Websites— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. For example, say "I often visit social media websites like Instagram, Twitter, and Facebook because they provide entertainment and help me stay connected with friends and family." Also, use plural forms correctly and avoid repeating similar ideas.

Example: I often visit social media websites like Instagram, Twitter, and Facebook because they provide entertainment and help me stay connected with friends and family.

Suggestion: Focus on clarity and grammar. Use correct expressions like "My favourite online platform is Instagram because it is user-friendly." Also, avoid listing too many ideas in one sentence; instead, use linking words to connect your points logically.

Example: My favourite online platform is Instagram because it is user-friendly. I can easily chat with my friends and family, share my daily activities, and enjoy entertaining content.

Suggestion: Improve sentence structure and use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, say "Websites often update their designs to become more user-friendly and easier to navigate. Additionally, many have introduced subscription models to offer premium content." Also, avoid vague phrases like "lots of sources."

Example: Websites often update their designs to become more user-friendly and easier to navigate. Additionally, many have introduced subscription models to offer premium content.

Suggestion: Work on grammar and clarity. Use plural forms correctly and avoid incomplete phrases like "post their and follow their influ influ." For example, say "Social media websites like Instagram, Twitter, WeChat, and Snapchat are very popular, especially among young people. They use these platforms to stay in touch with friends and family, share posts, and follow influencers."

Example: Social media websites like Instagram, Twitter, WeChat, and Snapchat are very popular, especially among young people. They use these platforms to stay in touch with friends and family, share posts, and follow influencers.

× I usually follow social media platforms more such as Instagram, Twitter, Facebook because it's a great source of entertainment and we can stay connected with our friend and family.

✓ I usually follow social media platforms such as Instagram, Twitter, and Facebook more because they're great sources of entertainment and we can stay connected with our friends and family.

The phrase 'more such as' is awkward and incorrect; 'more' should come after listing the platforms or be omitted. Also, 'friend and family' should be plural 'friends and family' to correctly refer to multiple people. Additionally, 'it's a great source' should be plural 'they're great sources' to agree with the plural subject 'social media platforms'.

× My most likes online platform is Instagram because it's more user friendly and I can talk to my friends and family and post to my everyday routine and my good memories with them and it's a good source of entertainment.

✓ My most liked online platform is Instagram because it's more user-friendly and I can talk to my friends and family and post about my everyday routine and my good memories with them, and it's a good source of entertainment.

'Most likes' is incorrect; the correct form is 'most liked' to describe the platform. 'User friendly' should be hyphenated as 'user-friendly' when used as an adjective. 'Post to my everyday routine' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'post about my everyday routine'. Also, a comma is needed before 'and it's a good source' to separate clauses properly.

× There are plenty of changes nowadays in websites, so they usually do updated to make more user friendly and easy to navigate.

✓ There are plenty of changes nowadays in websites, so they usually update them to make them more user-friendly and easy to navigate.

The phrase 'do updated' is incorrect; the correct verb form is 'update'. Also, 'make more user friendly' needs the pronoun 'them' to specify what is being made user-friendly. 'User friendly' should be hyphenated as 'user-friendly' when used as an adjective.

× Also they launch subscription models for premium users and provide lots of sources.

✓ Also, they launch subscription models for premium users and provide lots of resources.

The word 'sources' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'resources' when referring to materials or services provided. Additionally, a comma is needed after 'Also' to separate introductory elements.

× In my country the most well known websites are social media such as Instagram, Twitter, WeChat and Snapchat.

✓ In my country, the most well-known websites are social media platforms such as Instagram, Twitter, WeChat, and Snapchat.

'Most well known' should be hyphenated as 'most well-known' when used as a compound adjective before a noun. Adding 'platforms' clarifies the subject. Commas are needed after 'country' and between items in the list for correct punctuation.

× It's a good source of entertainment for younger people and they keep in touch with their friends and family and post their and follow their influ influ.

✓ They're a good source of entertainment for younger people, and they keep in touch with their friends and family and post their content and follow their influencers.

'It's' refers to singular, but the subject 'websites' is plural, so 'They're' is correct. The phrase 'post their and follow their influ influ' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'post their content and follow their influencers' to make sense. Also, commas are needed to separate clauses properly.