Advertisement— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答直接并能表达印象，但细节不够具体，句子略显重复且有语法小错误（如 Now Beijing 品牌名、slogan 的使用）。建议在主题句后补充具体细节（描述广告内容、为什么印象深刻、记得哪句口号），并用一两个连接词使逻辑更连贯。注意冠词和单复数等基本语法。

Example: Yes. When I was a child, a health-product commercial called "Now Beijing" impressed me. It showed a cheerful family using the tonic every day and included a catchy slogan that everyone remembered. Because the song was simple and repeated often, it stayed in my head for years. As a result, I still associate that melody with traditional health remedies.

Suggestion: 回答意思明确但有语法和词汇错误（如 advertisement 单复数、trends 用法不当），信息也较笼统。建议先给主题句，再用具体例子说明（哪些类型、位置、频率），并用连接词如 "for example" 或 "for instance" 使句子更流畅。

Example: Yes, I often see advertisements on public transport. For example, there are large posters for wine brands on trains and digital screens in subway stations. I also notice bus-side ads for local services, so advertisements are very common on the way I travel.

Suggestion: 回答表达了两面观点，结构合理但语言稍显口语化与重复。建议用更自然的表达并提供一具体例子说明何时令人恼火、何时有用，使用连接词如 "however" 或 "on the other hand" 增强逻辑。

Example: I have mixed feelings about advertisements. On the one hand, too many intrusive ads can be annoying and interrupt what I'm doing. On the other hand, some ads introduce useful products I wouldn't otherwise know about, so they can be informative.

Suggestion: 回答清晰并给出原因，但重复（teach us... teach us）和语法问题（this advertisements）影响流畅度。建议用更丰富词汇描述（e.g. tutorial, demonstration, step-by-step guidance），并增加具体例子（哪类妆容或哪个博主）。保持句子数量不超过五句。

Example: I prefer tutorial-style ads, especially makeup demonstrations. These ads show step-by-step techniques and explain which brushes and products to use, so I can try the look myself. For example, a short video that teaches a natural evening look is very helpful.

Suggestion: 回答内容完整但有多处语法与词汇错误（could vs can, advertisements 单复数、一致性问题），句子有些重复且“I feel very fresh”用法不自然。建议先给主题句，再用具体平台和广告形式举例，说明何时有用并用连接词如 "however" 或 "also"。修改结尾为更自然的感受表达。

Example: Yes, I see ads on my phone and computer all the time, especially on websites and social media like Facebook and TikTok. Many are short video ads or banner ads that pop up during browsing. While some ads are annoying and interrupt what I'm doing, others introduce interesting new products that I might try.

× I can see many advertisement on trends such as wine and I could also see the advertisement on the subway or on the bus.

✓ I can see many advertisements on trains, such as ads for wine, and I can also see advertisements on the subway or on the bus.

原句中 “many advertisement” 使用单数与复数修饰词不一致，应为复数 “advertisements”。另外句中 “trends” 用词不当，应为 “trains”（火车）；为保持并列结构一致，把动词时态统一为一般现在时 “can”。建议注意名词的单复数形式和并列部分动词时态一致。

× I can see many advertisement on trends such as wine and I could also see the advertisement on the subway or on the bus.

✓ I can see many advertisements on trains, such as ads for wine, and I can also see advertisements on the subway or on the bus.

原句中使用了错误的介词/词：应为 “on trains” 表示在火车上，而不是 “on trends”。另外使用 “ads for wine” 比 “advertisement on trends such as wine” 更自然。注意介词与名词搭配。

× Yes, I could see advertisements everywhere, especially on the website or the social media such as Facebook, Tik Toks.

✓ Yes, I can see advertisements everywhere, especially on websites or social media such as Facebook and TikTok.

原句中 “the website” 不应使用定冠词且应为复数 “websites”；“the social media” 也不需要定冠词，且平台名 TikTok 为单数形式且通常写作 TikTok，不加复数。还将过去式 “could” 改为一般现在时 “can” 与上下文一致。

× It's hard to say because sometimes advertisements everywhere will make me feel annoying, but sometimes I can learn a new product from the advertisements.

✓ It's hard to say because sometimes advertisements everywhere make me feel annoyed, but sometimes I can learn about a new product from advertisements.

原句中形容词/副词使用错误：应使用形容词 “annoyed” 表示“我感到烦恼”，而不是现在分词 “annoying” （表示广告令人烦）；另外习惯搭配是 “learn about a product” 或 “learn of a product”，不能直接说 “learn a new product”。去掉重复的定冠词使表达更自然。

× I like watching some advertisement about makeup tutorials because this advertisements teach us how to make up better and teach us how to use the tools step by step.

✓ I like watching some advertisements about makeup tutorials because these advertisements teach us how to apply makeup better and how to use the tools step by step.

原句中 “some advertisement” 应为复数 “some advertisements”；“this advertisements” 主语和指示词不一致，应为复数指示词 “these”。另外将 “make up” 作为动词短语改为 “apply makeup”，更地道。保持主谓一致。

× Yes, there is a very famous advertisement about a health product called Now Beijing. I think every Chinese can recite its slogan, which stuck in my mind for many years.

✓ Yes, there is a very famous advertisement for a health product called Now Beijing. I think every Chinese can recite its slogan, which has stuck in my mind for many years.

原句中时态问题：从句 “which stuck in my mind for many years” 应用现在完成时 “has stuck”，表示从过去持续到现在的影响。另 “advertisement about a health product” 更常用表述为 “advertisement for a health product”。

× I like watching some advertisement about makeup tutorials because this advertisements teach us how to make up better and teach us how to use the tools step by step.

✓ I like watching some advertisements about makeup tutorials because these advertisements teach us how to apply makeup better and how to use the tools step by step.

原句中动词短语 “make up” 在此处作为动词可以使用，但更自然的表达是 “apply makeup”。同时注意动名词/动词搭配和主谓一致，使用复数指示词 “these”。