Friends— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more fluent and clear by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and complete your sentences properly. Also, use a linking phrase to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I have a friend whom I have known since childhood, and we have shared many experiences together over the years.

Suggestion: Avoid redundancy such as 'spend a lot of time with each other' and 'enjoy the company for each other.' Use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific about activities.

Example: We usually spend time together by going for long drives and studying, which helps us bond and enjoy each other's company.

Suggestion: Focus on answering the question directly and clearly. Avoid grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to list places where you meet.

Example: We often meet at each other's homes, but sometimes we prefer to meet in the park because it's comfortable and relaxing.

Suggestion: Try to avoid filler words and improve sentence structure. Use precise vocabulary to express your feelings and reasons clearly.

Example: Yes, I often go out with my friends because it helps me stay calm and relax during stressful times.

Suggestion: Improve grammar and sentence clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons why friends are important.

Example: Friends are very important to me because their company helps me relax, and since we share similar mindsets, they often help me solve my problems.

Suggestion: Work on sentence fluency and grammar. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly and avoid repetition.

Example: I prefer spending time with one friend because, as an introverted person, I feel more comfortable in smaller groups rather than large gatherings.

Suggestion: Avoid filler words and unclear phrases like 'extract UH-1.' Make your sentences complete and clear, and explain reasons logically using linking words.

Example: I usually don't invite friends to my home because they don't feel comfortable with my family, and sometimes my family feels the same about them.

Suggestion: Reduce filler words and improve verb tenses for clarity. Use linking words to compare past and present situations clearly.

Example: Yes, there is a big difference between where I meet my friends now and in the past because I was single before and had no restrictions, but now I have a family.

Suggestion: Clarify your ideas and complete your sentences. Avoid unclear words like 'papers' and explain reasons logically with linking words.

Example: Some places are suitable for meeting because they have a comfortable environment where we can talk easily without being disturbed or watched by others.

× Yes, I have a friend who I have known for a long time and we both, uh, with each other, uh, from our childhood, uh.

✓ Yes, I have a friend who I have known for a long time and we have known each other since our childhood.

The phrase 'we both, uh, with each other' is incorrect because the verb is missing. The correct expression is 'we have known each other'. Also, 'from our childhood' should be 'since our childhood' to indicate the starting point of the action continuing to the present.

× We usually spend a lot of time with each other. We often go for a long drive and study together, and we enjoy the company for each other.

✓ We usually spend a lot of time with each other. We often go for a long drive and study together, and we enjoy each other's company.

The phrase 'enjoy the company for each other' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'enjoy each other's company' to express mutual enjoyment.

× Are you friendly meet at each other at home? Sometimes he comes to my and sometime I go to there to her house. Sometime it's comfortable to meet in the park also.

✓ Do you often meet each other at home? Sometimes he comes to my house and sometimes I go to her house. Sometimes it's comfortable to meet in the park also.

The original sentences have incorrect sentence structure and word order. 'Are you friendly meet at each other at home?' is incorrect; it should be 'Do you often meet each other at home?'. Also, 'sometimes he comes to my' is incomplete and should be 'sometimes he comes to my house'. 'Sometime I go to there to her house' is incorrect; it should be 'sometimes I go to her house'. 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' for correct adverb usage.

× Yes, I often go out with my friends because it keep, uh, it keeps me calm and uh, soothe and uh, relax my mood in the, uh, in the stressful life.

✓ Yes, I often go out with my friends because it keeps me calm and soothes and relaxes my mood in stressful life.

The verb 'keep' should be 'keeps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Similarly, 'soothe' and 'relax' should be 'soothes' and 'relaxes' to match the singular subject. Also, 'in the stressful life' should be 'in stressful life' or 'in a stressful life' for natural expression.

× Friends are very important for me to me because in the company of my friends I feel relax and sometimes they can help me to solve my life problems because our mentality are same.

✓ Friends are very important to me because in the company of my friends I feel relaxed and sometimes they can help me solve my life problems because our mentality is the same.

The phrase 'important for me to me' is redundant; 'important to me' is correct. 'Feel relax' should be 'feel relaxed' as 'relaxed' is the correct adjective. 'Help me to solve' can be simplified to 'help me solve'. 'Our mentality are same' has subject-verb agreement error; it should be 'our mentality is the same'.

× I prefer to spend time with one friend because I am introverted person so I do not like the company of more people because I don't feel comfortable in much people.

✓ I prefer to spend time with one friend because I am an introverted person so I do not like the company of many people because I don't feel comfortable around many people.

'Introverted person' needs an article 'an'. 'Company of more people' is better expressed as 'company of many people'. 'Feel comfortable in much people' is incorrect; it should be 'feel comfortable around many people'.

× I wouldn't like to invite my friends at home, uh, extract UH-1 uh, because uh, they are not comfortable with my family, and sometimes my family is also not comfortable in the company of my friends.

✓ I wouldn't like to invite my friends to my home because they are not comfortable with my family, and sometimes my family is also not comfortable in the company of my friends.

The phrase 'invite my friends at home' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'to my home'. The filler words 'extract UH-1 uh' are removed for clarity.

× Yes, there is a lot of difference between uh, where I meet my friends now and uh, where I used to meet them in the past because, uh, in the past I am single uh, and I had no restriction to meet them, but now I have a family.

✓ Yes, there is a lot of difference between where I meet my friends now and where I used to meet them in the past because, in the past, I was single and I had no restrictions to meet them, but now I have a family.

The phrase 'in the past I am single' is incorrect because 'am' is present tense; it should be 'I was single' to match past tense. 'No restriction' should be plural 'no restrictions' for natural expression.

× Some papers are some places are very suitable for meeting because of their environment and we can easily talk to each other and pupils are not looking at at ours because.

✓ Some places are very suitable for meeting because of their environment and we can easily talk to each other and people are not looking at us.

The phrase 'Some papers are some places' is incorrect; 'papers' is likely a mispronunciation or error and should be removed. 'Pupils' is likely incorrect in context and should be 'people'. The phrase 'looking at at ours' is incorrect; it should be 'looking at us'. The sentence is incomplete and is corrected for clarity.