Holidays— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về địa điểm và trải nghiệm của bạn. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ đúng cách, ví dụ như 'family's' nên là 'family' hoặc 'my family members'.

Example: I went to Da Nang for my last holiday. It was a fantastic trip because I got to spend quality time with my relatives and siblings, which I don't often have the chance to do.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ hợp lý để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý đến ngữ pháp số nhiều và số ít, ví dụ 'times of the years' nên là 'times of the year'.

Example: Yes, I definitely like holidays because they are the only times of the year when I can spend a long period with my family. Also, holidays allow me to fully relax and enjoy every moment with my relatives.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên giới thiệu tên ngày lễ chính xác và giải thích lý do thích ngày lễ đó một cách mạch lạc. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu văn trôi chảy hơn.

Example: My favorite public holiday is Tet Holiday, which is the Vietnamese New Year. I like it because I don't have to go to school, and I can spend quality time with my family, making it very memorable.

Suggestion: Bạn nên tránh dùng từ lặp lại và câu quá dài. Hãy sử dụng liên từ phù hợp để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

Example: On holidays, I usually relax by sleeping and watching movies in bed. This helps me unwind after a long day of work and makes me feel comfortable.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời cần ngắn gọn và tránh lặp từ như 'definitely'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn. Ngoài ra, chú ý ngữ pháp số nhiều và số ít, ví dụ 'long holidays' nên là 'long holiday'.

Example: Yes, I like spending my days at home, especially during long holidays. I usually stay in my room, watch movies, and relax.

Suggestion: Bạn nên dùng từ chính xác hơn, ví dụ 'free holiday' nên là 'leisurely holiday'. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng liên từ hợp lý.

Example: I prefer a leisurely holiday because after working hard for a long time, I need rest to recharge my energy and feel more confident and relaxed.

Suggestion: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và câu dài không cần thiết. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'peaceful whole day' nên là 'a peaceful holiday'.

Example: Because I am an introvert, I prefer a peaceful holiday. It helps me unwind, relax, and feel comfortable in a quiet atmosphere.

× It was the land where I last went to visit with my family's.

✓ It was the land where I last went to visit my family.

The use of 'my family's' is incorrect here because 'family's' is possessive singular and does not fit the context. The correct form is 'my family' without the possessive apostrophe. Also, 'visit with' is redundant; 'visit' alone is sufficient.

× It was fantastic trip since I cannot spend time with my relative as well as my siblings after.

✓ It was a fantastic trip since I could not spend time with my relatives as well as my siblings afterwards.

The sentence lacks the indefinite article 'a' before 'fantastic trip'. Also, 'relative' should be plural 'relatives' to match the context. 'Cannot' should be past tense 'could not' to match 'was'. 'After' should be 'afterwards' for correct adverbial use.

× Yes, definitely, since it is the only times of the years that I can spend time with my family for a long period and also it's a time when I can fully relax and enjoy moments every moment I share with my relatives.

✓ Yes, definitely, since it is the only time of the year that I can spend time with my family for a long period and also it's a time when I can fully relax and enjoy every moment I share with my relatives.

The phrase 'times of the years' is incorrect; it should be singular 'time of the year' to match 'only'. Also, 'enjoy moments every moment' is redundant; 'enjoy every moment' is correct.

× I definitely go with Ted Holiday is a national holiday in Vietnam to celebrate New Year and it was very memorable since I can I don't have to go to school, but still can share my time with my families and all that.

✓ I definitely choose Tet Holiday, which is a national holiday in Vietnam to celebrate the New Year. It was very memorable since I didn't have to go to school but could still spend time with my family.

The original sentence is a run-on and lacks proper structure. 'Go with' is incorrect; 'choose' fits better. 'Ted Holiday' should be 'Tet Holiday'. 'Families' should be singular 'family'. The sentence is split for clarity and correct tense usage.

× And yeah, it's made me feel comfortable.

✓ And yeah, it has made me feel comfortable.

The phrase 'it's made' is a contraction of 'it is made', which is incorrect here. The correct form is 'it has made' to indicate present perfect tense.

× Definitely yes, especially when it is a long holidays, I would definitely spend all my time that I can to stay at my home and especially my room to watch movie and relax.

✓ Definitely yes, especially when it is a long holiday, I would definitely spend all the time I can staying at home, especially in my room, to watch movies and relax.

'Holidays' should be singular 'holiday' after 'a long'. 'All my time that I can' is awkward; 'all the time I can' is better. 'Watch movie' should be plural 'watch movies'. 'Stay at my home' is better as 'staying at home'.

× I'll go with a free holiday since I don't want to work after a long period of working all day, so some rest is neat and crucial for me to recharge my energy to be more confident and relax.

✓ I'll go with a free holiday since I don't want to work after a long period of working all day, so some rest is neat and crucial for me to recharge my energy, be more confident, and relax.

The sentence is mostly correct but needs parallel structure in the list: 'to recharge my energy, be more confident, and relax.'

× Because I'm an introvert person so I love to stay in some quiet and peaceful atmosphere.

✓ Because I'm an introverted person, I love to stay in a quiet and peaceful atmosphere.

'Introvert person' is incorrect; the adjective form 'introverted person' is correct. Also, 'some quiet and peaceful atmosphere' should be 'a quiet and peaceful atmosphere' for specificity.

× So I'll definitely go with peaceful whole day since it's helped me to unwind and help me to relax, make me feel comfortable as well.

✓ So I'll definitely go with a peaceful whole day since it helps me to unwind, relax, and feel comfortable as well.

The sentence has tense inconsistency and awkward phrasing. 'It's helped' should be 'it helps' to match the present preference. The verbs should be parallel: 'unwind, relax, and feel comfortable.' Also, 'peaceful whole day' needs an article: 'a peaceful whole day.'