Friends— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is quite long and has some repetition and grammatical errors. Try to be more concise and correct, for example, avoid repeating words like 'pursuing' and use correct verbs like 'supports' instead of 'sports'. Also, break your answer into clear sentences with proper structure.

Example: Yes, I have a close friend named Nimrat whom I have known for 10 years. We studied together and are currently pursuing the same course. She always supports me in every situation.

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and has grammatical mistakes. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct verb forms. Also, avoid redundancy and be specific about activities you do with friends now and in the past.

Example: When we were in school, my friends and I used to do homework and attend tuition classes together. However, after finishing school, we rarely meet due to our busy schedules.

Suggestion: Your answer has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct prepositions and sentence structure. Also, try to be more natural and specific about the places you meet your friends.

Example: I usually meet my close friends at cafes, school, or at home. Among these, my favourite place to meet is at home.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Avoid unrelated words like 'Sports' at the beginning. Use correct articles and verb forms. Also, organise your answer logically and use linking words.

Example: Yes, I often go out with my friends because I am an extrovert and enjoy exploring new places and cafes. Recently, I also went on a trip with them.

Suggestion: Your answer shows good ideas but has grammatical mistakes and some awkward phrasing. Use correct verb agreement and avoid vague phrases like 'many more things'. Be more specific and concise.

Example: Friends are very important to me because they provide mental and physical support. I believe they are as important as family.

Suggestion: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'depends situation this patient'. Use correct sentence structure and be clear. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: It depends on the situation. Sometimes I prefer spending time with a group of friends, while other times I just need one close friend. However, most of the time, I spend time with one friend.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and awkward expressions like 'very happy at cloud 9'. Use correct verb forms and more natural phrases. Also, avoid redundancy.

Example: Of course, I love inviting my friends to my home. They get along well with my parents, who also like them a lot. I feel very happy when they visit.

× Of course, fortunately I have my close friend who I know from last 10 years as we studied together and now we're pursuing pursuing our course together and her name is Nimrat and she also sports me in every situation in my life.

✓ Of course, fortunately I have my close friend who I have known for the last 10 years as we studied together and now we're pursuing our course together and her name is Nimrat and she also supports me in every situation in my life.

The phrase 'know from last 10 years' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'for' to indicate duration. Also, 'sports me' is a wrong word choice; the correct verb is 'supports me'. The present perfect tense 'have known' is appropriate here to indicate an action continuing up to now.

× Well, honestly speaking there are various tasks to do with my friends as when we were in the school we spent time together, we did homework together and also join the tuition classes together.

✓ Well, honestly speaking there were various tasks to do with my friends as when we were in school we spent time together, did homework together and also joined the tuition classes together.

The sentence refers to past events, so past tense verbs should be used consistently: 'were', 'spent', 'did', and 'joined'. 'Join' should be in past tense 'joined' to match the past context.

× But after the completion of my +2 now sometimes we unable to met due to our hectic schedule.

✓ But after the completion of my +2, now sometimes we are unable to meet due to our hectic schedule.

The modal verb 'are' is missing before 'unable'. Also, 'met' is past tense; the base form 'meet' should be used after 'unable to'. The sentence needs 'are unable to meet' to be grammatically correct.

× Interestingly, there are various places on which I met my close ones, as in the cafes, in the school or in in home also, and my favorite place is our home.

✓ Interestingly, there are various places where I meet my close ones, such as cafes, school, or at home, and my favorite place is our home.

The phrase 'places on which I met' is awkward; 'places where I meet' is better. 'In the school' should be 'at school' or just 'school'. 'In in home' is incorrect; it should be 'at home'. Also, 'met' should be 'meet' if referring to habitual action.

× Sports as I am a extrovert personality and I am a person who always enjoy to explore new places, new cafes and recently I had also enjoyed one trip with my close ones.

✓ Sure, as I am an extrovert and a person who always enjoys exploring new places, new cafes, and recently I also enjoyed a trip with my close ones.

'Sports' is incorrect here; 'Sure' or 'Yes' fits better. 'A extrovert' should be 'an extrovert' due to vowel sound. 'Enjoy to explore' is incorrect; it should be 'enjoys exploring'. 'Had also enjoyed' is past perfect but simple past 'enjoyed' is sufficient here.

× Well, so this is a question which I admire and honestly speaking in my life close ones plays an important role as with the help of friends we can do ample of things as they help us, they give us mental and physical support and many more things.

✓ Well, this is a question which I admire and honestly speaking, in my life close ones play an important role as with the help of friends we can do ample things as they help us, give us mental and physical support and many more things.

'Close ones plays' is incorrect; 'close ones' is plural so the verb should be 'play'. 'Ample of things' is incorrect; it should be 'ample things' or 'a lot of things'.

× They are equal to our parents.

✓ They are equal to our parents.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× Well, it depends on the situation. Sometime it is useful to spend time with the group of friends and sometimes it is only need of 1 friend.

✓ Well, it depends on the situation. Sometimes it is useful to spend time with a group of friends and sometimes it is only the need of one friend.

'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'The group of friends' should be 'a group of friends' as it is not specific. 'Only need of 1 friend' should be 'only the need of one friend' for clarity and correctness.

× So it depends situation this patient, but most of the time I spend time with the only friend.

✓ So it depends on the situation, this is patient, but most of the time I spend time with only one friend.

The original sentence is unclear and has word order issues. 'Depends situation this patient' is incorrect; it should be 'depends on the situation'. 'The only friend' should be 'only one friend' for clarity.

× Of course I love to give invitation to my friends to my house as my friends are also good in nature and they usually met my parents also and my parents also admire them a lot.

✓ Of course, I love to invite my friends to my house as my friends are also good-natured and they usually meet my parents, and my parents also admire them a lot.

'Love to give invitation' is awkward; 'love to invite' is better. 'Good in nature' should be 'good-natured'. 'Usually met' should be 'usually meet' for present habitual action.

× So I will be very happy at cloud 9 if they will come to my home.

✓ So I will be very happy, on cloud nine, if they come to my home.

The phrase is 'on cloud nine', not 'at cloud 9'. Also, in conditional sentences, 'if they will come' should be 'if they come'.