because people tend to use instant messaging more. Instant apps are more convenient for everyday communication and also offer features like mobile payments and real-time voice or video calls.

× I usually do messaging apps like Facebook or Tiktok because it they are fastest and more convenient for chatting with my friends.

✓ I usually use messaging apps like Facebook or TikTok because they are the fastest and more convenient for chatting with my friends.

The verb 'do' is incorrect with 'messaging apps'; use 'use'. Remove the extra pronoun 'it'. 'TikTok' capitalization fixed. Add definite article 'the' before 'fastest' when comparing within a specific group. Also 'more convenient' is fine; this yields grammatical parallelism and correct verb choice. Suggestions: Replace 'do' with 'use', remove 'it', add 'the' before 'fastest', capitalize 'TikTok'.

× I only use e-mail for formal or work related message or I usually send e-mail to my teacher to meet my deadline maybe.

✓ I only use e-mail for formal or work-related messages, or I usually send e-mails to my teacher to meet my deadline.

Countable noun 'message' should be plural 'messages' when speaking generally. 'Work-related' needs a hyphen as a compound adjective. Use 'e-mails' plural to match general use. Move 'maybe' or remove it for clarity; here it's removed to maintain formality. Also add a comma before 'or' for clarity. Suggestions: Make nouns plural when general, hyphenate compound adjectives, and maintain sentence clarity by placing adverbs appropriately.

× I'm not from China so I'm not certain, but I think emails it isn't as popular as instant messaging there.

✓ I'm not from China so I'm not certain, but I think e-mails aren't as popular as instant messaging there.

Remove redundant pronoun 'it'. Use contraction or negative 'aren't' for plural 'e-mails'. Consistency: use 'e-mails' plural when referring generally. This corrects subject-verb agreement and redundant words. Suggestions: Eliminate redundant pronouns and ensure subject and verb match in number.

× People prefer apps like WeChat because they are more convenient for everyday chat and have more many features such as uh.

✓ People prefer apps like WeChat because they are more convenient for everyday chat and have many more features, such as mobile payment.

The phrase 'more many' is incorrect; the correct order is 'many more' when comparing quantity. Provide an example after 'such as' to complete the thought; 'uh' is filler and should be removed. Adding a specific example like 'mobile payment' clarifies the sentence. Suggestions: Use 'many more' for comparative quantity and avoid filler words; supply a concrete example after 'such as'.

× From my perspective or sending e-mail, UH will become less popular in the future because they are hyper tendency to use instant messaging because it is more convenient for everyday communication and offer many features such as mobile payment and.

✓ From my perspective, e-mail will become less popular in the future because people tend to use instant messaging; it is more convenient for everyday communication and offers many features such as mobile payment.

Several issues: 'or' is wrong, should be comma. Remove filler 'UH'. 'E-mail' is singular and should match verb 'will become' (that's fine). 'They are hyper tendency' is ungrammatical; use 'people tend to' to express tendency. Ensure verb agreement: 'offers' matches 'it' (instant messaging). Remove the trailing 'and' and complete the list or end the sentence. This fixes sentence structure, word choice, and subject-verb agreement. Suggestions: Remove fillers, use 'people tend to' for tendency, ensure verbs agree with their subjects, and finish lists or omit trailing conjunctions.