Advertisement— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答需要更直接并用更清晰的句子结构表达观点；避免语法错误和冗长表达，提供一两条具体细节支持你的观点。例如说明哪类广告、什么时候看到、为什么不感兴趣。使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Example: Not really. As a child I focused on my books and rarely paid attention to adverts. For example, I remember ignoring colourful cereal ads because I preferred reading science books. In short, adverts never made a lasting impression on me.

Suggestion: 回答应更符合逻辑並使用恰当词汇，避免不自然或错误的比喻（如 “invading my screams and my war”）。直接描述看到广告的频率、位置及你的感受，并用连接词解释原因。

Example: Yes, I see many adverts on buses and trains, especially posters and digital screens. They are often crowded and distracting, which annoys me because I prefer a calm environment when commuting.

Suggestion: 避免情绪化或极端的表述，改用更中性的语言并给出具体原因。说明广告如何影响你（例如分心、打扰阅读或休息），並使用一到两个连接词使回答更流畅。

Example: Not really. I prefer quiet and solitude, so loud or intrusive adverts bother me. For example, pop-up videos or loud announcements interrupt my reading and make it hard to relax.

Suggestion: 问题要求说出你喜欢哪类广告，回答却在重复不喜欢。应该直接说明如果喜欢，应举例说明哪种广告（例如简洁的信息性广告、创意短片）并解释原因；保持句子简短并使用恰当词汇。

Example: I don't really like most ads, but if I had to choose, I prefer short, informative ads that give clear details about products. For example, a concise tech ad that explains features and price is useful to me.

Suggestion: 用正确的语法表达频率与感受，避免重复和不自然短语（如 “these kinds of acts”）。提供具体例子（如弹出窗口、视频广告），并说明它们如何影响你（比如打断工作或学习）。

Example: Yes, I see many ads online, such as pop-ups and autoplay videos. They often interrupt my work or study, which is frustrating because I like to keep my schedule uninterrupted.

× Not really, I usually connect them even as a child I just focus on my books because I have a huge search for knowledge and I think the acts usually useless information, not food for thought so I tend to ignore them.

✓ Not really. Even as a child I usually ignored them; I just focused on my books because I had a huge appetite for knowledge, and I thought the ads usually contained useless information, not food for thought, so I tended to ignore them.

句子结构混乱，包含多个并列和从句但缺少合适的连接词和标点，时态不一致（现在时与过去时混用）。建议将句子拆分或用分号/逗号和连接词连接，统一使用过去时态以符合“when you were a child”的时间背景，并用更准确的词（ads, appetite for knowledge）。

× Yes, it seems advertisements are everywhere especially on this public transportation while I'm organized person.

✓ Yes, advertisements seem to be everywhere, especially on public transportation, while I'm an organized person.

原句时态与表达不一致且缺少冠词“an”。根据上下文应使用一般现在时描述事实“ads are everywhere”。另外“public transportation”前不需要“this”。

× So it seems this advertisement feel like chaos invading my screams and my war, which really may make me annoyed.

✓ So it seems these advertisements feel like chaos invading my space and my life, which really makes me annoyed.

原句用词不当（screams, war 不合语境），单复数不一致（this advertisement ... feel）。改为复数和更合适的名词“space”及“life”，并调整动词为单数第三人称形式“makes”。

× Of course not, I hate them. Well, I'm a fan of solitude. It allows me to escape from the chaos of the city. But it seems these kinds of advertisements feel like chaos invading my war and it really disrupting the order of my life.

✓ Of course not, I hate them. Well, I'm a fan of solitude. It allows me to escape from the chaos of the city. But these kinds of advertisements feel like chaos invading my life and they really disrupt the order of my life.

原句中“it really disrupting”缺少谓语形式，应为“they really disrupt”或“it really disrupts”。此外将“invading my war”替换为更合适的“invading my life”。

× Well, to be honest, I don't enjoy watching these kinds of advertisements any more because I feel it is kind of useless information, not what foresaw and I don't want to draw my attention on these kinds of information anymore. It is a kind of waste my time.

✓ Well, to be honest, I don't enjoy watching these kinds of advertisements anymore because I feel they are kind of useless information, not something worth my attention, and I don't want to draw my attention to this kind of information anymore. It's a kind of waste of my time.

错误包括动词和短语搭配（draw attention to），代词指代不当（it → they），以及名词短语缺少介词（waste of my time）。建议使用固定搭配“draw attention to”、“waste of time”，并保持代词与先行词数一致。

× Definitely, it really make me annoy and disturbs me. I'm an organized person so I prefer to have everything planned out in advance, but these kinds of acts, I mean constant acts, feel like the unexpected surprises popping up everywhere which make me feel annoying.

✓ Definitely, it really makes me annoyed and disturbs me. I'm an organized person so I prefer to have everything planned out in advance, but these kinds of ads, I mean constant ads, are like unexpected surprises popping up everywhere which make me feel annoyed.

原句动词形式错误（make → makes）和形容词/副词用法混淆（make me annoy → make me annoyed）。此外“acts”用词不当，应为“ads”。“popping up”用作现在分词短语需与主句搭配，保持“annoyed”作为形容词。