Websites— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Try to start with a direct response, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid unclear words like 'orching' and grammatical errors. For example, you can say: "I usually visit shopping websites and academic sites related to my thesis. Especially during vacations, I spend more time on shopping websites to find good deals."

Example: I usually visit shopping websites and academic sites related to my thesis. Especially during vacations, I spend more time on shopping websites to find good deals.

Suggestion: Your answer should be more fluent and avoid filler words like 'uh'. Use correct grammar and clearer vocabulary. Start with a direct answer and then explain why. For example: "My favorite website is Dara's because it offers affordable products and fast delivery, which saves me both money and time."

Example: My favorite website is Dara's because it offers affordable products and fast delivery, which saves me both money and time.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but needs better grammar and coherence. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. For example: "Yes, websites are changing a lot nowadays because of artificial intelligence. As a result, they have become more personalized and continue to improve day by day."

Example: Yes, websites are changing a lot nowadays because of artificial intelligence. As a result, they have become more personalized and continue to improve day by day.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but can be improved by using plural forms correctly and adding linking words. Also, avoid redundancy. For example: "Shopping websites are the most popular in my country. Additionally, academic sites are widely used by students. When I was a student, I often used academic websites for studying."

Example: Shopping websites are the most popular in my country. Additionally, academic sites are widely used by students. When I was a student, I often used academic websites for studying.

× I really visit some shopping website or some thesis related website that I am orching one that's it.

✓ I really visit some shopping websites or some thesis-related websites that I am searching, that's it.

The word 'website' should be plural 'websites' because it refers to more than one type of website. Also, 'thesis related' should be hyphenated as 'thesis-related' to correctly modify 'websites'. The word 'orching' seems to be a mispronunciation or typo for 'searching'.

× So it's will be the shopping website.

✓ So it will be the shopping website.

The phrase 'it's will be' is incorrect because 'it's' is a contraction of 'it is' or 'it has', and cannot be combined with 'will'. The correct form is 'it will be'.

× I think any offset related to shopping will be my favorite website.

✓ I think any site related to shopping will be my favorite website.

The word 'offset' is incorrect in this context; likely the intended word is 'site'. Also, 'website' is singular here, which is correct because the student refers to a single favorite website.

× Currently my favorite website is Dara's because I get things, uh, very cheaper there and I find very, uh, various deals for saving money and saving my time by fast delivery.

✓ Currently my favorite website is Dara's because I get things, uh, much cheaper there and I find various deals that save money and time through fast delivery.

The adverb 'very' should not be used with comparative adjectives like 'cheaper'; instead, 'much' is appropriate. Also, 'very various' is incorrect; 'various' alone suffices. The phrase 'saving my time by fast delivery' is awkward and corrected to 'save money and time through fast delivery' for clarity.

× Yes, there are many changes happening nowadays in related to website because AI is uh, is related to this website and because of the artificial intelligence, the websites are more personalized.

✓ Yes, there are many changes happening nowadays related to websites because AI is related to these websites and because of artificial intelligence, the websites are more personalized.

The phrase 'in related to website' is incorrect; it should be 'related to websites'. Also, 'this website' should be plural 'these websites' to match the context. The article 'the' before 'artificial intelligence' is unnecessary.

× So it's keep getting changes days day by day.

✓ So it keeps changing day by day.

The phrase 'it's keep' is incorrect; 'it' requires the third person singular verb 'keeps'. Also, 'getting changes' is awkward; 'changing' is more natural. 'Days day by day' is redundant; 'day by day' suffices.

× I think shopping related website is the most popular website in my country.

✓ I think shopping-related websites are the most popular websites in my country.

'Shopping related website' should be hyphenated as 'shopping-related' and pluralized to 'websites' because it refers to a category. The verb should be plural 'are' to agree with the plural subject. 'Most popular website' should also be plural 'websites'.