Friends— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 답변이 매우 불명확하고 중복된 표현이 많습니다. 질문에 직접적으로 답하고, 친구와의 관계를 명확히 설명하는 문장을 구성하세요. 예를 들어, 친구의 이름, 나이 차이, 만난 시기 등을 간결하고 자연스럽게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Example: Yes, I have a friend named Sujin whom I have known since I was about four years old. She is a bit older than me, and we have been close ever since we met in childhood.

Suggestion: 답변이 다소 어색하고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 자신의 성격과 활동을 자연스럽게 연결하여 명확하게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다. 또한, 'courtyard'와 같은 단어를 정확히 사용하세요.

Example: I usually play physical games with my friends in the school courtyard because I am an extroverted person and enjoy active activities.

Suggestion: 답변이 중복되고 문장이 부자연스럽습니다. 장소와 만나는 방법을 명확하고 간결하게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다. 예를 들어, 'We often meet in front of our apartments because we live nearby. We also chat on our smartphones to arrange meetings.'처럼 말할 수 있습니다.

Example: We often meet in front of our apartments since we live close to each other. We also keep in touch through our smartphones to decide when to meet.

Suggestion: 답변이 중복되고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 자신의 선호를 명확히 표현하고, 친구들과 만나는 상황을 자연스럽게 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Example: I don't often go out with my friends because I prefer staying at home alone as it makes me feel comfortable. However, sometimes I chat with my friends on my smartphone and we meet up.

Suggestion: 답변이 불완전하고 문법적 오류가 많습니다. 친구의 중요성을 명확하고 완전한 문장으로 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Example: Friends are very important to me because humans are social beings and we can rely on our friends for support and companionship.

Suggestion: 답변이 불명확하고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 한 명과 시간을 보내는 이유를 명확하고 자연스럽게 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Example: I prefer spending time with one friend because it allows us to get closer, share information, and I feel more relaxed.

Suggestion: 답변이 혼란스럽고 문법적 오류가 많습니다. 친구를 집에 초대한 경험을 명확하고 간결하게 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Example: Yes, I invited four friends to my home when I was 13 years old because my family had just moved to a bigger house.

× I introduce my friends, she is Sujin, umm, she's my uh, older friend, uh, when I was young, uh, I met her first, umm, maybe 4-4 years old, umm, because she uh.

✓ I introduced my friend, she is Sujin. Umm, she's my older friend. When I was young, I met her first, maybe when I was 4 years old.

The verb 'introduce' should be in the past tense 'introduced' to match the past time frame indicated by 'when I was young'. Also, 'friends' should be singular 'friend' because the sentence refers to one person, Sujin.

× I introduce my friends, she is Sujin, umm, she's my uh, older friend, uh, when I was young, uh, I met her first, umm, maybe 4-4 years old, umm, because she uh.

✓ I introduced my friend, she is Sujin. Umm, she's my older friend. When I was young, I met her first, maybe when I was 4 years old.

The word 'friends' is plural but the sentence refers to one person, Sujin, so it should be singular 'friend'.

× We often meet in the front of our apartments because we live in we live in very near nearby, so we just talk with, we just talk on smartphone and we meet in time just come.

✓ We often meet in front of our apartments because we live very near each other, so we just talk on the smartphone and meet when we have time.

The phrase 'in the front of' should be 'in front of'. 'Very near nearby' is incorrect; it should be 'very near each other'. Also, 'talk with' is better as 'talk on the smartphone'. 'Meet in time just come' is unclear and corrected to 'meet when we have time'.

× No because I prefer staying at home alone because it's more it's making me feel comfortable.

✓ No, because I prefer staying at home alone since it makes me feel more comfortable.

The phrase 'it's more it's making me feel comfortable' is awkward and incorrect. It should be 'it makes me feel more comfortable' to express the idea clearly.

× But sometimes when I feel some lazy and bold I chat my friends with smartphone so we get together.

✓ But sometimes when I feel lazy and bold, I chat with my friends on the smartphone so we can get together.

The phrase 'chat my friends with smartphone' is incorrect. It should be 'chat with my friends on the smartphone'. Also, 'some lazy and bold' is incorrect; 'lazy and bold' is sufficient.

× Making precious friends is very important in our lives because human always makes relationships so we we can depend on our own friends.

✓ Making precious friends is very important in our lives because humans always make relationships so we can depend on our own friends.

The word 'human' should be plural 'humans' to agree with 'always make'. Also, 'makes' should be 'make' to agree with plural subject 'humans'.

× I prefer spending time with one friend because I want more minor group.

✓ I prefer spending time with one friend because I want a smaller group.

The phrase 'more minor group' is incorrect. 'Minor' is not used comparatively here; 'smaller' is the correct comparative adjective.

× It's more it's make us more close and get some information and make feel calm down.

✓ It helps us get closer, obtain some information, and feel calm.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'It's more it's make us more close' is incorrect; it should be 'It helps us get closer'. 'Make feel calm down' is incorrect; 'feel calm' is correct.

× Actually, I invited my friends in my home when I was 13 years old.

✓ Actually, I invited my friends to my home when I was 13 years old.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'invite someone to a place' is the correct usage.

× I invited four friends in our home because we moved.

✓ I invited four friends to our home because we moved.

The preposition 'in' should be 'to' when indicating the destination of an invitation.

× Our family moved to our home, then to very wide homes before then.

✓ Our family moved to our home, which was much bigger than our previous home.

The original sentence is unclear and awkward. 'Then to very wide homes before then' is incorrect. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and improves structure.