Challenges— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve accuracy, clarity and coherence. Begin with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (singular/plural, verb forms), and use logical linking words. Be specific about what made chemistry difficult (e.g., concepts, calculations, lab work), and mention steps you took to improve. Keep the response under 5 sentences and avoid redundant phrases.

Example: I found chemistry was the most challenging subject in high school because its concepts and calculations were hard to understand. To cope, I attended extra tutoring classes and practiced problem sets every week. Gradually, with guided practice and repeated review, my understanding improved and I eventually scored 80% in the subject.

Suggestion: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct awkward phrasing (e.g., 'I love to challenge myself'), and use linking words to show sequence. Specify one or two typical ways you challenge yourself and the mindset or strategies you use.

Example: Yes, I enjoy challenging myself because it helps me grow. For example, when I face a difficult task I first take a deep breath to calm down, then break the task into smaller steps and tackle them one by one with confidence and energy.

Suggestion: Clarify and correct grammar and pronouns, and avoid repetition. Give a concise opinion sentence and support it with a specific reason or example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'therefore' to connect ideas and keep under five sentences.

Example: Yes, I prefer a life with challenges because they keep me motivated and help me grow. For instance, overcoming setbacks at work has made me more resilient and increased my confidence.

Suggestion: Make the sequence clearer and fix grammatical errors and awkward words ('sorry'). Use linking words to structure steps and provide a concrete example of how you solved a recent problem. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

Example: At first I usually feel a little nervous, but I take a deep breath to calm myself. Then I analyze the problem, make a simple plan, and work on it step by step. For example, when I missed a deadline at university, I prioritized tasks and worked extra hours to finish on time.

× One of the hardest subject during my high school I found was none other than chemistry.

✓ One of the hardest subjects during my high school years I found was none other than chemistry.

The noun 'subject' should be plural 'subjects' after 'one of the' because it refers to an item among many. Also 'during my high school' is missing a noun; use 'during my high school years' to be natural. Suggestion: Use 'one of the + plural noun' and include 'years' after 'high school' when referring to the period.

× Chemistry has several chemical location which I found difficult to solve.

✓ Chemistry has several chemical concepts which I found difficult to understand.

The phrase 'chemical location' is incorrect and unclear; likely intended 'concepts' or 'topics'. Also 'difficult to solve' is better as 'difficult to understand' for academic topics. Use a noun that fits the subject matter and a verb appropriate to learning. Suggestion: Replace unclear noun phrases with 'concepts', 'topics', or 'problems' as appropriate.

× I took extra classes for this subject.

✓ I took extra classes for this subject.

Sentence is grammatically correct; no article error. No change necessary.

× However, overtime and experience I got 80% marks in my chemistry subject.

✓ However, over time and with experience I got 80% marks in my chemistry course.

'overtime' (one word) is incorrect here; use 'over time' (two words) meaning 'as time passed'. Also 'and experience' needs a preposition: 'with experience'. 'Chemistry subject' is awkward; 'chemistry course' or simply 'chemistry' is better. Suggestion: Use 'over time' for gradual change and add 'with' before 'experience'.

× Definitely, I love myself to face any problem in life and whenever I see a difficult part, I always put my effort to solve the problem.

✓ Definitely, I love to challenge myself to face any problem in life, and whenever I see a difficult part, I always put in the effort to solve it.

'Love myself to face' incorrectly places 'myself'; use 'love to challenge myself' or 'love to face'. Also 'put my effort' should be 'put in the effort'. Pronoun 'the problem' better as 'it' to avoid repetition. Suggestion: Use reflexive pronoun correctly after verbs like 'challenge' and use the idiom 'put in the effort'.

× First of all, I always take a deep breath and then I find a solution with full confidence and posting energy.

✓ First of all, I always take a deep breath and then find a solution with full confidence and positive energy.

'Posting energy' is incorrect; 'positive energy' is appropriate. Also 'I find' and 'then I find' both acceptable; repetition of 'I' can be reduced. Use 'positive' (adjective) to modify 'energy'. Suggestion: Replace incorrect collocation with 'positive energy'.

× Definitely, I believe that without difficulties lies would be a boring to enjoy the life.

✓ Definitely, I believe that without difficulties life would be boring.

Word order is wrong: 'lies would be a boring to enjoy the life' is ungrammatical. Correct structure is 'life would be boring'. Remove extra articles and unnecessary verbs. Suggestion: Keep subject 'life' directly before the verb and use 'boring' as adjective.

× I believe you should definitely face any difficulty in their life.

✓ I believe you should definitely face any difficulty in your life.

Pronoun disagreement: 'their' does not agree with 'you'. Use 'your' when addressing the listener. Also 'any difficulty' is fine. Suggestion: Ensure pronouns match the intended subject; use 'your' for 'you'.

× In this way you can enjoy your life in the real way and get internally happiness and confidence.

✓ In this way you can enjoy your life in a real way and gain inner happiness and confidence.

'In the real way' is awkward; use 'in a real way'. 'Internally happiness' is incorrect; use 'inner happiness' or 'internal happiness' and 'gain' fits better than 'get'. Suggestion: Use 'inner happiness' and 'gain' for more natural English.

× In the beginning, first of all I always feel a little nervous.

✓ At the beginning, I always feel a little nervous.

'In the beginning, first of all' is redundant; 'At the beginning' is more natural. Present tense 'feel' is fine if describing habitual reaction. Suggestion: Avoid redundant time phrases; choose one.

× However, then I take a deep breath and try to keep calm myself.

✓ Then I take a deep breath and try to keep calm.

'Keep calm myself' incorrectly places 'myself'; the correct phrase is 'keep calm' or 'keep myself calm'. Either remove 'myself' or place it after 'keep': 'keep myself calm'. Suggestion: Use 'keep calm' or 'keep myself calm'.

× Then I find the solution for the problem.

✓ Then I find a solution to the problem.

'Find the solution for the problem' is understandable but 'find a solution to the problem' is more idiomatic. Use 'a' to indicate one possible solution and 'to' rather than 'for'. Suggestion: Use 'find a solution to' for natural phrasing.

× With dedication and hard work I always sorry, solve the problem.

✓ With dedication and hard work, I always, sorry, solve the problem.

The original contains 'sorry' incorrectly inserted and punctuation issues. If the speaker meant to apologize mid-sentence, indicate with commas: 'I always, sorry, solve the problem.' Better: 'With dedication and hard work, I always manage to solve the problem.' Suggestion: Remove the misplaced 'sorry' or rephrase to 'I always manage to solve the problem' for clarity.