Websites— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: คำตอบของคุณควรปรับปรุงให้เป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น โดยใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและถูกต้องทางไวยากรณ์ รวมถึงหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำซ้ำซ้อน และเพิ่มคำเชื่อมเพื่อให้เนื้อหาดูสมเหตุสมผลมากขึ้น

Example: I often visit websites that offer valuable information about art because I can learn new skills from them. For example, when I work on my projects, I usually find inspiration and useful information on these sites.

Suggestion: คำตอบควรปรับปรุงให้ชัดเจนและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น โดยแก้ไขข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์และคำที่ไม่ถูกต้อง รวมถึงใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมโยงประโยคให้ลื่นไหล

Example: My favorite website is Pinterest because I always use it for inspiration in my art projects. For example, I find ideas for flower decorations, birthday gifts, and even tutorials on how to draw animations. It is easy and quick to search for what I need.

Suggestion: คำตอบควรปรับปรุงให้มีโครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้องและชัดเจนมากขึ้น รวมถึงใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้เนื้อหาดูสมเหตุสมผลและลื่นไหล

Example: No, the websites I often visit have not changed much. However, they have become more useful because they are now more user-friendly and mobile responsive.

Suggestion: คำตอบควรปรับปรุงให้ใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้องและคำเชื่อมที่เหมาะสม เพื่อให้เนื้อหาดูเป็นธรรมชาติและชัดเจนมากขึ้น

Example: In my country, social media websites are extremely popular. Platforms like TikTok and Instagram attract millions of people who use these applications for shopping, searching, and entertainment.

× I often visit website because they provide value, information and anything any special thing about art and I can learn new skill from this application.

✓ I often visit websites because they provide value, information, and special things about art, and I can learn new skills from these applications.

The word 'website' should be plural 'websites' because the subject refers to multiple sites. Also, 'skill' should be plural 'skills' to match the context of learning multiple abilities. 'Application' should be plural 'applications' to agree with 'websites'.

× For example, when I doing my project I'm always find information and inspiration on this website.

✓ For example, when I am doing my project, I always find information and inspiration on this website.

The verb 'doing' requires an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. Also, 'I'm always find' is incorrect; it should be 'I always find' to maintain subject-verb agreement and correct tense.

× My favorite website is printer waste Ionem always used Pinterest for my for my inspiration and my art project.

✓ My favorite website is Pinterest. I always use Pinterest for my inspiration and my art projects.

The original sentence is unclear and contains errors. 'Printer waste Ionem' seems to be a mishearing or typo. Correcting to 'Pinterest' as the website name. 'Used' should be 'use' to match present tense. 'Art project' should be plural 'art projects' to generalize.

× Yeah, it's easily and quickly to search.

✓ Yeah, it's easy and quick to search.

'Easily' and 'quickly' are adverbs, but here adjectives 'easy' and 'quick' are needed to describe 'it' (the website).

× No, there are not any about this website I often have visit.

✓ No, there are no changes to the websites I often visit.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Corrected to a proper 'there are no changes' structure to answer the question appropriately.

× Everything was still the same but more useful. Use user friendly and mobile responsive.

✓ Everything is still the same but more useful, user-friendly, and mobile responsive.

'Use' should be 'user-friendly' as an adjective. Also, 'was' changed to 'is' to maintain present tense. Added commas for clarity.

× In my country, social media websites are extremely popular with many platforms such as Tiktok, Instagram that attraction millions of people using this application for shopping, searching and entertainment.

✓ In my country, social media websites are extremely popular with many platforms such as TikTok and Instagram that attract millions of people using these applications for shopping, searching, and entertainment.

'Attraction' should be 'attract' to agree with plural subject 'platforms'. 'Application' should be plural 'applications' to match 'platforms'. Added 'and' between TikTok and Instagram for correct listing.