Talents— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Example: When I was young, I was good at beatboxing and really enjoyed learning it. However, I didn't continue practicing, so now I don't have any particular talent.

Suggestion: Answer the question directly with a clear topic sentence and avoid hesitation or incomplete sentences. Use linking words to explain your point logically.

Example: I developed my beatboxing talent when I was young, but I haven't mastered it recently. Although I study political science, I don't consider political analysis as a talent I have mastered yet.

Suggestion: Make your answer more coherent by using linking words and complete sentences. Provide specific reasons and avoid unclear abbreviations or incomplete thoughts.

Example: Yes, if I become a good political analyst, I believe I can contribute to my country's foreign relations. Egypt has strong connections with many countries, so my skills would be useful in maintaining and improving these ties.

Suggestion: Answer directly and clearly. Avoid irrelevant information and use linking words to explain differences between you and your family.

Example: No, my family members have different interests; most of them are leaning towards medicine, while I study political science.

× I was keen to learning beatbox but unfortunately I. Didn't continue on the learning process, but that was my talent.

✓ I was keen on learning beatbox but unfortunately I didn't continue the learning process, but that was my talent.

The phrase 'keen to learning' is incorrect; the correct form is 'keen on learning' because 'keen on' is followed by a gerund (-ing form). Also, 'continue on the learning process' should be 'continue the learning process' as 'continue' does not require 'on' here.

× If you consider political analysis is a talent, so I have a. Talent for sure 'cause my major is political science, but now I. I think I don't have any talent.

✓ If you consider political analysis a talent, then I have a talent for sure because my major is political science, but now I think I don't have any talent.

The sentence has redundant conjunctions and incorrect structure. 'If you consider political analysis is a talent' should be 'If you consider political analysis a talent' without 'is'. Also, 'so' is unnecessary after 'if' clause; 'then' is appropriate. The sentence was fragmented and needed to be combined properly.

× Yes, if I am a good political analysis so I think I would benefit my country BIC, AWS.

✓ Yes, if I am a good political analyst, I think I would benefit my country, Egypt.

'Political analysis' is a noun meaning the process, but the speaker means 'political analyst' (a person). Also, 'so' is unnecessary after 'if' clause. 'BIC, AWS' seems unclear or incorrect; assuming the country is Egypt as mentioned later, it is corrected accordingly.

× Egypt has a lot of. Good relations with another country, so I think I will.

✓ Egypt has a lot of good relations with other countries, so I think I will.

The phrase 'with another country' is less appropriate here; 'with other countries' is better to express multiple relations. Also, the sentence is incomplete; 'I think I will' is vague but kept as is due to lack of context.

× No, I love my family. It has a different pass from me, all members of my family at leaning towards medicine measure or something like that, but I'm a political science student.

✓ No, I love my family. They have different paths from me; all members of my family are leaning towards medicine or something like that, but I'm a political science student.

'It' is incorrect when referring to 'family' as a group; 'they' is correct. 'Pass' should be 'paths'. 'At leaning' is incorrect; it should be 'are leaning'. 'Medicine measure' is unclear; assumed to be 'medicine' only.