Friends— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is quite long and a bit unclear in parts. Try to be more concise and clear, and avoid redundancy. Also, use correct tenses and grammar. For example, say 'I have had a friend since 6th grade' instead of 'that month since I was in my 6th grade'.

Example: Yes, I have had a close friend since 6th grade. We attended coaching classes together for a few years, and since then, we've been inseparable. Our families have known each other since we were children.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but contains some unclear phrases like 'reminisce eyes on our memories' and 'Ann just me in each others company'. Try to use clearer expressions and correct grammar. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: I usually go out with my friends to explore coffee shops nearby in the evenings. I enjoy spending peaceful time with them, reminiscing about our childhood and college days. Just being in each other's company is very relaxing.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical errors. Avoid repeating phrases unnecessarily. Try to give a clear and direct answer with proper sentence structure.

Example: We usually meet at a coffee shop called Wild Sugar, which is near my house. It's a nice place where we can relax and unwind.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and contains many errors. Try to speak clearly and organise your ideas logically. Use linking words to connect your points and avoid incomplete sentences.

Example: I don't go out with my friends very often. Usually, we meet during weekends to catch up, talk about life, the world, and future opportunities.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and has many grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct vocabulary. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and explain your points with examples.

Example: Although I don't meet my friends often because of my busy schedule, they are very important to me. They help me grow as a person and provide a safe space where I can share my thoughts honestly.

Suggestion: Your answer has some unclear phrases and grammatical errors. Try to express your preference clearly and use linking words to explain your reasons.

Example: I usually prefer spending time with one close friend rather than a group. This way, I feel more comfortable sharing my feelings honestly.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but contains some awkward phrases like 'sense of belonging Ness'. Try to use correct vocabulary and sentence structure for clarity.

Example: Yes, I often invite my friends to my home. I enjoy hosting them because it creates a sense of belonging and comfort, making them feel at home.

× Yes, I do have a friend that month since I was in my 6th grade, we have been going to abandon coaching together and we stuck around for two to three years there and ever since then we've been inseparable.

✓ Yes, I have had a friend since that month when I was in my 6th grade. We have been going to Abandon coaching together and we stayed there for two to three years, and ever since then we've been inseparable.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'do have' and 'stuck around' which are not appropriate past tense forms here. 'Do have' is unnecessary and 'stuck around' should be 'stayed' to correctly express past action. Also, the sentence structure is run-on and needs to be split for clarity.

× Our families know each other since we were kids.

✓ Our families have known each other since we were kids.

The verb tense should be present perfect 'have known' to indicate an action that started in the past and continues to the present. 'Know' in simple present is incorrect here.

× I usually go out and check the coffee places around our vicinity during the evenings.

✓ I usually go out and check the coffee places in our vicinity during the evenings.

The preposition 'in' is correct to indicate location within an area. 'Around our vicinity' is redundant and incorrect.

× I actually like having a slow and peaceful time with them where we reminisce eyes on our memories back from our childhood or our college days.

✓ I actually like having a slow and peaceful time with them where we reminisce about our memories from our childhood or college days.

The phrase 'reminisce eyes on' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'reminisce about' to indicate recalling past memories.

× Ann just me in each others company just enjoying it.

✓ And just me in each other's company, just enjoying it.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks proper conjunction and possessive form. 'Ann' should be 'And', and 'each others' should be 'each other's' to show possession.

× As I already mentioned, we usually need each other at for particular coffee shop that is.

✓ As I already mentioned, we usually meet each other at a particular coffee shop.

'Need each other at for' is incorrect. The correct verb is 'meet', and the preposition 'at' is used with 'a particular coffee shop'.

× Newer to our house that is known as the wild sugar.

✓ Near our house, there is a coffee shop known as The Wild Sugar.

'Newer' is incorrect; the correct word is 'near' to indicate proximity. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs restructuring.

× Usually meet there and unwind.

✓ We usually meet there and unwind.

The sentence lacks a subject. Adding 'We' completes the sentence structure.

× I would say no, I don't go out much often with my friends, I usually get time to chill with them only during the weekends and I we can usually consist of just catching up with each other parking bout live talking about.

✓ I would say no, I don't go out very often with my friends. I usually get time to chill with them only during the weekends, and we usually just catch up with each other, talking about life.

'Much often' is incorrect; 'very often' is correct. The sentence is run-on and contains unclear phrases like 'parking bout live' which should be 'talking about life'. Splitting into sentences improves clarity.

× World talking about future and talking about future opportunities in general.

✓ We talk about the world, the future, and future opportunities in general.

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks a subject and verb. Adding 'We talk about' completes the sentence.

× Though I don't meet my fence early often due to my hectic schedule, fans are really important to me.

✓ Though I don't meet my friends very often due to my hectic schedule, friends are really important to me.

'Fence early' and 'fans' are incorrect words; the correct word is 'friends'. Also, 'very often' is the correct adverbial phrase.

× Me grow as a person in there.

✓ They help me grow as a person.

The original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. Adding 'They help' and correcting the structure makes it correct.

× I cannot even begin to explain they are a safe space to me.

✓ I cannot even begin to explain; they are a safe space for me.

The sentence is a run-on and needs a semicolon or period to separate two independent clauses. Also, 'to me' should be 'for me' to indicate benefit.

× They help me bring about how to side which I don't usually.

✓ They help me bring out the positive side which I don't usually show.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Bring about how to side' is incorrect; the corrected sentence clarifies the intended meaning.

× I am a person who usually would like to spend my time with 1 friend.

✓ I am a person who usually likes to spend my time with one friend.

The verb 'would like' should be 'likes' to agree with the singular subject. Also, '1' should be written as 'one' in formal writing.

× One choose trained by then or group of friends because I feel I can put my feelings out there.

✓ I choose one friend rather than a group of friends because I feel I can put my feelings out there.

The original sentence is unclear and contains errors like 'choose trained by then'. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects pronoun use.

× And be more. Honest and truthful to a close friend rather than having a group of friends who aren't that close to me.

✓ And be more honest and truthful to a close friend rather than having a group of friends who aren't that close to me.

The period after 'more' is incorrect and breaks the sentence. Removing it corrects the sentence structure.

× Oh yes, I do invite my friends to your home.

✓ Oh yes, I do invite my friends to my home.

'Your home' is incorrect as the speaker is talking about their own home. It should be 'my home'.

× I love to host my friends because it gives me an also them a sense of belonging Ness.

✓ I love to host my friends because it gives me and them a sense of belongingness.

'An also them' is incorrect; it should be 'me and them'. 'Belonging Ness' should be one word 'belongingness'.

× It gives a sense of comfort and I just like making them feel like home.

✓ It gives a sense of comfort, and I just like making them feel at home.

The phrase 'feel like home' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'feel at home'.