Friends— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng thì quá khứ cho các sự kiện đã xảy ra và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'which having a interesting mind'. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và tránh lặp từ.

Example: Yes, I have a best friend whom I have known since secondary school. She is very intelligent and friendly, with an interesting mind. Sometimes, she even looks out for me to protect me from any bad people.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'chatting with them' nên là 'chat with them'. Ngoài ra, hãy dùng từ vựng phù hợp và cụ thể hơn để mô tả hoạt động.

Example: Well, I usually go around the city with my friends, chat with them at school about daily events, and sometimes we take pictures together in beautiful scenic places like mountains.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'chatting' nên là 'chat', 'drivers' có thể là lỗi đánh máy. Bạn nên tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và tránh lặp lại thông tin không cần thiết.

Example: We usually meet at school because we study there together. My friends are mostly friendly and active. We often chat about daily topics or play fashion games together.

Suggestion: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ không chính xác như 'effects' thay vì 'affects'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và tránh lặp từ.

Example: No, I don't often go out with my friends because going out regularly affects my studies. However, I usually go out with them on special days or when I need to relax, sometimes we also study together in a cafe.

Suggestion: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp số nhiều và số ít (friend vs friends). Câu trả lời nên cụ thể hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'connect to social' nên là 'connect socially'. Hãy dùng từ vựng phù hợp và hoàn chỉnh câu.

Example: I think friends are very important in everyday life for everyone. Friends help us connect socially more easily. For example, having active friends can protect you from negative influences and help you stay positive in different situations.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'tea talk' và 'just taking'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý rõ ràng hơn.

Example: It depends on the situation. For example, at school, I prefer to talk with a group of friends about daily events. But when I am at a cafe to study, I prefer to spend time with just one friend to focus better.

Suggestion: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp số nhiều và số ít, cũng như cấu trúc câu. Ví dụ 'my home are' nên là 'my home is'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để truyền đạt ý tốt hơn.

Example: Yes, sometimes I invite friends to my home because they like to explore my phones. They think my home is very beautiful and connected with nature, which they love. Sometimes, they also come to my home to do presentations or group projects instead of the cafeteria.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp số ít và số nhiều, cũng như cấu trúc câu. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'there are little difference' nên là 'there is little difference'. Hãy dùng từ vựng chính xác và câu hoàn chỉnh.

Example: I think there is little difference between where I meet friends now and in the past. In the past, I usually met them at school and we talked about fairy tales. But now, I usually meet my friends at cafes, not just at school.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'living at home' nên là 'meeting at home', 'when walking a project' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, dùng từ vựng phù hợp và câu hoàn chỉnh.

Example: I think some places are more suitable for meeting depending on the activities. For example, meeting at home can be boring when working on a project, but a cafeteria is better because it has a lively atmosphere and offers many drinks and food.

× She is a very intelligent and friendly person which having a interesting mind or sometimes she would like to protect myself from any bad people.

✓ She is a very intelligent and friendly person who has an interesting mind, and sometimes she would like to protect me from any bad people.

The phrase 'which having' is incorrect; 'who has' should be used to refer to a person. Also, 'myself' is incorrect here; the correct pronoun is 'me'. The sentence structure is corrected to properly describe the person and the actions.

× Well, I usually go around the cities with my friends or chatting with them at school about everyday dramas that we have heard or taking pictures about ourselves in scenic beautiful landscape or mountains.

✓ Well, I usually go around the cities with my friends, chat with them at school about everyday dramas that we have heard, or take pictures of ourselves in scenic beautiful landscapes or mountains.

Parallel structure requires the verbs to be in the same form. 'Chatting' and 'taking' should be changed to 'chat' and 'take' to match 'go'. Also, 'pictures about ourselves' should be 'pictures of ourselves'.

× They usually chatting with me and talk about everyday drivers or playing with, uh, my fashion games.

✓ They usually chat with me and talk about everyday dramas or play, uh, my fashion games.

The verb 'chatting' should be in base form 'chat' to agree with 'usually'. Also, 'drivers' seems to be a mishearing or typo for 'dramas'. 'Playing' should be 'play' to maintain parallel structure.

× No, I don't often go out with my friends because sometimes going out every day or regularly effects my study a lot.

✓ No, I don't often go out with my friends because sometimes going out every day or regularly affects my study a lot.

The verb 'effects' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'affects' meaning to influence. 'Effects' is a noun or means to bring about.

× Friend helps us to connect to social more easily.

✓ Friends help us to connect to society more easily.

'Friend' should be plural 'Friends' to match the plural pronoun 'us'. Also, 'social' is an adjective; the noun 'society' is appropriate here.

× For example, having an active friends can protect you from negative influences and help you to stay positive in different situa.

✓ For example, having active friends can protect you from negative influences and help you to stay positive in different situations.

'An active friends' is incorrect; 'friends' is plural and should not have 'an'. Also, 'situa' is incomplete and should be 'situations'.

× Well, it depends on which situation or which destination that I'm in.

✓ Well, it depends on the situation or the destination that I'm in.

The phrase 'which situation or which destination' is awkward; 'the situation or the destination' is more natural. Also, 'that I'm in' correctly relates to the noun.

× But if I in cafe to study, I would love to spend time with one friend just taking.

✓ But if I am in a cafe to study, I would love to spend time with one friend just talking.

The verb 'am' is missing after 'I'. 'Cafe' needs an article 'a'. 'Taking' is incorrect; the intended word is 'talking'.

× They think that my home are very beautiful and connected with the nature that they love.

✓ They think that my home is very beautiful and connected with nature that they love.

'Home' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'. Also, 'the nature' should be 'nature' without 'the'.

× Or sometimes they go to my homes to do the presentation or group project they need to a not just in cafeteria.

✓ Or sometimes they go to my home to do presentations or group projects they need to, not just in the cafeteria.

'Homes' should be singular 'home' if referring to one place. 'Presentation' and 'group project' should be plural to match 'they need to'. Added missing commas and corrected 'a not' to 'not'.

× Well, I think there are little difference between when I meet friends now and when I used to meet them in the past.

✓ Well, I think there is little difference between when I meet friends now and when I used to meet them in the past.

'Difference' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'. 'Little' is correct here meaning 'not much'.

× In the past I usually meet I met them on at school, I usually talk about them with fairy tales.

✓ In the past, I usually met them at school; I usually talked about fairy tales with them.

The past tense 'met' and 'talked' should be used to match 'in the past'. Removed redundant 'I meet' and corrected preposition 'on at' to 'at'.

× Well, I think some places that are more suitable for meeting while others are not because it depends on which activities you are in.

✓ Well, I think some places are more suitable for meeting while others are not because it depends on the activities you are doing.

The phrase 'which activities you are in' is incorrect; 'activities you are doing' is correct. Also, 'that are' is unnecessary.

× For example, living at home can sometimes be boring because when walking a project, but in the cafeteria it might be better because it's have lively atmosphere and have many drinks and food.

✓ For example, living at home can sometimes be boring when working on a project, but in the cafeteria it might be better because it has a lively atmosphere and offers many drinks and food.

'When walking a project' is incorrect; it should be 'when working on a project'. 'It's have' is incorrect; should be 'it has'. Added articles 'a lively atmosphere' and corrected sentence structure.