Plants— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer has good content but contains several language errors and unclear phrases that affect clarity. Try to use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'plants' instead of 'plans', 'flowers' instead of 'pores', 'plants' instead of 'flats') and avoid repetition. Also, keep your sentences concise and clear, and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I enjoy keeping plants at home. I have a small garden where I grow various fruits and vegetables. In the early morning, when the flowers bloom, they make my home feel lively and cheerful. Overall, having plants adds a refreshing atmosphere to my living space.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant and personal, which is good. However, work on grammar and sentence structure to improve clarity. Avoid repetition and use linking words to connect ideas. For example, use 'when I was young' instead of 'when I was a young', and 'it has grown very big' instead of 'he's becomes too much big'.

Example: When I was young, I grew several plants, but I especially remember growing an orange tree with my father. It has grown very big now, and I still enjoy picking fresh oranges from it. Spending time with the tree brings back many happy childhood memories.

Suggestion: Your answer shows understanding but is unclear due to grammar mistakes and incomplete sentences. Use correct verb tenses and sentence structures. Also, organize your explanation logically using linking words like 'first', 'then', and 'finally'. Avoid repetition and ensure your answer is complete.

Example: Yes, I know how to grow plants because I used to grow various kinds with my father. For example, to grow lady fingers, first, we plant the seeds in soil. Then, we water them regularly and apply fertilizers to help their growth. Finally, we use pesticides to protect the plants from insects.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but has grammar errors and some unclear phrases. Use correct verb forms ('it depends' instead of 'it is depend') and avoid repetition. Also, organize your ideas clearly and use linking words like 'however' or 'sometimes' to contrast ideas.

Example: It depends on the person and the occasion. From what I have learned, Chinese people often give plants as gifts because they symbolize good luck. However, sometimes they also give roses or handmade gifts, depending on the recipient's preferences.

× I really like to keep our plans in my home.

✓ I really like to keep our plants in my home.

The word 'plans' is incorrect here; the correct plural form for the living things is 'plants'. 'Plans' refers to intentions or arrangements, not living vegetation.

× I haven't had so many pores there.

✓ I haven't had so many plants there.

The word 'pores' is incorrect in this context. The intended word is 'plants' to refer to living vegetation. 'Pores' are tiny openings on surfaces, not related to plants.

× I grow different kinds of flats and when they when they are just blow out at early morning, it make my home become more cheerful, like a cherry on the cake.

✓ I grow different kinds of plants and when they just bloom early in the morning, they make my home more cheerful, like a cherry on the cake.

The word 'flats' is incorrect; it should be 'plants'. Also, 'blow out' is incorrect for flowers; the correct verb is 'bloom'. The subject-verb agreement is corrected from 'it make' to 'they make' because 'plants' is plural.

× Moreover, I had a small garden where I grow a different kinds of plants like fruits or vegetables.

✓ Moreover, I have a small garden where I grow different kinds of plants like fruits or vegetables.

The tense inconsistency is corrected by changing 'had' (past) to 'have' (present) to match the ongoing action of growing plants. Also, 'a different kinds' is incorrect; 'different kinds' without 'a' is correct.

× Well, when I was a young, I grew different kinds of plants.

✓ Well, when I was young, I grew different kinds of plants.

The article 'a' before 'young' is incorrect because 'young' is an adjective here, not a noun. The phrase should be 'when I was young'.

× I vividly remember that I had grown grown orange tree with my father and and till now he's becomes too much big and I got a fresh fruit from it also.

✓ I vividly remember that I had grown an orange tree with my father and till now it's become very big and I also get fresh fruit from it.

The phrase 'had grown grown' has a repeated word; one 'grown' is enough. 'Orange tree' needs the article 'an' before it. 'He's becomes' is incorrect; it should be 'it's become' to refer to the tree. 'Too much big' is incorrect; 'very big' is the correct form. 'I got' is changed to 'I also get' to indicate ongoing action.

× And most of the time I really like to spend a time with it because my childhood memory is also attached with it.

✓ And most of the time I really like to spend time with it because my childhood memories are also attached to it.

The phrase 'spend a time' is incorrect; it should be 'spend time' without 'a'. 'Memory' should be plural 'memories' to match the context. The preposition 'attached with' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'attached to'.

× I have grown a various kinds of flats with my father and I really enjoy it.

✓ I have grown various kinds of plants with my father and I really enjoy it.

The phrase 'a various kinds' is incorrect; 'various' already implies plural, so 'a' should be removed. Also, 'flats' should be 'plants'.

× Firstly we have to grow on a seed in a soil, then given a water or use some pesticides or fertilizers so that insects not not affected it to their growth and.

✓ Firstly, we have to plant a seed in soil, then give it water or use some pesticides or fertilizers so that insects do not affect its growth.

The phrase 'grow on a seed' is incorrect; 'plant a seed' is correct. 'In a soil' should be 'in soil' without 'a'. 'Given a water' should be 'give it water'. The phrase 'insects not not affected it to their growth' is incorrect; it should be 'insects do not affect its growth'.

× Well it is depend on the person.

✓ Well, it depends on the person.

The phrase 'it is depend' is incorrect; the correct form is 'it depends' using the third person singular present tense verb.

× Well I am very fond of collecting the informations related to different country and there I come to know that the Chinese people mainly send the plants as a gift.

✓ Well, I am very fond of collecting information related to different countries and there I came to know that Chinese people mainly send plants as gifts.

'Informations' is incorrect; 'information' is an uncountable noun and does not take a plural form. 'Different country' should be 'different countries' to indicate plural. 'The Chinese people' can be simplified to 'Chinese people'. 'The plants' should be 'plants' and 'as a gift' should be 'as gifts' to match plural.

× But it depend on the person or occasion because sometimes they are sent a roses or it may be a handmade gift that is depend on the preference of another one.

✓ But it depends on the person or occasion because sometimes they send roses or it may be a handmade gift; that depends on the preference of the other person.

'It depend' should be 'it depends' for subject-verb agreement. 'They are sent a roses' is incorrect; it should be 'they send roses'. 'That is depend' should be 'that depends'. 'Another one' is vague; 'the other person' is clearer.

× So I can't say that they are mainly.

✓ So I can't say that they mainly do.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb. Adding 'do' completes the sentence meaningfully.