Plants— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific supporting details using linking words to improve coherence. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors.

Example: Yes, I keep several plants at home because they enhance the appearance and atmosphere. For example, my mother takes care of a variety of flowers, fruits, and vegetables in our garden, which adds beauty and freshness to our home.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by correcting grammar and linking ideas more smoothly. Use linking words to connect your points and provide a clearer explanation.

Example: When I was young, I grew a Tulsi plant at home because it is considered very spiritual in Hindu culture. Many Hindu families keep Tulsi plants in front of their houses to bring positive energy. I enjoyed taking care of it as it made me feel connected to my culture.

Suggestion: Focus on clarity and grammatical accuracy. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and avoid awkward phrasing. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

Example: Yes, I know how to grow plants because my grandfather taught me when I was young. He explained that using fertilizer and kitchen waste can help plants grow well. Since then, I have enjoyed gardening with my own hands.

Suggestion: Improve sentence structure and grammar for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and complete your thoughts. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and ensure your answer is coherent and relevant.

Example: Yes, Chinese people often send plants as gifts because they symbolize good luck and prosperity. This practice is common not only in China but also in India, where giving plants shows respect and helps strengthen relationships between people.

× Definitely I keep plants at home for good appearance and as well As for based on the aesthetic of the building.

✓ Definitely I keep plants at home for good appearance as well as based on the aesthetic of the building.

The phrase 'and as well As for based on' is incorrect and redundant. The correct conjunction is 'as well as' to connect reasons properly. Use 'as well as' without 'and' or 'for' to improve sentence clarity.

× And also we have many varieties of plants in the garden where my mother take care of them and we have flowers, fruits and vegetables in our garden.

✓ And also we have many varieties of plants in the garden where my mother takes care of them, and we have flowers, fruits, and vegetables in our garden.

The verb 'take' does not agree with the singular subject 'my mother'. It should be 'takes'. Also, commas are added for clarity in the list of items.

× When I was young, I used to grow a Tulsi plant at home because it is considered very spiritual in Hindu culture.

✓ When I was young, I used to grow a Tulsi plant at home because it is considered very spiritual in Hindu culture.

No correction needed here as 'a Tulsi plant' is singular and correctly used.

× Many Hindu people families keep Tulsi plants in front of their house for spiritual reason and to bring positive energy.

✓ Many Hindu families keep Tulsi plants in front of their houses for spiritual reasons and to bring positive energy.

The phrase 'people families' is incorrect; 'families' alone suffices. 'House' should be plural 'houses' to match 'families'. 'Reason' should be plural 'reasons' as multiple reasons are implied.

× I enjoy taking care of plants as it connect me.

✓ I enjoy taking care of plants as it connects me.

The verb 'connect' should be in third person singular form 'connects' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× He thought me when I was young how to grow plants by using fertilizer and waste materials from the kitchen can also be used in plants growth.

✓ He taught me when I was young how to grow plants by using fertilizer, and waste materials from the kitchen can also be used to help plant growth.

The verb 'thought' is incorrect; the correct past tense of 'teach' is 'taught'. Also, 'plants growth' should be 'plant growth' and the sentence is restructured for clarity.

× By that I started engaging the plant with my own hand.

✓ By that, I started engaging with the plants with my own hands.

'Engaging the plant' is awkward; 'engaging with the plants' is better. 'Hand' should be plural 'hands' as both hands are usually used.

× Is Chinese people often send plants and give because they symbolize good luck and prosperity.

✓ Do Chinese people often send plants as gifts because they symbolize good luck and prosperity?

The sentence structure is incorrect. The correct question form is 'Do Chinese people often send plants as gifts...'. Also, 'give' is unnecessary and 'as gifts' clarifies the meaning.

× It is common practice not only in China but also in India where clever plans shows respect and helps strength relationship between people.

✓ It is common practice not only in China but also in India where giving plants shows respect and helps strengthen relationships between people.

'Clever plans' is incorrect; it should be 'giving plants'. 'Shows' should agree with singular subject 'giving plants'. 'Strength' should be 'strengthen' (verb), and 'relationship' should be plural 'relationships'.

× Such gifts are accepted for the beauty and.

✓ Such gifts are accepted for their beauty and significance.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'and'. Adding 'significance' completes the thought and improves sentence structure.