Websites— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as "shopping websites such as Amazon" and "easy to buy online" which overlap. Also, improve sentence structure and grammar, for example, "getting information about daily lives in where I live" is awkward. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: I often visit shopping websites like Amazon because they offer convenient online shopping. Additionally, I check news websites to stay informed about local events and daily life in my area.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and contains repetition and incomplete thoughts. Try to organise your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid repeating words like "I I" and ensure your sentences are complete. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: My favourite websites are BBC News and Amazon Prime. Since I have a small baby, I prefer Amazon Prime because it allows me to shop quickly and easily. I also enjoy BBC News to keep up with current events.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but contains repetition and grammatical errors. Avoid repeating words like "it it" and ensure subject-verb agreement, e.g., "appearance of websites is changing". Use linking words to connect your points and provide more specific details about the changes.

Example: I have noticed that Amazon Prime is frequently updated. For example, the website's appearance has changed, and they have improved refund policies and customer assistance.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and incomplete. Avoid repeating phrases like "very popular" and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to organise your ideas clearly. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your points.

Example: In Turkey, shopping websites and social media platforms like Instagram are very popular. Many people enjoy sharing photos online and follow the latest fashion trends to look stylish.

× I usually visit shopping websites such as Amazon because it's very convenient and easy to buy online, and I also check some news for getting information about daily lives in where I live.

✓ I usually visit shopping websites such as Amazon because it's very convenient and easy to buy online, and I also check some news to get information about daily life where I live.

The phrase 'for getting' is incorrect; the correct form is 'to get' when expressing purpose. Also, 'daily lives in where I live' is awkward; it should be 'daily life where I live' to refer to general daily activities in the place of residence.

× My favorite websites are BBC News and Amazon Prime because I I have a small baby and I I when I do shopping for me it should be very quick and easy and other than BBC News.

✓ My favorite websites are BBC News and Amazon Prime because I have a small baby and when I do shopping, it should be very quick and easy; other than BBC News, I also like Amazon Prime.

The sentence contains repeated words 'I I' which is an error. Also, the sentence structure is confusing and lacks proper punctuation. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I have seen some changes on Amazon Prime websites and I think it it is updating a lot. So the appearance of websites are changing and also refund policies and assistance are changing.

✓ I have seen some changes on Amazon Prime website and I think it is updating a lot. So the appearance of the website is changing and also refund policies and assistance are changing.

'Websites' should be singular 'website' when referring to Amazon Prime as a single site. Also, 'appearance of websites are changing' is incorrect; 'appearance' is singular and should be followed by 'is changing'.

× In Turkey shopping websites are very popular and also social media such as Instagram is very popular because people like to take a photo and upload on Internet and also people generally looking styles look want to look stylish and.

✓ In Turkey, shopping websites are very popular and also social media such as Instagram is very popular because people like to take photos and upload them on the Internet. Also, people generally look for styles because they want to look stylish.

The phrase 'upload on Internet' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'upload on the Internet'. Also, 'people generally looking styles look want to look stylish and' is ungrammatical and has been corrected to 'people generally look for styles because they want to look stylish' for clarity and correctness.