Plants— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct subject-verb agreement. For example, say "Yes, I keep many plants on my balcony. My husband and I enjoy spending time there because it helps us relax and clear our minds."

Example: Yes, I keep many plants on my balcony. My husband and I enjoy spending time there because it helps us relax and clear our minds.

Suggestion: Focus on clarity and grammatical accuracy. Use linking words to organize your answer logically. Avoid repetition and be specific about the types of plants. For example, say "When I was young, I liked growing flowering plants to beautify our garden. I also grew organic vegetables in our vegetable garden."

Example: When I was young, I liked growing flowering plants to beautify our garden. I also grew organic vegetables in our vegetable garden.

Suggestion: Improve sentence structure and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Be specific and concise. For example, say "Yes, I know that plants need plenty of sunlight, fertile soil, and regular watering to grow well."

Example: Yes, I know that plants need plenty of sunlight, fertile soil, and regular watering to grow well.

Suggestion: Work on clarity and grammar. Use linking words to organize your ideas logically. Be specific and avoid vague expressions. For example, say "Yes, many Chinese people give flowering plants as gifts on special occasions to express their good wishes."

Example: Yes, many Chinese people give flowering plants as gifts on special occasions to express their good wishes.

× My husband also like plants and we like to spend our time there to make our mind calm and relax.

✓ My husband also likes plants and we like to spend our time there to make our minds calm and relaxed.

The subject 'My husband' is singular, so the verb should be 'likes' instead of 'like'. Also, 'mind' should be plural 'minds' because it refers to both people, and 'relax' should be 'relaxed' to correctly describe the state after calming.

× When I was a young girl, I like to plant different kinds of plant that is flowering and that makes our garden more beautiful.

✓ When I was a young girl, I liked to plant different kinds of flowering plants that made our garden more beautiful.

The sentence refers to a past time ('When I was a young girl'), so the verb 'like' should be in past tense 'liked'. Also, 'plant' should be plural 'plants' to match 'different kinds', and 'is' should be 'are' or better 'that made' to agree with plural subject and past tense.

× When I was a young girl, I like to plant different kinds of plant that is flowering and that makes our garden more beautiful.

✓ When I was a young girl, I liked to plant different kinds of flowering plants that made our garden more beautiful.

'Kinds' is plural, so 'plant' should be plural 'plants'. Also, 'that is flowering' should be 'flowering plants' to correctly describe the noun.

× And also with the the same kind of flowering plan, I also prefer to grow kind of plants, vegetable gardens and that produce different organic vegetables that was belongs to the city.

✓ And also with the same kind of flowering plant, I also prefer to grow kinds of plants, vegetable gardens that produce different organic vegetables that belong to the city.

'Plan' should be 'plant'. 'Kind of plants' should be 'kinds of plants' to indicate plural. 'That produce' is correct for plural 'vegetable gardens'. 'Was belongs' is incorrect; it should be 'belong' to agree with plural subject 'vegetables'.

× I know something about the growing of plant because we have to opt a very good place for growing plants that must get abundance of sunlight because the sun the plant need more sunlight and easy to watering the plants and the soil must be more fertile for the betterment of the plants are the main things we have to consider.

✓ I know something about growing plants because we have to choose a very good place for growing plants that must get an abundance of sunlight because plants need more sunlight and it should be easy to water the plants, and the soil must be fertile for the betterment of the plants; these are the main things we have to consider.

'Opt' is incorrect here; 'choose' is better. 'Growing of plant' should be 'growing plants'. 'Must get abundance' needs 'an' before 'abundance'. 'The sun the plant need' is incorrect; it should be 'plants need'. 'Easy to watering' should be 'easy to water'. 'Soil must be more fertile' is better as 'soil must be fertile'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Yes, I think it's like that when I was saying I go to know about that the most of the Chinese peoples are choosing this kind of flowering plants and flowers as a gift in some kind of occasions and to show they are allowed to us the other person.

✓ Yes, I think it's like that. When I was saying, I came to know that most Chinese people choose this kind of flowering plants and flowers as gifts on some occasions to show their respect to the other person.

'Peoples' should be 'people' as the plural of 'person'. 'Are choosing' is better as simple present 'choose' for general truth. 'Some kind of occasions' should be 'some occasions'. 'Allowed to us the other person' is incorrect; 'show their respect to the other person' is clearer and grammatically correct.