Watch— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 의미 전달이 명확하지 않습니다. 'It makes me feel happy'라는 표현이 문맥상 맞지 않으며, 이유 설명이 부족합니다. 간결하고 명확하게 시계를 착용하지 않는 이유를 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Example: No, I don't wear a watch because I usually check the time on my phone, so I find wearing a watch unnecessary.

Suggestion: 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 'got' 대신 'received'를 사용하고, 'like to watch'는 의미가 불분명합니다. 명확한 이유와 자연스러운 문장 구성을 연습하세요.

Example: No, I have never received a watch as a gift because I don't really like wearing one.

Suggestion: 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 많습니다. 'It just extravagance'는 문법적으로 틀렸고, 문장을 더 명확하고 자연스럽게 만들어야 합니다. 이유를 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Example: Some people wear expensive watches to show their status or wealth, but I think it's not necessary for daily life because they are very costly.

Suggestion: 답변이 모순되고 문법적으로 부정확합니다. 'It's important'와 'not necessary'가 혼용되어 혼란을 줍니다. 명확한 의견 제시와 논리적 연결어 사용을 연습하세요.

Example: I don't think it's important to wear a watch nowadays because we can easily check the time on our smartphones.

× No, I have never got the watch as a gift and furthermore, I don't like to watch, so I don't require keeping watch. Yeah, so.

✓ No, I have never gotten a watch as a gift and furthermore, I don't like to wear a watch, so I don't need to keep one. Yeah, so.

The verb 'got' is the simple past form, but in present perfect tense, the past participle 'gotten' (American English) should be used. Also, 'like to watch' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'like to wear a watch' because 'watch' here is a noun referring to a timepiece, not the verb 'watch'. 'Require keeping watch' is awkward; 'need to keep one' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× It just extravagance.

✓ It's just extravagance.

The sentence lacks a verb. 'It just extravagance' is incomplete; the verb 'is' is needed to form a correct sentence: 'It's just extravagance.'

× I don't think uh, the expensive watches isn't necessary to live our life.

✓ I don't think, uh, expensive watches are necessary to live our life.

The subject 'expensive watches' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'isn't' is negative, but the sentence context suggests a negative opinion expressed by 'I don't think', so the verb should be affirmative 'are necessary'.

× So that is not necessary point in modern society.

✓ So that is not a necessary point in modern society.

The phrase 'not necessary point' is missing the article 'a' before 'necessary point'. Articles are important before singular countable nouns. Also, 'point' is a countable noun here, so 'a' is required.