Advertisement— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时应避免语法错误，如“made any deep impression”应为“made a deep impression”。句子结构需更自然流畅，避免重复“when I was a child”。建议增加连接词使表达更连贯。

Example: Yes, when I was a child, a public service advertisement made a deep impression on me because it told a touching story about a father and son. It reminded me of the importance of spending more time with my parents.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法和用词错误，如“say some advertising on bars”应为“see some advertisements on buses”。句子不完整且表达不清晰，建议使用完整句子并具体描述。

Example: Yes, I often see many advertisements on buses and trains. Most of them are related to health care, but I usually don't pay much attention to them.

Suggestion: 回答中语法错误较多，如“it always have”应为“it always has”，句子结构混乱。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

Example: Not really. I like public service advertisements because they usually have important messages and are educational. However, I don't like commercial advertisements.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误，如“advertisements always tells”应为“advertisements always tell”。建议使用连接词如“because”或“for example”更自然地连接句子。

Example: I like public service advertisements because they usually have important and educational messages. For example, some advertisements tell touching stories that are very meaningful.

Suggestion: 回答表达基本清楚，但语法和用词需改进，如“my character was dead”应为“my character dies”，句子应更连贯。建议使用连接词使表达更自然。

Example: Yes, I often see advertisements on my phone, especially when I play games. When my character dies, I have to watch an ad to continue playing, which can be annoying. However, I understand that these ads help the developers earn money.

× a public service advertisement made any deep impression on me.

✓ a public service advertisement made a deep impression on me.

这里的any用法不正确，应该用a来表示肯定句中的单数名词。

× and accompanied them when I was a child.

✓ and accompanied them.

句子中时间状语“when I was a child”位置不当，且“accompanied them”缺少主语，应改为“and accompanied them”作为并列谓语。

× I always say some advertising on bars.

✓ I always see some advertising on buses.

动词应为see而非say，且“bars”应为“buses”，表示交通工具上的广告。

× Most of them is the advertisement related to health care, so I don't remember it.

✓ Most of them are advertisements related to health care, so I don't remember them.

主语为复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式are，且advertisement应为复数advertisements，代词it应为them。

× If it's public service advertisement I would like it because it always have important significance and easy is educational and the story is must be touching.

✓ If it's a public service advertisement, I would like it because it always has important significance, is easy to understand, educational, and the story must be touching.

缺少冠词a，动词have应为第三人称单数has，表达“容易理解”应为“is easy to understand”，句子结构混乱需调整。

× But I don't like the commercial advertisement.

✓ But I don't like commercial advertisements.

此处应使用复数形式advertisements，表示一般意义上的商业广告。

× I like public service advertisement because they usually have important messages and educational and for example, some advertisements always tells a story.

✓ I like public service advertisements because they usually have important messages and are educational. For example, some advertisements always tell a story.

advertisement应为复数advertisements，谓语动词tells应为tell，且句子中缺少连词和谓语动词。

× It's very touching and meaningful.

✓ It is very touching and meaningful.

缩写形式无误，此句无明显语法错误。此处可视为确认无误。

× I often see advertisements on my phone, especially when I play a game and my character was dead.

✓ I often see advertisements on my phone, especially when I play a game and my character dies.

时态应保持一致，描述游戏中角色死亡应使用一般现在时dies。

× So I was so annoyed with that.

✓ So I am so annoyed with that.

描述当前感受应使用现在时am，而非过去时was。

× But I know they earn money through.

✓ But I know they earn money through advertisements.

句子不完整，缺少介词宾语，需补充through后面的内容。