Talents— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant and provides some details, but it can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like repeating 'since childhood' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I am good at sports, particularly cricket and basketball. I have been playing these since childhood and have won gold medals in interschool competitions.

Suggestion: Try to make your sentences grammatically correct and more fluent. Avoid fragmented sentences and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, use singular/plural forms correctly and be specific.

Example: I mastered these sports when I was young. Since childhood, I have been playing regularly, which taught me discipline and loyalty towards the game.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to form complete sentences and connect your ideas logically. Explain clearly how your talent relates to your future work and avoid vague phrases like 'making them learn these boots'.

Example: Yes, I believe my talent will be useful in my future career. I want to become a sports teacher at a school, which will allow me to earn a living and share my passion and experiences with students.

Suggestion: Your answer has unclear parts and grammatical mistakes. Make sure to complete your sentences and clarify who else has the talent. Use linking words to explain the relationship and activities clearly.

Example: Yes, my brother has the same talent. Since childhood, he has taught me how to play these sports, and we often play together in the neighborhood park.

× Since childhood I am playing this physical sport and I have also played interschool and I've won gold medals.

✓ Since childhood I have been playing this physical sport and I have also played interschool and I've won gold medals.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'I am playing' to describe an action that started in the past and continues to the present. The present continuous tense 'am playing' is not appropriate here. Instead, the present perfect continuous tense 'have been playing' should be used to indicate an action that began in the past and is still ongoing.

× I mastered it when I was young.

✓ I mastered it when I was young.

This sentence is correct. The past tense 'mastered' is appropriately used to describe an action completed in the past.

× Since childhood I am playing this sports and I've learned how to. Be disciplined and loyal towards our game.

✓ Since childhood I have been playing this sport and I've learned how to be disciplined and loyal towards our game.

The phrase 'I am playing this sports' is incorrect because 'sports' is plural and the verb form does not match. Also, 'I am playing' should be 'I have been playing' to indicate an action started in the past and continuing. 'Sports' should be singular 'sport' here. The sentence fragment 'Be disciplined and loyal towards our game.' should be connected to the previous sentence and 'Be' should be lowercase 'be'.

× Yes, I believe my talent. I can be helpful in the future as my work. I can be a sports teacher. At school and it will help me to earn money and I can recall my memories. While making them learn these boots.

✓ Yes, I believe my talent can be helpful in my future work. I can be a sports teacher at school and it will help me earn money and recall my memories while teaching them these skills.

The original sentences are fragmented and have incorrect article usage and awkward phrasing. 'My future work' is better than 'the future as my work'. 'At school' should be connected to the previous sentence. 'Making them learn these boots' is unclear and likely a misuse of words; 'teaching them these skills' is more appropriate. Articles and sentence structure have been corrected for clarity.

× Yes, my brother and. Hawaii has a same talent becauses. Since childhood, he taught me how to play this sport and we are playing together in a neighborhood park.

✓ Yes, my brother and I have the same talent because since childhood, he taught me how to play this sport and we play together in a neighborhood park.

The sentence has pronoun errors and awkward phrasing. 'My brother and Hawaii has' is incorrect; it should be 'my brother and I have'. 'A same talent' is incorrect; 'the same talent' is correct. 'Becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'. The verb tense 'we are playing' is better as 'we play' for habitual action.