Emails— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cải thiện rõ ràng và ngắn gọn câu trả lời, sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ, dùng câu chủ đề trực tiếp rồi bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể. Chú ý dùng liên từ để mạch lạc và thay thế "send send" bằng một từ, ví dụ: "rarely send emails"; dùng từ vựng phù hợp như "notifications" hoặc "messages"; giữ tối đa 3–4 câu.

Example: No, I rarely send emails because I don't have many important tasks that require it. Instead, I use social apps like Zalo or Instagram to send messages and notifications to friends and colleagues.

Suggestion: Cải thiện cấu trúc câu để trả lời trực tiếp (When + topic sentence), loại bỏ tiếng ậm ừ và lặp từ, nêu ví dụ cụ thể và cách hành động. Sửa ngữ pháp như "when others require it" và dùng từ phù hợp như "registration" hoặc "application"; giữ không quá 3 câu.

Example: I only send emails when an event requires registration, such as workshops or competitions. For example, organizers often ask me to confirm my participation by email and attach necessary documents.

Suggestion: Trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và lỗi phát âm viết như "is is"; dùng từ chính xác như "prevalent among workers" hoặc "professionals", và làm rõ vì sao bằng ví dụ cụ thể (ví dụ: official documents, reports). Viết câu ngắn, mạch lạc và dùng liên từ như "because" hoặc "since".

Example: Yes, I think email is common in China, especially among workers and professionals. They use it for official documents, reports and formal communication, while students prefer instant messaging apps.

Suggestion: Cho ý kiến trực tiếp, tránh tiếng ậm ừ, sửa ngữ pháp và dùng từ chính xác như "remain prevalent" hoặc "remain popular"; giải thích rõ vì sao bằng lý do cụ thể (tốc độ, tiện lợi, formal vs informal). Dùng 2–3 câu liên kết bằng "but" hoặc "however".

Example: I believe email will remain popular in the future, especially in the workplace. However, students will likely keep using faster social media for casual communication because it's more convenient and immediate.

× No, I rarely send emails because I don't have any important tasks enough to send send e-mail to others.

✓ No, I rarely send emails because I don't have important enough tasks to send emails to others.

The phrase 'any important tasks enough' has incorrect word order and quantifier use. Use 'important enough tasks' or 'tasks important enough' and plural 'emails'. Also remove duplicated 'send'. Suggestion: place 'enough' after the adjective it modifies: 'important enough tasks' or better 'important enough to send emails.'

× I usually use some social media like Zalo messengers or Instagram to send some tasks or some notification to my friends or my colleagues.

✓ I usually use social media like Zalo or Instagram to send messages or notifications to my friends or colleagues.

Incorrect preposition and word choice: 'Zalo messengers' is wrong; use the platform name 'Zalo'. 'Send some tasks' is inappropriate — use 'messages' or 'notifications'. Omit repeated 'some' and redundant 'my'. Use 'colleagues' without 'my' if context already clear. Also use plural 'notifications' to match general use.

× I only send e-mail when other requires such as a workshop which I party party take or uh uh com or a competitions because they require me to send them e-mail that I accept to join their.

✓ I only send emails when others require it, such as for a workshop I participate in or a competition because they require me to send an email to confirm my participation.

Multiple problems: subject-verb agreement ('other requires' -> 'others require' or 'when required'), incorrect verb forms ('party party take' -> 'participate in'), wrong article use ('a competitions' -> 'a competition'), and unclear clause at end ('send them e-mail that I accept to join their' -> 'send an email to confirm my participation'). Use 'confirm my participation' for clarity.

× Yes, yes I believe it. But I think that is is prevalent for worker rather than student like me because they have some important tasks or important paper to send their interior interior.

✓ Yes, I believe so. But I think it is more prevalent among workers than students like me because they have important tasks or documents to send internally.

Errors: duplicate 'is is', wrong noun forms ('worker' -> 'workers', 'student' -> 'students'), incorrect comparative structure ('rather than' -> 'than'), and wrong word choice ('paper' -> 'documents', 'interior interior' -> 'internally'). Use 'more prevalent among' to compare groups and plural nouns for general statements.

× I believe it will remain its, uh, prevalence in the future, but it just suitable for workplace rather than the other like a student because we want to use a quickly measures like umm, social medi media to.

✓ I believe it will remain prevalent in the future, but it is more suitable for the workplace than for students because we prefer to use quicker measures like social media.

Problems include incorrect pronoun 'its' after 'remain' (not needed), missing linking verb ('it just suitable' -> 'it is more suitable'), wrong comparative structure ('rather than the other like a student' -> 'than for students'), incorrect form 'quickly measures' -> 'quicker measures', and repetition 'social medi media' -> 'social media'. Use 'prefer to use' for clarity.