Swimming— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: คำตอบของคุณไม่ชัดเจนและมีความสับสนในการใช้ภาษา ควรตอบตรงคำถามและใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์ พร้อมหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำและคำที่ไม่จำเป็น

Example: No, I don't like swimming. When I was young, I used to play near the river with my friends, but I never really enjoyed swimming.

Suggestion: คำตอบมีความไม่สมบูรณ์และใช้คำซ้ำ ควรจัดระเบียบประโยคให้ชัดเจนและใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้คำตอบสมเหตุสมผลมากขึ้น

Example: Yes, learning to swim is very difficult for me because I have no skills and I feel nervous around water, especially rivers, which makes me afraid.

Suggestion: คำตอบควรมีโครงสร้างที่ชัดเจนและใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงความคิด รวมถึงใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมและถูกต้อง

Example: People in my country have different preferences for swimming depending on where they live. For example, I live in a mountainous area, so I don't like swimming in rivers because it makes me feel scared.

Suggestion: คำตอบควรมีความสมบูรณ์และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเปรียบเทียบอย่างชัดเจน รวมถึงใช้คำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้องและเหมาะสม

Example: In my opinion, swimming in a pool is comfortable and safe because we can control our movements easily. However, swimming in the sea is dangerous and unsafe due to strong currents and waves.

× Since I was young I have been.

✓ Since I was young, I have been swimming.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb. Adding 'swimming' completes the present perfect continuous tense, indicating an action started in the past and continuing to the present.

× In beside of the river and we play, we play with my friend in the river, but apparent apparently, uh.

✓ Beside the river, we play with my friend in the river, but apparently, uh.

The phrase 'In beside of' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'beside' without 'in' or 'of'. Also, 'apparent' should be 'apparently' as an adverb.

× Yes, very difficult, uh, because I don't have any skills swimming, uh, and I feel nervous when I see uh, water or river make me fear and uh, I not.

✓ Yes, it is very difficult because I don't have any swimming skills, and I feel nervous when I see water or a river; it makes me afraid.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' after 'Yes' to form a complete sentence. 'Skills swimming' should be 'swimming skills'. 'Make me fear' should be 'makes me afraid' to agree with the singular subject and use correct adjective.

× Some people in my country like to swimming, but some don't like swimming, uh, depending on the, the, the area they are living.

✓ Some people in my country like swimming, but some don't, depending on the area they live in.

'Like to swimming' is incorrect; it should be 'like swimming'. Also, 'the area they are living' should be 'the area they live in' for correct preposition use and natural phrasing.

× Uh, me, I live in the mountain area so I don't like to swim in the river. Make me feel fair.

✓ I live in the mountain area, so I don't like to swim in the river. It makes me feel scared.

'Make me feel fair' is incorrect; likely intended 'makes me feel fear' or 'scared'. Also, 'me, I live' is redundant; 'I live' suffices.

× In my opinion, I think swimming in the pool, uh, make me comfortable and feel safe and we can control the, the body and uh, but swimming in the sea is very dangerous and unsafety and made me.

✓ In my opinion, I think swimming in the pool makes me comfortable and feel safe, and we can control our body. However, swimming in the sea is very dangerous and unsafe and scares me.

'Make me comfortable' should be 'makes me comfortable' to agree with singular subject. 'Unsafety' is not a correct word; 'unsafe' is the correct adjective. 'Made me' is incomplete; 'scares me' or 'frightens me' is appropriate.