Part 1
Examiner
What subject do you think is the most challenging at school?
Candidate
I think mass is the most challenging subject at school because if you want to be good at mass, you need to have a smart brain and a good tale intelligence.
Examiner
Do you like to challenge yourself?
Candidate
Yes, I like to challenge myself because when I encountered difficulties, I feel a strong sense of achievement. Which will help me enhance my confidence.
Examiner
Do you like to live a life that has a lot of challenges?
Candidate
Yes, I like to live a life that has a lot of challenges be 'cause I can enhance not only my confidence but also my leadership when I try to solve the problems.
Examiner
How do you usually deal with challenges in daily life?
Candidate
Most of the time I deal with the challenges by myself, but sometimes I ask her others for help who can give me some useful information and advice from another perspective.
What subject do you think is the most challenging at school?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 你的回答中有词汇错误(如“mass”应为“math”,“tale intelligence”应为“talent”或“intelligence”),影响了表达的准确性。建议使用正确的词汇,并且回答时可以更具体地说明为什么数学难,比如涉及逻辑思维和计算能力。
Example: I think math is the most challenging subject at school because it requires strong logical thinking and problem-solving skills, which can be difficult for many students.
Do you like to challenge yourself?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: 回答表达基本清晰,但句子连接不够自然,第二句是一个不完整的句子。建议使用连词使句子更连贯,同时可以增加具体例子来丰富内容。
Example: Yes, I like to challenge myself because when I overcome difficulties, I feel a strong sense of achievement, which helps boost my confidence. For example, I once learned a difficult skill by practicing every day.
Do you like to live a life that has a lot of challenges?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答中有口语化错误(“be 'cause”应为“because”),表达稍显简单。建议注意发音和拼写,同时可以用更丰富的词汇和句式表达观点。
Example: Yes, I enjoy living a life full of challenges because it helps me improve not only my confidence but also my leadership skills when I face and solve problems.
How do you usually deal with challenges in daily life?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答中有语法和用词错误(如“ask her others”应为“ask others”),句子结构不够流畅。建议注意语法正确性,并使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Example: Most of the time, I deal with challenges by myself, but sometimes I ask others for help because they can provide useful information and advice from different perspectives.
× I think mass is the most challenging subject at school because if you want to be good at mass, you need to have a smart brain and a good tale intelligence.
✓ I think math is the most challenging subject at school because if you want to be good at math, you need to have a smart brain and good talent intelligence.
这里“mass”应为“math”(数学),属于词汇错误,不在语法问题列表中,但“tale intelligence”应为“talent intelligence”,形容词使用错误,需改正。
× Yes, I like to challenge myself because when I encountered difficulties, I feel a strong sense of achievement. Which will help me enhance my confidence.
✓ Yes, I like to challenge myself because when I encounter difficulties, I feel a strong sense of achievement, which helps me enhance my confidence.
“Which will help me enhance my confidence.”是一个不完整的句子,应与前句合并,形成复合句,避免句子结构错误。
× Yes, I like to live a life that has a lot of challenges be 'cause I can enhance not only my confidence but also my leadership when I try to solve the problems.
✓ Yes, I like to live a life that has a lot of challenges because I can enhance not only my confidence but also my leadership when I try to solve problems.
“be 'cause”是口语缩写形式,不适合书面表达,应使用“because”。此外,“the problems”前的定冠词“the”不必要,应去掉。
× Most of the time I deal with the challenges by myself, but sometimes I ask her others for help who can give me some useful information and advice from another perspective.
✓ Most of the time I deal with the challenges by myself, but sometimes I ask others for help who can give me some useful information and advice from another perspective.
“ask her others”中“her”多余且错误,应去掉,正确用法是“ask others”。