Plants— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答不够自然，存在语法错误和重复表达，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇表达感受。

Example: Yes, I keep some flowers at home because I love planting. Watching my plants grow makes me feel relaxed and happy.

Suggestion: 语法错误较多，表达不连贯，建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，并避免口语填充词。

Example: When I was in primary school, I grew sunflowers. As I grew older, I started growing various flowers at home, such as roses.

Suggestion: 回答不完整且含糊，存在语法和词汇错误，建议完整表达观点，使用准确词汇，并避免重复和口语填充词。

Example: Yes, I know a little about growing plants. For example, you shouldn't overwater them because too much water can damage the roots. It's better to water them only when the soil is dry.

Suggestion: 表达不清晰，语法错误，建议使用更准确的表达方式，明确说明送植物的原因和祝福。

Example: Yes, Chinese people sometimes send plants as gifts when friends move to a new home. It is a way to wish them good health and prosperity.

× I find some flowers to make my homes look powerful due to a reason that I love planting very much and I enjoy planting and I enjoy looking my plant grow up.

✓ I find some flowers to make my home look beautiful because I love planting very much and I enjoy planting and I enjoy watching my plants grow.

homes 应为 home，表示家，单数形式；powerful 用于描述家不合适，改为 beautiful 更贴切；looking my plant grow up 结构不正确，改为 watching my plants grow。

× It may makes me relaxed.

✓ It may make me relaxed.

may 后面动词用原形，makes 应改为 make。

× I grow the sunflowers when I was a primary school student, but when I was grow up and I growed, uh, various, uh, flowers in my house such as rose and what else?

✓ I grew sunflowers when I was a primary school student, but when I grew up, I grew various flowers in my house such as roses.

grow 的过去式是 grew，growed 是错误形式；when I was grow up 应为 when I grew up；sunflowers 和 roses 应用复数形式。

× I enjoy looking my plant grow up.

✓ I enjoy watching my plants grow.

动词 enjoy 后应接动名词形式 watching，而不是 looking；grow up 通常用于人，植物用 grow 即可。

× if our friends, they move to a new home and we send some plan to them to wish them everyone's healthy and to earn some more money.

✓ If our friends move to a new home, we send some plants to them to wish them good health and to earn more money.

句中重复使用主语 our friends 和 they，造成冗余，应去掉 they；plan 应为 plants；everyone's healthy 结构错误，应为 wish them good health。