Friends— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit long and has some grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences clear and concise, and use correct verb forms. Also, avoid redundancy like 'regularly always'.

Example: Yes, I have a close friend named Deepanshu who has been my childhood friend. He always encourages me during tough situations and helps me with my tasks. We regularly chat using our smartphones.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical mistakes. Use singular/plural forms correctly and structure your sentences better. Also, use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Example: I usually do various activities with my friends. For example, we study together and complete assignments. Besides that, we play games both at the institution and in the playground, which helps us stay active and motivated.

Suggestion: Your answer has some vocabulary and grammar errors. Use correct adverbs like 'often' instead of 'oftenly'. Also, make your sentences clearer and more coherent with linking words.

Example: I often meet my friend Deepanshu near my home, which is about 15 minutes away. We also attend the same institution, and sometimes we come late because we play together before classes.

Suggestion: Your answer mixes tenses and has some awkward phrasing. Use consistent tense and clearer sentence structure. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

Example: Yes, absolutely. During weekends, we usually visit malls or shopping stores because we love shopping. After that, we often sit near a cafe and chat with each other.

Suggestion: Your answer has grammatical errors and some unclear phrases like 'old's life'. Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct grammar and vocabulary.

Example: Friends play a significant role in everyone's life. They help us during tough situations and encourage us to be competitive without stress or frustration. Therefore, friends are very important to me.

Suggestion: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases like 'the punish is my best friend'. Use correct expressions and sentence structure for clarity.

Example: As I am an introvert, I prefer to spend time with close friends only. As I mentioned earlier, Deepanshu is my best friend, and I spend most of my time with him. We do various activities like playing football and basketball, as well as completing our homework together.

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit repetitive and has grammar errors. Use simpler and clearer sentences, and avoid redundancy.

Example: Yes, absolutely. I like to invite my close friends to my home. Recently, I celebrated my birthday and invited them. We all had an enthusiastic celebration and felt very happy and grateful to each other.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but has some grammar mistakes. Use past and present tenses correctly and avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

Example: Yes, there is a small difference. In the past, I preferred to meet my friends in small playgrounds. Nowadays, we usually meet in restaurants or cafes, which is the biggest change.

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit confusing and has grammar errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and use appropriate vocabulary like 'busy' instead of 'hustle and bustle'.

Example: Some places are suitable for meeting because they are quiet, comfortable, and convenient. Others are not suitable because they are too busy and noisy. People usually prefer quiet places for meetings to feel relaxed and focused.

× he always encourages me in tough situation as well as help me in my task

✓ he always encourages me in tough situations as well as helps me in my tasks

The verbs 'encourages' and 'helps' must agree with the third person singular subject 'he'. Also, 'situation' and 'task' should be plural to match the context of multiple instances.

× we regularly always chats with each other by using smartphones

✓ we regularly always chat with each other by using smartphones

After the plural subject 'we', the base form of the verb 'chat' should be used, not 'chats'.

× There are various activity that I do with my friends

✓ There are various activities that I do with my friends

The noun 'activity' should be plural 'activities' to agree with 'various', which implies more than one.

× we always try to play with each other in institution as well as in playground and encourages

✓ we always try to play with each other in the institution as well as in the playground and encourage each other

The verb 'encourages' should be 'encourage' to agree with the plural subject 'we'. Also, 'institution' and 'playground' need definite articles 'the'.

× Oftenly my friend Dipanshu is near my home as 15 minutes away

✓ My friend Dipanshu is often near my home, which is 15 minutes away

'Oftenly' is incorrect; the correct adverb is 'often'. Also, the sentence structure is awkward; placing 'often' after the subject improves clarity.

× we always meet each other whereas we always go in the same institution and come late because we had a play

✓ we always meet each other as we go to the same institution and come late because we have a play

The phrase 'had a play' is incorrect; 'have a play' is appropriate for present habitual actions. Also, 'go in' should be 'go to'.

× During weekends we always visited malls or shopping stores as we love to shop

✓ During weekends we always visit malls or shopping stores as we love to shop

The present tense 'visit' should be used to indicate habitual actions, not the past tense 'visited'.

× near a cafe we always have a chat with each

✓ near a cafe we always have a chat with each other

The phrase 'with each' is incomplete; it should be 'with each other' to indicate mutual interaction.

× Friends play a significant role in old's life whereas friends are very necessary

✓ Friends play a significant role in an old person's life; friends are very necessary

The phrase 'old's life' is incorrect; it should be 'an old person's life' to correctly express possession and singular form.

× As everyone know that friends helps in every tough situation as well as encourages us to be very competitive in life without any stress and frustration

✓ As everyone knows that friends help in every tough situation as well as encourage us to be very competitive in life without any stress and frustration

The verb 'know' should be 'knows' to agree with singular 'everyone'. Also, 'friends' is plural, so verbs should be 'help' and 'encourage' without 's'.

× As I am an introvert person so I preferably used to speak spend my time with close friends only

✓ As I am an introvert person, I preferably spend my time with close friends only

The phrase 'used to speak spend' is incorrect and redundant. 'Preferably spend' is correct. Also, a comma is needed after the introductory clause.

× As I have already told you the punish is my best friend and I always spend much of my time with him

✓ As I have already told you, Deepanshu is my best friend and I always spend much of my time with him

'The punish' seems to be a typo; it should be 'Deepanshu'. Also, a comma is needed after the introductory clause.

× I would like to invite my close friends with my home

✓ I would like to invite my close friends to my home

The correct preposition to indicate direction towards a place is 'to', not 'with'.

× recently my birthday was there and I invited my close friends and they celebrated my birthday in a enthusiastic way

✓ Recently, my birthday was and I invited my close friends, and they celebrated my birthday in an enthusiastic way

The phrase 'my birthday was there' is awkward; 'my birthday was' suffices. Also, 'a enthusiastic' should be 'an enthusiastic' due to vowel sound.

× Is there a small difference between where I meet my friends now and I used to meet them in past?

✓ Is there a small difference between where I meet my friends now and where I used to meet them in the past?

The sentence lacks parallel structure; 'where' should be repeated for clarity. Also, 'in past' should be 'in the past'.

× some places are more hustle and bustle whereas everyone feel delighted in quiet places for referring the meeting

✓ some places are more hustle and bustle, whereas everyone feels delighted in quiet places for holding meetings

The phrase 'hustle and bustle' is a noun phrase and should be preceded by 'full of' or rephrased. Also, 'everyone feel' should be 'everyone feels'. 'For referring the meeting' is incorrect; 'for holding meetings' is appropriate.