Friends— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: In your answer, try to avoid redundancy and improve grammar. For example, say "I have a friend named Tina whom I've known since 8th grade. She is very trustworthy and loyal." This makes your answer more natural and effective.

Example: Yes, I have a friend named Tina whom I've known since 8th grade. She has always been very trustworthy and loyal.

Suggestion: Try to make your sentences clearer and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas, for example: "We usually hang out at each other's houses, where we watch movies and enjoy snacks together."

Example: We usually hang out at each other's houses, where we watch movies and enjoy snacks together.

Suggestion: Avoid repeating words and improve sentence structure. Use linking words like 'besides' and be specific. For example: "We often meet at school, but besides that, we also meet at our homes to work on school projects together."

Example: We often meet at school, but besides that, we also meet at our homes to work on school projects together.

Suggestion: Try to make your answer clearer and more concise. Use linking words like 'however' or 'usually'. For example: "It depends on our schedules. Usually, we go out only when there is something important to do or discuss."

Example: It depends on our schedules. Usually, we go out only when there is something important to do or discuss.

Suggestion: Improve grammar and clarity. Use linking words to organize ideas. For example: "Friends are very important to me because I enjoy spending time with people my age who understand me. Besides, we share similar interests and have stimulating conversations."

Example: Friends are very important to me because I enjoy spending time with people my age who understand me. Besides, we share similar interests and have stimulating conversations.

Suggestion: Clarify your ideas and correct grammar. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so'. For example: "I prefer spending time with one friend because I value loyalty more than quantity. Sometimes, in a group, I feel judged for small things."

Example: I prefer spending time with one friend because I value loyalty more than quantity. Sometimes, in a group, I feel judged for small things.

Suggestion: Make your answer more fluent and avoid pauses. For example: "Yes, I would invite my friends to my home if I trust them. Even though my house is small and not very organized, I feel comfortable inviting them."

Example: Yes, I would invite my friends to my home if I trust them. Even though my house is small and not very organized, I feel comfortable inviting them.

× ...and until now she's has been a very good friend...

✓ ...and until now she has been a very good friend...

The phrase 'she's has been' incorrectly combines 'she's' (she is) and 'has'. The correct form is 'she has been' for present perfect tense with third person singular subject.

× ...she's very trustworthy and loyalty.

✓ ...she's very trustworthy and loyal.

The word 'loyalty' is a noun, but an adjective 'loyal' is needed to describe 'she'. Using the adjective form correctly modifies the subject.

× We do a little bit of everything an most, most of the time we would spend.

✓ We do a little bit of everything and most of the time we spend time together.

The sentence has a typo 'an' instead of 'and' and an incomplete phrase 'we would spend'. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects the conjunction and verb usage.

× We will spend time to hang out with each other at their houses...

✓ We will spend time hanging out with each other at their houses...

The verb 'spend' is followed by a gerund (-ing form), not an infinitive with 'to'. So 'spend time hanging out' is correct.

× ...watching movie an enjoying snacks.

✓ ...watching movies and enjoying snacks.

The conjunction 'an' is a typo and should be 'and'. Also, 'movie' should be plural 'movies' to match the context.

× ...but beside that we meet each other at our our very own houses...

✓ ...but besides that we meet each other at our very own houses...

The correct preposition is 'besides' meaning 'in addition to', not 'beside' which means 'next to'. Also, 'our' is repeated mistakenly.

× ...spend the evening watching movie an enjoying snacks.

✓ ...spend the evening watching movies and enjoying snacks.

'Movie' should be plural 'movies' because it refers to multiple instances or general activity.

× ...we would go to the ranch house and do it together.

✓ ...we would go to the ranch house and do it together.

No correction needed here as the preposition 'to' is correctly used.

× It depends on our schedule and we will try to catch up with each other an understanding about it as well.

✓ It depends on our schedule and we try to catch up with each other and understand it as well.

The phrase 'will try' is acceptable but 'try' fits better with present habitual action. Also, 'an understanding' is incorrect; 'and understand' is correct.

× Plus it is not. Very often, I would say mostly only when they are very important thing that we need to do or we would want to talk about.

✓ Plus, it is not very often; I would say mostly only when there is a very important thing that we need to do or want to talk about.

The sentence has punctuation errors and missing words. 'There is' is needed before 'a very important thing'. Also, 'they are' is incorrect for singular 'thing'.

× To me fun is one of the most important part in my life because then I can enjoy and doing things with them like because they could understand since they are around my age and we would often get along very well.

✓ To me, fun is one of the most important parts of my life because I can enjoy doing things with them since they understand me and are around my age, so we often get along very well.

'Part' should be plural 'parts' to match 'one of the most'. 'Doing' should be parallel with 'enjoy' as 'enjoy doing'. The phrase 'like because' is awkward and redundant. 'They could understand' is better as 'they understand me'. Also, 'since they are around my age' is better connected with the rest of the sentence.

× Besides that, we can also do much stimulating and have similar interests.

✓ Besides that, we can also do many stimulating activities and have similar interests.

'Much' is used with uncountable nouns, but 'stimulating' here needs a noun like 'activities'. 'Many' is used with countable nouns.

× I prefer to spend time with one friend rather than with a very large global friends because I believe in loyalty rather than quantity.

✓ I prefer to spend time with one friend rather than with a very large group of friends because I believe in loyalty rather than quantity.

'Global friends' is incorrect; likely intended 'group of friends'. Also, 'friends' is plural and needs a collective noun.

× Because sometimes hanging out with a group of friends, I often filled charges for a minor action that I've done.

✓ Because sometimes when hanging out with a group of friends, I often feel charged for a minor action that I've done.

'Filled charges' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'feel charged' or 'feel blamed'. Also, the sentence structure is incomplete without 'when'.

× Yes, I would invite my friends to my home if I trusted him and also.

✓ Yes, I would invite my friends to my home if I trusted them as well.

'Him' is incorrect pronoun for plural 'friends'; 'them' is correct. Also, 'and also' is redundant and incomplete; 'as well' is better.

× Even though my house is not that big or. You know. Organize.

✓ Even though my house is not that big or, you know, organized.

'Organize' is a verb; the adjective 'organized' is needed to describe the house. Also, punctuation is corrected for clarity.