Holidays— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and detailed. Avoid redundancy like 'different sightseeing and places' and provide specific examples. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: For my last holiday, I went to Amsterdam, which was truly memorable. We visited famous sights such as the Anne Frank House and enjoyed the beautiful tulip gardens, which were in full bloom.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more natural expressions and linking words. Try to avoid repeating similar ideas and be more concise.

Example: I love holidays because they give me a chance to relax and recharge. As a result, I return feeling motivated and full of energy to start fresh.

Suggestion: There are some repetitions and minor grammar issues. Try to avoid repeating words and use linking words to make your answer smoother. Also, add more specific details about the celebration.

Example: My favorite public holiday is New Year's because my whole family gets together to celebrate. We exchange presents and enjoy a festive meal, which makes it a very special and joyful occasion.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and structured. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy like 'try to' twice. Provide more specific details.

Example: On holidays, I usually meet up with friends and engage in activities such as hiking or long walks to stay fit and enjoy nature.

Suggestion: There are repetitions and the answer lacks coherence. Use linking words to connect contrasting ideas and avoid repeating words. Be more specific about the activities.

Example: When I'm very tired, I prefer to stay at home and rest. However, I also like to go out occasionally to do different activities like visiting a café or going for a short walk.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and use linking words to improve flow. Also, correct minor grammar mistakes.

Example: I prefer busy holidays because I find them more interesting. I like to use my time wisely by exploring new places instead of just lying on the beach doing nothing.

Suggestion: Your answer is very brief and contains incomplete sentences. Try to provide a clear topic sentence and supporting details with linking words. Avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

Example: I would definitely prefer an exciting holiday because I enjoy new experiences and adventures. For me, a holiday should be interesting and full of energy rather than quiet and calm.

× We visited different sightseeing and places we saw tulips.

✓ We visited different sights and places, and we saw tulips.

The word 'sightseeing' is a noun referring to the activity, not the places. The correct plural noun for places to see is 'sights'. Also, a comma and conjunction 'and' are needed to connect the two clauses properly.

× I love holidays because it gives you a chance to relax and then when you are back you can start from scratch and you have more energy and more motivation.

✓ I love holidays because they give you a chance to relax, and then when you are back, you can start from scratch and have more energy and motivation.

The subject 'holidays' is plural, so the verb should be 'give' instead of 'gives'. Also, 'they' should be used instead of 'it' to agree with the plural subject.

× I love New Years because because we get together all family and celebrate together.

✓ I love New Year's because we get together with all the family and celebrate together.

'New Years' should be 'New Year's' to refer to the holiday. Also, 'all family' is incorrect; it should be 'all the family' or 'the whole family'. The preposition 'with' is needed before 'all the family'.

× I love New Years because because we get together all family and celebrate together.

✓ I love New Year's because we get together with all the family and celebrate together.

The verb 'get together' requires the preposition 'with' before the group of people. Omitting 'with' is incorrect.

× We buy presents for each other and it's it's beautiful, beautiful holiday.

✓ We buy presents for each other, and it's a beautiful holiday.

The repetition of 'it's' and 'beautiful' is unnecessary and incorrect. Removing the duplicates improves clarity and correctness.

× I try to go out to meet friends and do some activities like hiking or just walking long distance and try to stay fit.

✓ I try to go out to meet friends and do some activities like hiking or just walking long distances and try to stay fit.

The phrase 'walking long distance' should be pluralized to 'walking long distances' to indicate multiple or extended walks.

× I try to go out to meet friends and do some activities like hiking or just walking long distance and try to stay fit.

✓ I try to go out to meet friends and do some activities like hiking or just walking long distances and try to stay fit.

The phrase 'walking long distance' should be pluralized to 'walking long distances' to indicate multiple or extended walks.

× I love New Years because because we get together all family and celebrate together.

✓ I love New Year's because we get together with all the family and celebrate together.

The pronoun 'all family' is incorrect; it should be 'all the family' to correctly refer to the group.

× I love New Years because because we get together all family and celebrate together.

✓ I love New Year's because we get together with all the family and celebrate together.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'family' to specify the particular group being referred to.

× it's it's beautiful, beautiful holiday.

✓ it's a beautiful holiday.

The indefinite article 'a' is required before 'beautiful holiday' to form a correct noun phrase.

× Should be always exciting and interesting.

✓ It should always be exciting and interesting.

The sentence lacks a subject and the correct word order. Adding 'It' as subject and placing 'always' before the verb 'be' corrects the sentence.

× Should be always exciting and interesting.

✓ It should always be exciting and interesting.

The original sentence is missing a subject and has incorrect word order. Adding the subject 'It' and placing 'always' before 'be' corrects the structure.