Holidays— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Apni uttor e boro bhabe spostho bhabe bolben je apni kothay gesilen, ke ke chhilen, ebong ki korchilen. Sentence gulo shothik grammar ebong shobdo babohar korun. Apnar uttor 3-4 sentence er modhye thakle bhalo hoy.

Example: I went to Fox's Buzzer for my last holiday with my family. My parents, sister, brother, and some cousins joined me. We spent quality time together enjoying the beautiful scenery and local food.

Suggestion: Apni uttor e spostho bhabe bolben keno apni chhuti pochondo koren. Apnar kotha gulo shothik grammar ebong shobdo babohar kore, sentence gulo shangjog korte linking words babohar korun.

Example: Yes, I like holidays because they give us memorable moments. During holidays, we can spend free time with ourselves and our family, which is very enjoyable.

Suggestion: Apni uttor e spostho bhabe bolben kon chhuti apnar priyo ebong keno. Apnar kotha gulo shothik grammar ebong shobdo babohar kore, sentence gulo shangjog korte linking words babohar korun. Apnar uttor e aro specific details add korte paren.

Example: I like Eid holidays the best in my country because it is a very important festival for Muslims. During Eid, we celebrate with family and friends, and everyone feels very happy.

Suggestion: Apni uttor e spostho bhabe bolben apni chhuti te ki koren. Shothik grammar ebong shobdo babohar korun. Sentence gulo shangjog korte linking words babohar korun ebong specific details add korun.

Example: On holidays, I do many things. Sometimes I go outside with my family or friends. Other times, I take care of myself by visiting a parlor for skin and body care.

Suggestion: Apni uttor e spostho bhabe bolben keno apni barite din katate pachondo koren. Shothik grammar ebong shobdo babohar korun. Sentence gulo shangjog korte linking words babohar korun.

Example: Yes, I like to spend my day at home because after many working days, I need to relax and refresh my mind. When I stay at home, I feel very relaxed.

Suggestion: Apni uttor e spostho bhabe bolben apni kon dhoroner chhuti pochondo koren ebong keno. Shothik grammar ebong shobdo babohar korun. Sentence gulo shangjog korte linking words babohar korun ebong specific details add korun.

Example: I prefer a leisurely holiday because during holidays, I can relax my mind and spend quality time with my family. It helps me refresh and enjoy my free time.

Suggestion: Apni uttor e spostho bhabe bolben apni exciting na peaceful chhuti pochondo koren ebong keno. Shothik grammar ebong shobdo babohar korun. Sentence gulo shangjog korte linking words babohar korun ebong specific details add korun.

Example: I prefer exciting holidays because my family and friends get very excited. We do many fun activities together. However, peaceful holidays are also special because they help relax the mind.

× I go to Fox's Buzzer for my last holiday with my family.

✓ I went to Fox's Buzzer for my last holiday with my family.

The sentence describes a past event, so the verb should be in the past tense 'went' instead of the present tense 'go'. In English, when talking about past holidays, use past tense verbs.

× There are my parents and my sister, brother and some cousin cousins.

✓ There are my parents, my sister, my brother, and some cousins.

The word 'cousin cousins' is incorrect; 'cousins' is the correct plural form. Also, listing family members requires commas and the plural form for multiple cousins.

× We all are. You know. We already we already spending.

✓ We all are together. You know, we have already spent time together.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. Correct sentence structure requires complete sentences with proper verb forms. 'We have already spent' is the correct present perfect tense to indicate completed action.

× holidays gives us such a memorable moment when holidays comes, uh, our life, we uh, spend umm, some free time for ourself and our family and some holidays we enjoy, umm.

✓ Holidays give us such memorable moments. When holidays come, we spend some free time for ourselves and our family, and we enjoy some holidays.

'Holidays' is plural, so the verb should be 'give' not 'gives'. Also, 'holidays comes' should be 'holidays come'. 'Ourself' should be 'ourselves' as the reflexive pronoun for plural subjects.

× I think in my country, Eid holidays in uh, I like best because when it holidays are coming, we all Muslims people are so many happy because this is the umm, uh, first priority, uh, list of our festivals and Eid holiday.

✓ I think in my country, Eid holidays are the best because when the holidays come, we Muslims are very happy since it is the most important festival for us.

'Eid holidays' is plural, so use 'are' instead of 'is'. 'It holidays' is incorrect; 'the holidays' is correct. 'So many happy' should be 'very happy'. Also, 'first priority list' is better expressed as 'most important festival'.

× I doing many of thing on holidays, uh, some of time I go outside with my family or friends or some of my holidays I take care of myself.

✓ I do many things on holidays. Sometimes I go outside with my family or friends, and sometimes I take care of myself during holidays.

The verb 'doing' is incorrect here; the base form 'do' is needed. 'Many of thing' should be 'many things'. 'Some of time' should be 'sometimes'.

× I going to prefer a parlor and some skin care, body care, uh, for myself when uh.

✓ I prefer going to a parlor for skin care and body care for myself.

'I going to prefer' is incorrect; it should be 'I prefer going'. The verb 'prefer' is followed by a gerund ('going'). Also, 'some skin care, body care' is better expressed as 'skin care and body care'.

× Yes, I like to spend my day at home, uh, uh, because for many of working day, umm, I need to relax and uh, fresh mind.

✓ Yes, I like to spend my day at home because after many working days, I need to relax and refresh my mind.

'For many of working day' is incorrect; it should be 'after many working days'. Also, 'fresh mind' should be 'refresh my mind' to express the action.

× Probably I prefer a literary holiday because when holidays, uh, are coming in our life, we relaxed our mind and we think that and, uh, we get a sum of free time, umm, that time we spend our quality time with my families and.

✓ Probably I prefer a leisurely holiday because when holidays come in our life, we relax our minds and think, and we get some free time. At that time, we spend quality time with my family.

'Literary holiday' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'leisurely'. 'Relaxed' should be 'relax' to match present tense. 'Sum of free time' should be 'some free time'. 'Families' should be 'family' when referring to one's own family.

× I prefer on board when exciting holidays are coming in our life.

✓ I prefer onboard when exciting holidays come in our life.

The phrase 'prefer on board' is incorrect; 'prefer onboard' is the correct form if referring to being on a ship or plane. Also, 'are coming' can be simplified to 'come' for habitual actions.

× Uh, our family members, our friends are so many excited on this holiday, umm, that holiday.

✓ Our family members and friends are very excited about this holiday.

'So many excited' is incorrect; it should be 'very excited'. Also, 'on this holiday' should be 'about this holiday' to express excitement.

× We do lots of things fun and a peaceful holiday also more special because peaceful holiday remains our uh, brain.

✓ We do lots of fun things, and a peaceful holiday is also special because it refreshes our brain.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Lots of things fun' should be 'lots of fun things'. 'Peaceful holiday remains our brain' is incorrect; 'refreshes our brain' or 'relaxes our mind' is appropriate.