Swimming— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to use simple, correct sentences and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details with connectors like 'because' or 'so'.

Example: Yes, I like swimming very much because it helps me relax. Whenever I visit a water park, I enjoy swimming there. However, I am still learning and usually wear a life jacket for safety. I try to practice swimming whenever I get the chance.

Suggestion: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to use correct tenses and avoid redundancy. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to explain your points clearly. Also, be concise and avoid unnecessary words.

Example: Yes, I find learning to swim a bit difficult because I have been practicing for only a few years. However, I try to improve my skills whenever I get the chance. Swimming is an important skill that everyone should learn.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but can be improved by using better linking words and more precise vocabulary. For example, use 'because' to explain reasons and 'also' to add information. Try to avoid repeating similar ideas and keep sentences clear and concise.

Example: In my country, people usually swim in nearby swimming pools or rivers because they are easily accessible and safe. Many also prefer beaches since they offer a refreshing environment and beautiful scenery.

Suggestion: Your answer covers the main points but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct comparative forms and linking words like 'while' or 'however' to contrast ideas. Also, be careful with subject-verb agreement and sentence structure.

Example: There are many differences between swimming in a pool and in the sea. Swimming in a pool is safer and the environment is controlled, which is good for beginners because they can leave the pool anytime if they feel uncomfortable. However, swimming in the sea can be dangerous due to unpredictable waves and strong currents that may pull swimmers deeper.

× Yes, I usually prefer swimming whenever I went to a water park as it is a really nice experience.

✓ Yes, I usually prefer swimming whenever I go to a water park as it is a really nice experience.

The sentence mixes present tense 'usually prefer' with past tense 'went'. To maintain consistency, 'went' should be changed to present tense 'go' because the action is habitual.

× I mostly use life jacket as I said before.

✓ I mostly use a life jacket as I said before.

The phrase 'use life jacket' is missing the article 'a' before 'life jacket'. Also, 'life jacket' is a countable noun and requires an article here.

× So I am still learning swimming.

✓ So I am still learning to swim.

The verb 'learn' is followed by the infinitive form 'to swim', not the gerund 'swimming' in this context.

× Yes, I found it a bit difficult to learn how to swim as I'm practicing it from a few years.

✓ Yes, I have found it a bit difficult to learn how to swim as I've been practicing it for a few years.

The sentence incorrectly uses simple past 'found' and present continuous 'I'm practicing' with 'from a few years'. Present perfect and present perfect continuous tenses are appropriate here to indicate an action continuing up to now.

× I when whenever I get a chance I try to learn and develop my skill so I can be a good swimmer.

✓ Whenever I get a chance, I try to learn and develop my skills so I can be a good swimmer.

The phrase 'I when whenever' is redundant and incorrect. Also, 'skill' should be plural 'skills' as it refers to multiple abilities.

× It is an also an important skill that everyone should know.

✓ It is also an important skill that everyone should know.

The phrase 'an also an' is incorrect; 'also' should not be preceded by 'an'. The correct phrase is 'also an important skill'.

× In my country, people commonly like to go for swimming in swimming pools or rivers nearby as it is easily accessible and safe.

✓ In my country, people commonly like to go swimming in swimming pools or nearby rivers as it is easily accessible and safe.

The phrase 'go for swimming' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go swimming'. Also, 'rivers nearby' should be 'nearby rivers' for correct adjective placement.

× Many also prefer to visit beaches as it has a refreshing environment as well as beautiful scenery for swimming.

✓ Many also prefer to visit beaches as they have a refreshing environment as well as beautiful scenery for swimming.

The pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to 'beaches' which is plural; therefore, 'they' should be used.

× There is a lot of difference between these two as swimming in the pool is more safer and have controlled environment for it is good for beginners.

✓ There is a lot of difference between these two as swimming in the pool is safer and has a controlled environment, which is good for beginners.

The phrase 'more safer' is incorrect; 'safer' is the correct comparative form. Also, 'have' should be 'has' to agree with singular subject 'swimming in the pool'. The sentence structure is improved by adding 'which' to connect ideas.

× If they are feeling uncomfortable, they can get out of the pool any at any time.

✓ If they are feeling uncomfortable, they can get out of the pool at any time.

The phrase 'any at any time' is redundant and incorrect; 'at any time' is the correct expression.

× There are unpredictable ways and strong currents which is sometimes pull swimmer deeper into the water.

✓ There are unpredictable waves and strong currents which sometimes pull swimmers deeper into the water.

The word 'ways' is incorrect; it should be 'waves'. The verb 'is' should be 'which sometimes pull' to agree with plural subject 'waves and currents'. Also, 'swimmer' should be plural 'swimmers' to match the context.