Websites— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevabınızı daha doğal ve akıcı hale getirmek için gereksiz tekrarları ve dolgu kelimelerini azaltmalısınız. Ayrıca, cümlenizi doğrudan soruya yanıt verecek şekilde yapılandırmalı ve destekleyici detaylar için bağlaçlar kullanmalısınız.

Example: I often visit shopping websites through social media apps because I look for affordable and fashionable clothes. This way, I can easily compare prices and find good deals.

Suggestion: Cevabınızı daha net ve etkili yapmak için cümlelerinizi daha iyi yapılandırmalı ve dolgu kelimelerini azaltmalısınız. Ayrıca, neden favori olduğunuza dair daha spesifik detaylar ekleyebilirsiniz.

Example: My favorite website is Dollop because it offers second-hand dresses and shoes. I like it since I can compare different brands and find items on sale, which makes shopping convenient.

Suggestion: Cevabınızı daha açık ve anlaşılır yapmak için dolgu kelimelerini azaltmalı ve cümlenizi doğrudan soruya yanıt verecek şekilde yapılandırmalısınız. Ayrıca, değişikliklere dair spesifik örnekler vermelisiniz.

Example: I visit these websites daily, and sometimes their sections change due to updates. For example, new categories or features are added to improve user experience.

Suggestion: Cevabınızı daha doğal ve etkili yapmak için dolgu kelimelerini azaltmalı ve cümlenizi daha iyi yapılandırmalısınız. Ayrıca, popüler web sitelerinin neden tercih edildiğine dair daha spesifik detaylar ekleyebilirsiniz.

Example: Shopping websites are definitely popular in my country because people love buying fashionable clothes, including last season's items, at good prices.

× I prefer to visit, uh, shopping, uh, websites generally, uh, throughout social me social media applications and umm, I search cheaper, umm, dress and uh, fashionable things.

✓ I prefer to visit shopping websites generally through social media applications and I search for cheaper dresses and fashionable things.

The preposition 'throughout' is incorrectly used; the correct preposition is 'through' when referring to using social media applications as a medium. Also, 'search' requires the preposition 'for' when indicating what is being searched.

× I search cheaper, umm, dress and uh, fashionable things.

✓ I search for cheaper dresses and fashionable things.

The noun 'dress' should be plural 'dresses' to agree with the context of searching for multiple items.

× My favorite website, Dollop, uh, because you can, umm, allow second hand and dresses and, uh, shoes and you can compare with, compare with, uh, brands and, uh, sometimes sales.

✓ My favorite website is Dollop because you can buy second-hand dresses and shoes and you can compare brands and sometimes sales.

The verb 'allow' is incorrect here; 'buy' fits the context. 'Compare with' is better expressed as 'compare' without 'with' when comparing brands. Also, 'second hand' should be hyphenated as 'second-hand' when used as an adjective.

× I visit these websites, uh, day by day and sometimes I can, umm, face with, uh, change, uh, sections, you know, uh, updates, uh, will come and uh, what can I say?

✓ I visit these websites day by day and sometimes I face changes in sections; you know, updates will come.

The phrase 'face with' is incorrect; the correct form is 'face' without 'with'. Also, 'change sections' should be 'changes in sections' to indicate modifications within sections.

× Uh, it's definitely a shopping, uh, website because uh, we are uh, addicted to uh, buying uh, more fashionable, uh, dress and uh, last season, umm, items.

✓ It's definitely a shopping website because we are addicted to buying more fashionable dresses and last season's items.

The noun 'dress' should be plural 'dresses' to match the plural context. Also, 'last season' should be possessive 'last season's' to correctly modify 'items'.