Plants— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Answer wa natural desu ga, 'so it improve our health' no you na grammar no shou sai wo kaizen suru hitsuyou ga arimasu. Mata, 'Yeah' wa formal na IELTS no kaiwa ni wa amari tekisetsu dewa arimasen. Motto seikaku na bunshou to retsugo wo tsukatte, motto rikai shi yasui you ni shite kudasai.

Example: Yes, I keep plants at home, especially the Tulsi plant, which is sacred in our culture and beneficial for health. For example, we often mix its leaves in water and drink it, which helps improve our well-being. Additionally, I enjoy its pleasant fragrance.

Suggestion: 'I tend to follow' wa genzai-kei no you ni kikoemasu ga, kako no koto wo hanasu toki wa kako-kei wo tsukau beki desu. Mata, 'so we can put them in our kitchen' wa motto meikaku ni shite kudasai. Motto seikaku na bunshou to retsugo wo tsukatte, imi wo meikaku ni shite kudasai.

Example: When I was young, I used to follow my mother, and we grew coriander leaves and green chillies to use in our kitchen. It was a pleasant experience.

Suggestion: Answer ni wa kurikaeshi ya imi ga wakarinikui bubun ga arimasu. 'Tourism' wa kontekusuto ni awanai kotoba desu. 'The swell' mo imi ga fumei desu. Motto seikaku na tango to bunshou wo tsukatte, imi wo meikaku ni shite kudasai. Repetition mo sakete kudasai.

Example: Yes, I know several things about growing plants, such as the importance of watering them according to their species. Another important factor is preparing the soil properly to help the plants grow well.

Suggestion: Answer ni wa eigo no tsukaikata no shippai ga arimasu. 'Sense planned' wa imi ga fumei de, 'money plan' mo fumei desu. Motto seikaku na tango to bunshou wo tsukatte, imi wo meikaku ni shite kudasai. Mata, 'To be honest' wa amari formal dewa nai node, IELTS no kaiwa de wa hoka no hyougen wo tsukatte kudasai.

Example: I am not very familiar with Chinese culture, but I believe that people sometimes give plants as gifts. I have seen in some old movies that they also give money as a gift to loved ones.

× Also we can mix its leaves in water and drink it so it improve our health.

✓ Also we can mix its leaves in water and drink it so it improves our health.

The verb 'improve' should be in the third person singular present tense 'improves' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. This is a subject-verb agreement rule in English.

× When I was young, I tend to follow my mother and we used to grow coriander leaves and green chillies so we can put them in our kitchen.

✓ When I was young, I tended to follow my mother and we used to grow coriander leaves and green chillies so we could put them in our kitchen.

The verb 'tend' should be in the past tense 'tended' to match the past time frame indicated by 'When I was young'. Also, 'can' should be changed to 'could' to maintain past tense consistency.

× I know a lot of a lot of things about growing a plant like the tourism and the frequency to which we have to water them according to their species.

✓ I know a lot of things about growing a plant like the timing and the frequency with which we have to water them according to their species.

The word 'tourism' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'timing'. Also, the preposition 'to' should be 'with' in the phrase 'frequency with which' to be grammatically correct.

× Another another important things is the way we make. The swell for them to grow.

✓ Another important thing is the way we make the soil swell for them to grow.

The sentence is fragmented and contains repetition. 'Another another' should be 'Another', 'things' should be singular 'thing' to agree with 'Another', and the two sentences should be combined for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I believe they sense planned as gift as I have some reference from the old movies that they used to gift money plan to the dearest one.

✓ I believe they send plants as gifts as I have some reference from old movies that they used to gift money plants to their dearest ones.

The verb 'sense' is incorrect; it should be 'send'. 'Planned' should be 'plants'. Also, 'money plan' should be 'money plants'. The pronoun 'the dearest one' should be pluralized to 'their dearest ones' for natural expression.