Plants— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but can be more natural and concise. Instead of 'I'd like keeping plants', say 'I like keeping plants'. Also, add a bit more detail to make it effective, for example, why you like plants.

Example: Yes, I like keeping plants at home because they make the environment fresh and lively.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive with 'plants' used multiple times. Try to use linking words and be more specific about the plants and their benefits.

Example: When I was young, I grew indoor plants like aloe vera and succulents, which require minimal care and add freshness to my room.

Suggestion: Your answer has some grammar issues and lacks coherence. Use linking words and correct sentence structure. For example, 'I know that plants need water, sufficient sunlight, and a suitable climate to grow well.'

Example: Yes, my father taught me how to grow plants when I was little. I know that plants need water, sufficient sunlight, and a suitable climate to grow well.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical errors. Be more specific and use linking words to connect ideas. For example, 'Yes, Chinese people often give plants as gifts because they symbolize love and prosperity. Moreover, plants bring a calming and refreshing atmosphere to the home.'

Example: Yes, Chinese people often give plants as gifts because they symbolize love and prosperity. Moreover, plants bring a calming and refreshing atmosphere to the home.

× Yes, I am fond of nature and I'd like keeping plants at home.

✓ Yes, I am fond of nature and I'd like to keep plants at home.

The verb 'like' is followed by the infinitive form 'to keep' rather than the gerund 'keeping' in this context. Using 'to keep' is grammatically correct here.

× Yes, everyone plants and plants as gift as well as Chinese people.

✓ Yes, everyone plants and sends plants as gifts, including Chinese people.

The original sentence lacks the verb 'sends' to indicate the action of giving plants as gifts. Also, 'plants as gift' should be pluralized to 'plants as gifts' to match the plural noun.

× It helps to bring more calming and refreshing aroma in the house.

✓ It helps to bring a more calming and refreshing aroma to the house.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'to' is the correct preposition to indicate the direction of the aroma. Also, the article 'a' is needed before 'more calming and refreshing aroma'.