Websites— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding repetition and filler words. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific supporting details using linking words to improve coherence. Also, correct vocabulary errors such as 'West Bay' to 'best way'.

Example: I often visit social media websites, especially Instagram, because it helps me relax and pass my free time effectively. For example, I enjoy scrolling through photos and videos that entertain me after studying.

Suggestion: Provide a clear and concise answer with proper sentence structure. Avoid redundancy by not repeating previous answers. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about why you like the websites you mention.

Example: My favourite website is Instagram because it helps me stay connected with friends and relax. Additionally, when I have free time, I enjoy watching Punjabi movies on a popular website, which makes me feel closer to my culture.

Suggestion: Focus on clarity and correct grammar. Use linking words to explain changes clearly and provide specific examples. Avoid vague phrases like 'improved their mistake' and instead say 'improved their features' or 'performance'.

Example: Yes, websites have changed a lot recently. For instance, they load much faster and are easier to use, which makes browsing more convenient and enjoyable.

Suggestion: Avoid negative or unclear expressions like 'junk people'. Use polite and clear language. Start with a direct answer, then add specific examples and reasons using linking words. Also, correct grammar and vocabulary errors.

Example: In my country, social media websites like Instagram are very popular, especially among young people. Many use these sites to relax and stay connected with friends.

× On my daily basis, I have to visit lots of website as I am a student, but the often, uh, website that, that I use on my entire basis that is Instagram as it, I think it is a West Bay to reduce our stress and best way to kill our free time.

✓ On my daily basis, I have to visit lots of websites as I am a student, but the often, uh, website that I use on my entire basis is Instagram as I think it is a best way to reduce our stress and the best way to kill our free time.

The word 'website' should be plural 'websites' when referring to many. Also, 'best way' needs the definite article 'the' before it to be grammatically correct. Using plural forms correctly and articles properly improves clarity and correctness.

× On my daily basis, I have to visit lots of website as I am a student, but the often, uh, website that, that I use on my entire basis that is Instagram as it, I think it is a West Bay to reduce our stress and best way to kill our free time.

✓ On my daily basis, I have to visit lots of websites as I am a student, but the often, uh, website that I use on my entire basis is Instagram as I think it is a best way to reduce our stress and the best way to kill our free time.

The phrase 'on my daily basis' is incorrect; it should be 'on a daily basis' to express frequency properly. Prepositions must be used correctly to convey the intended meaning.

× On my daily basis, I have to visit lots of website as I am a student, but the often, uh, website that, that I use on my entire basis that is Instagram as it, I think it is a West Bay to reduce our stress and best way to kill our free time.

✓ On a daily basis, I have to visit lots of websites as I am a student, but the website I often use is Instagram because I think it is the best way to reduce our stress and to kill our free time.

The original sentence is long and confusing with repeated words and unclear structure. Simplifying and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Umm that I already mentioned that my favorite website is Instagram. It's best way to kill my free time.

✓ Umm, as I already mentioned, my favorite website is Instagram. It's the best way to kill my free time.

The phrase 'best way' requires the definite article 'the' before it. Also, adding commas improves sentence flow.

× However, as I live alone a far away from my family and my friends.

✓ However, as I live alone far away from my family and my friends.

The phrase 'a far away' is incorrect; 'far away' should be used without 'a' as it is an adverbial phrase describing distance.

× So to kill my time as I have a holiday one day so I used to visit Punjabi movies www.com which is a quite famous.

✓ So to kill my time when I have a holiday, I visit Punjabi movies websites like www.com, which is quite famous.

The phrase 'used to visit' implies a past habit, but the context suggests a current habit, so present tense 'visit' is appropriate. Also, 'a quite famous' is incorrect; 'quite famous' suffices.

× As we all know that technology increased day by day and it improved their mistake.

✓ As we all know, technology increases day by day and it improves its mistakes.

The verb tense should be present to indicate ongoing action. Also, 'their mistake' is incorrect; 'its mistakes' is correct because 'technology' is singular and requires singular possessive pronoun.

× For example, nowadays if I have to go a website, it's very easy and convenient and it's like just a one second.

✓ For example, nowadays if I have to go to a website, it's very easy and convenient and it takes just one second.

The phrase 'have to go a website' is missing the preposition 'to'. Also, 'it's like just a one second' is awkward; 'it takes just one second' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× So nowadays it's very easy to visit a new website by without any kind of error.

✓ So nowadays it's very easy to visit a new website without any kind of error.

The phrase 'by without' is incorrect; only 'without' is needed to express the absence of errors.

× Umm the popularity of websites are quite on peak level in my country because most of junk people like to kill their time on websites but as far as I know as all ha all are my same age.

✓ Umm, the popularity of websites is quite at a peak level in my country because most young people like to kill their time on websites, but as far as I know, we are all about the same age.

'Popularity' is singular and requires singular verb 'is'. 'Junk people' is incorrect; likely 'young people' is intended. Also, sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× If I talk about myself, I am very adore to using Instagram and I think that they are also like to use Instagram because it's the best way to feel relaxed.

✓ If I talk about myself, I really adore using Instagram and I think that others also like to use Instagram because it's the best way to feel relaxed.

'I am very adore to using' is incorrect; 'I really adore using' is correct. 'They are also like to use' is incorrect; 'others also like to use' is appropriate. Pronouns must agree with their antecedents and be used correctly.