Websites— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to use clear and correct English, and avoid vague phrases. Also, organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. For example, say "I often visit academic websites such as Google Scholar to find research papers. Additionally, I use social media sites to stay connected with friends."

Example: I often visit academic websites like Google Scholar because they provide access to research papers. Additionally, I use social media platforms such as Facebook to keep in touch with my friends.

Suggestion: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and redundancy. Try to make your sentences concise and clear. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, "My favorite website is App Movies because it is reliable and convenient for searching movies. As a movie lover, I enjoy using this site frequently."

Example: My favorite website is App Movies because it is reliable and easy to use. Since I love movies, I often visit this site to find new films to watch.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct grammar. Also, provide specific details and use linking words. For example, "Yes, some movie-related websites have changed. They now use proxy URLs, possibly to avoid legal issues."

Example: Yes, some movie websites have changed recently. They use proxy URLs, which might be to avoid legal problems.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Try to answer directly with clear sentences and specific examples. For instance, "In my country, social media websites like Facebook are very popular. Also, news websites such as YouTube channels provide current information."

Example: In my country, social media platforms like Facebook are very popular. Additionally, many people visit news websites and YouTube channels to stay informed.

× Well I visit a lot of we save related to academic our societies.

✓ Well, I visit a lot of websites related to academic societies.

The original sentence uses 'we save' which seems to be a mishearing or typo for 'websites'. Also, 'our societies' should be 'academic societies' to be grammatically correct and clear. The plural form 'websites' is necessary here to match 'a lot of'.

× I use school scholars so I can get research paper over there.

✓ I use school scholar websites so I can get research papers there.

The phrase 'use school scholars' is unclear; it should be 'school scholar websites' or 'scholarly websites'. Also, 'research paper' should be plural 'research papers' because generally multiple papers are accessed. 'Over there' is better replaced with 'there' for clarity and correctness.

× Similarly sometimes I go to the outside that are familiar like social medias.

✓ Similarly, sometimes I go to sites that are familiar, like social media.

'Outside' is incorrect here; it should be 'sites' or 'websites'. 'Social medias' is incorrect because 'social media' is an uncountable noun and does not take a plural form. The sentence needs commas for clarity.

× One of my favorite website that I visit often is a movie outside called App Movies.

✓ One of my favorite websites that I visit often is a movie site called App Movies.

'Website' should be plural 'websites' because 'one of my favorite websites' refers to one among many. 'Movie outside' is incorrect; it should be 'movie site' or 'movie website'.

× It is because it's website is very reliable and very convenient to search any movies and I'm a movie lover person and want to go to this website.

✓ It is because its website is very reliable and very convenient to search for any movies, and I'm a movie lover who wants to go to this website.

'It's' is a contraction for 'it is' but here the possessive 'its' is needed. 'Search any movies' should be 'search for any movies'. 'Movie lover person' is awkward; 'movie lover who wants' is better.

× Yes, one of the website that is related to the even movie is kind of rough proxy of sight and it all seems URL.

✓ Yes, one of the websites that is related to the event movie is kind of a rough proxy site and it has a suspicious URL.

'One of the website' should be 'one of the websites' to match plural. 'Even movie' likely means 'event movie'. 'Proxy of sight' should be 'proxy site'. 'It all seems URL' is unclear; corrected to 'it has a suspicious URL' for clarity.

× I don't know it's because they want to hide from the some sorts of legal action maybe or?

✓ I don't know if it's because they want to hide from some sorts of legal action, maybe.

The sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'It's' is correct here as contraction of 'it is'. 'The some sorts' is incorrect; 'some sorts' is sufficient. The question mark is unnecessary; a period is better.

× Well, one of the most popular website all over my niece is so similarly absent such as reading Facebook while simultaneously they are on the outside call the you can't people, which is related to the so to the reporting hours newspaper.

✓ Well, one of the most popular websites all over my area is social media platforms such as Facebook, while simultaneously they are on websites called YouTube, which is related to the news and newspapers.

'One of the most popular website' should be 'websites'. 'My niece' is likely a mishearing of 'my area'. 'So similarly absent' is unclear; corrected to 'social media platforms'. 'Outside call the you can't people' is likely 'websites called YouTube'. 'Reporting hours newspaper' is corrected to 'news and newspapers' for clarity.