Watch— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by using proper tenses and sentence structures. Also, avoid redundancy and clarify your points with linking words for coherence.

Example: I seldom wear a watch because I work as a nurse, and it's not allowed during weekdays since watches can carry bacteria. Therefore, I usually leave it at home and only wear it on special occasions.

Suggestion: Improve clarity and coherence by using linking words and complete sentences. Also, avoid vague phrases and provide specific details to enrich your answer.

Example: Yes, I vividly remember that my mother bought watches for all of us siblings. Each watch had engraved cartoons that we liked, and we really enjoyed wearing them.

Suggestion: Focus on structuring your answer with clear topic sentences and supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid grammatical errors for better clarity.

Example: Some people wear expensive watches because they have worked hard to earn their money, and buying such watches boosts their confidence. Wearing these watches also reflects their success and personal style.

Suggestion: Make your answer more natural by using correct grammar and clearer expressions. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I think wearing a watch is important because it helps us keep track of time. This is especially useful for managing daily tasks, such as doing household chores efficiently.

× Seldom only because during weekdays I'm working and it's not allowed to wear a watch.

✓ Seldom, only because during weekdays I work and it's not allowed to wear a watch.

The phrase 'I'm working' suggests a continuous action, but here a habitual action is described, so the simple present 'I work' is appropriate.

× I'm a nurse because it will carry a bacteria.

✓ I'm a nurse because it can carry bacteria.

The preposition 'because' is correct, but 'will carry a bacteria' is incorrect; 'can carry bacteria' is better to express possibility. Also, 'bacteria' is plural and does not need 'a'.

× So usually I left it at home.

✓ So usually I leave it at home.

The adverb 'usually' indicates a habitual action, so the present tense 'leave' should be used instead of past tense 'left'.

× Only during special occasion I wear this.

✓ Only during special occasions I wear this.

The noun 'occasion' should be plural 'occasions' to match the general meaning of multiple special times.

× Yes, that's what I remember vividly.

✓ Yes, that's what I remember vividly.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct.

× My mother bought us a watch.

✓ My mother bought us watches.

Since 'us' refers to multiple siblings, 'watches' plural is appropriate.

× Each of my siblings has a watch and we enjoyed it with engraved cartoons that we must like.

✓ Each of my siblings has a watch and we enjoy them with engraved cartoons that we like.

'Enjoyed' should be present tense 'enjoy' to match current enjoyment; 'it' should be 'them' to refer to multiple watches; 'must like' is incorrect, 'we like' is correct.

× We used to.

✓ We used to enjoy them.

The sentence 'We used to.' is incomplete; it should specify what was done, e.g., 'We used to enjoy them.'.

× It's their hard earned money so it's their preference to buy a expensive watch.

✓ It's their hard-earned money so it's their preference to buy an expensive watch.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a vowel sound; 'hard earned' should be hyphenated as 'hard-earned'.

× It boost their confidence every time.

✓ It boosts their confidence every time.

Subject-verb agreement requires 'boosts' for singular subject 'It'.

× They will wear it at the same time.

✓ They wear it at the same time.

The sentence refers to habitual action, so simple present 'wear' is appropriate instead of future 'will wear'.

× They were able to buy what they wanted.

✓ They are able to buy what they want.

The context suggests present ability and preference, so present tense is better.

× Yes, it is important to wear a watch due to it will guide us for the time or timeline and this is useful also for managing the time like doing household chores at home.

✓ Yes, it is important to wear a watch because it can guide us on the time or timeline and is also useful for managing time, like doing household chores at home.

'Due to' is incorrectly used; 'because' is correct. 'It will guide' should be 'it can guide' to express ability. 'Guide us for the time' should be 'guide us on the time'. Also, sentence structure improved for clarity.