Challenges— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多く、内容も具体性に欠けています。より自然で効果的な英語表現を使い、具体的な理由や例を加えると良いでしょう。例えば、"Science was the most challenging subject for me because I found it hard to see how it applies to real life. For example, I struggled to understand the practical uses of scientific concepts."のように答えると良いです。

Example: Science was the most challenging subject for me because I found it hard to see how it applies to real life. For example, I struggled to understand the practical uses of scientific concepts.

Suggestion: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法や語彙の誤りがあり、表現がやや不自然です。より自然な英語を使い、文を簡潔にし、具体的な例を明確に述べると良いでしょう。例えば、"Yes, I enjoy new challenges because as a journalist, I need to research interesting topics and write articles. For instance, I often look for stories about famous people."のように答えると良いです。

Example: Yes, I enjoy new challenges because as a journalist, I need to research interesting topics and write articles. For instance, I often look for stories about famous people.

Suggestion: 回答は質問に答えていますが、言い淀みや不自然な表現が多く、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。より明確で流暢な表現を使い、具体的な理由や将来の希望を整理して述べると良いでしょう。例えば、"Yes, to some extent I like challenges, but as an introverted person, I prefer a stable life. However, in the near future, I want to find a job that offers new challenges."のように答えると良いです。

Example: Yes, to some extent I like challenges, but as an introverted person, I prefer a stable life. However, in the near future, I want to find a job that offers new challenges.

Suggestion: 回答は質問に答えていますが、言い淀みや文法の誤りが多く、表現が不自然です。より流暢で正確な英語を使い、具体的な方法や効果を明確に述べると良いでしょう。例えば、"When I face challenges, I usually ask my colleagues or boss for support because they have more experience. Their help makes me more confident to overcome difficulties."のように答えると良いです。

Example: When I face challenges, I usually ask my colleagues or boss for support because they have more experience. Their help makes me more confident to overcome difficulties.

× In my memory, a science was the very big challenge for me to understand because the subject is not related to the actual society.

✓ In my memory, science was a very big challenge for me to understand because the subject is not related to actual society.

The article 'a' before 'science' is incorrect because 'science' is an uncountable noun here and does not need an article. Also, 'the very big challenge' should be 'a very big challenge' because it is a general statement, not a specific one. 'The actual society' should be 'actual society' without 'the' because 'society' is used in a general sense.

× I can't imagine what are useful of the science is even now I can't understand it.

✓ I can't imagine what is useful about science; even now, I can't understand it.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and unnecessary words. 'What are useful of the science is' is incorrect; it should be 'what is useful about science'. Also, the sentence is a run-on and needs to be split or connected properly with punctuation.

× Yes, I like a new challenge because I am a journalist.

✓ Yes, I like new challenges because I am a journalist.

The phrase 'a new challenge' is less natural here; 'new challenges' (plural) fits better to express general liking. Also, 'a journalist' is correct here as it refers to the profession.

× I have to search a new subject and a very interesting story and writing it down on the article.

✓ I have to search for new subjects and very interesting stories and write them down in articles.

The verb 'search' requires the preposition 'for'. Also, 'a new subject and a very interesting story' should be plural to match the general context. 'Writing it down on the article' is incorrect; it should be 'write them down in articles'. The sentence structure is improved by parallel verb forms.

× So I always do my challenge, for example, searching for the very famous person.

✓ So I always take on challenges, for example, searching for very famous people.

'Do my challenge' is unnatural; 'take on challenges' is better. 'Searching for the very famous person' is incorrect because 'the' is unnecessary and 'person' should be plural to generalize.

× Yes, in some extent I like challenging, uh, but it seems that, uh, I am very introverted person as a journalist.

✓ Yes, to some extent I like challenging myself, but it seems that I am a very introverted person as a journalist.

The phrase 'in some extent' should be 'to some extent'. 'I like challenging' is incomplete; 'challenging myself' is clearer. Also, 'very introverted person' needs the article 'a' before 'very'.

× Uh, I don't like uh, unchanged and uh, stable lives.

✓ I don't like unchanging and stable lives.

'Unchanged' is an adjective but 'unchanging' better describes a life that does not change. Also, 'uh' fillers should be omitted for clarity.

× Umm, in the near future I want to search such a job.

✓ In the near future, I want to find such a job.

The verb 'search' is usually followed by 'for' and an object; 'search such a job' is incorrect. 'Find' is more appropriate here. Also, 'Umm' filler should be omitted.

× Uh, when I face some challenges, uh, I always ask the supporter for my colleagues or my boss, uh, because there are many person who, uh, experienced well about the new challenges.

✓ When I face some challenges, I always ask for support from my colleagues or my boss because there are many people who have experience with new challenges.

'Ask the supporter for my colleagues' is incorrect; it should be 'ask for support from my colleagues'. 'Many person' should be 'many people'. 'Experienced well about' is incorrect; 'have experience with' is correct.

× Umm, they are always supportive to me and uh, uh, it makes me confident to challenge.

✓ They are always supportive to me, and it makes me confident to face challenges.

'Supportive to me' is acceptable but 'supportive of me' is more common. 'Confident to challenge' is awkward; 'confident to face challenges' is clearer. Also, filler words should be omitted.