Friends— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Perbaiki kelancaran dan tata bahasa, serta gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami dan efektif. Hindari pengulangan kata dan gunakan linking words untuk menghubungkan ide.

Example: Yes, I have a friend named Yuda whom I've known since college. We started talking because we share a common interest in music.

Suggestion: Gunakan struktur kalimat yang lebih jelas dan tata bahasa yang benar. Hindari pengulangan dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren.

Example: I usually catch up with my friends during casual occasions, like having coffee or dinner together.

Suggestion: Perbaiki pengulangan dan tata bahasa, serta lengkapi jawaban agar lebih jelas dan alami. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk menghubungkan ide.

Example: It depends on our availability, but we mostly meet on Friday evenings after work, often at a bar.

Suggestion: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan kelancaran berbicara. Lengkapi kalimat agar lebih jelas dan gunakan kosakata yang tepat untuk menyampaikan ide secara efektif.

Example: Nowadays, I don't often meet my friends because I spend most of my time taking care of my son. However, I feel happy and relaxed doing so.

Suggestion: Hindari pengulangan dan kebingungan dalam berbicara. Gunakan kalimat yang jelas dan langsung untuk menyampaikan pendapat dengan efektif.

Example: Friends are very important to me because humans are social beings who need companionship.

Suggestion: Lengkapi jawaban dengan kalimat yang jelas dan lengkap. Hindari pengulangan dan gunakan struktur kalimat yang benar.

Example: I prefer to spend time catching up with one friend rather than a large group.

Suggestion: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan kelancaran berbicara. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami dan efektif untuk menjelaskan alasan dengan jelas.

Example: Not really, because my son was just born last month, so I dedicate most of my time to taking care of him and prefer not to have friends visit my house now.

Suggestion: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan kelancaran. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami dan lengkap untuk menjelaskan perbedaan dengan jelas.

Example: Absolutely. In the past, I often met friends in restaurants or coffee shops because those places were relaxing for us.

Suggestion: Perbaiki pengulangan dan tata bahasa. Lengkapi jawaban agar lebih jelas dan gunakan kosakata yang sesuai untuk menjelaskan alasan dengan efektif.

Example: I believe every place has its own atmosphere that attracts people depending on their mood. For example, when we want to have fun, we go to a bar.

× We start to have some conversation because we have the shared interest in music.

✓ We started to have some conversation because we have a shared interest in music.

The sentence describes a past event, so the verb 'start' should be in the past tense 'started'. Also, 'the shared interest' should be 'a shared interest' because it is not a specific known interest.

× There are a lot of things that I'm conduct with my friend, but the very simple thing is I go I I catch up with them in a casual occasions such as having coffee together or having a dinner.

✓ There are a lot of things that I do with my friend, but the simplest thing is I catch up with them on casual occasions such as having coffee together or having dinner.

The verb 'conduct' is incorrect here; 'do' is appropriate. 'In a casual occasions' should be 'on casual occasions' because we use 'on' with occasions. 'Having a dinner' should be 'having dinner' as 'dinner' is uncountable here.

× ...uh, oftenly we meet at the bar or.

✓ ...uh, we often meet at the bar or.

'Oftenly' is not a correct word; the correct adverb is 'often'. Also, adverbs like 'often' usually come before the main verb.

× Actually in the nowadays I'm not often to meet my friends because since I have a kid, umm, most all of most of my times is uh, for my son.

✓ Actually, nowadays I don't often meet my friends because since I have a kid, most of my time is for my son.

'In the nowadays' is incorrect; 'nowadays' is used without 'in the'. 'I'm not often to meet' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't often meet'. 'Most all of most of my times' is redundant; 'most of my time' is correct.

× And actually I'm quite happy because I can feel relaxed with my.

✓ And actually I'm quite happy because I can feel relaxed with him.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'my' which is incomplete. It should specify the pronoun referring to the son, which is 'him'.

× Human is kind of, uh, social, social, What to say? It's kind of social, social, social and social.

✓ Humans are kind of social beings.

The sentence is repetitive and ungrammatical. 'Human' as a singular noun should be plural 'Humans' to generalize. The phrase is simplified for clarity.

× I prefer to to to to catch up with my friends in.

✓ I prefer to catch up with my friends.

The sentence is incomplete and contains repeated words. It should be concise and complete.

× So I will, uh, definitely dedicated my time to taking care of him and also prevent my friends to go to my house.

✓ So I will definitely dedicate my time to taking care of him and also prevent my friends from coming to my house.

'Dedicated' should be 'dedicate' to match future tense with 'will'. 'Prevent my friends to go' is incorrect; the correct form is 'prevent my friends from coming'.

× in my age, I'm often meet friends just in a restaurant or an, or in a coffee shop because it's something, it's kind of, uh, relaxing for both of us.

✓ At my age, I often meet friends just in a restaurant or a coffee shop because it's kind of relaxing for both of us.

'I'm often meet' is incorrect; it should be 'I often meet'. 'In my age' should be 'At my age'. 'An' before 'or' is unnecessary.

× Because I believe that every every place have their own moods and it attracts people with their current mood.

✓ Because I believe that every place has its own mood and it attracts people with their current mood.

'Every place' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' not 'have'. 'Their own moods' should be 'its own mood' to agree with singular subject.