Colours— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to use more natural and clear expressions. Instead of 'bicolor, like a blue or white color', say 'My favorite colors are blue and white'. Also, add linking words to connect your ideas smoothly, for example, 'because they make me feel calm and relaxed.'

Example: My favorite colors are blue and white because they make me feel calm and relaxed.

Suggestion: Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Start with a clear topic sentence like 'I dislike the color black.' Then explain why using linking words, for example, 'because it is dark and makes me feel depressed.'

Example: I dislike the color black because it is dark and makes me feel depressed.

Suggestion: Be more precise and avoid hesitation sounds like 'uh' and 'umm'. Use linking words to connect ideas, for example, 'I think my friends like pink because it is bright and colorful. Also, it is often associated with femininity since most of my friends are female.'

Example: I think my friends like pink because it is bright and colorful. Also, it is often associated with femininity since most of my friends are female.

Suggestion: Clarify your answer and avoid unclear words like 'candidates' and incomplete sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence, for example, 'Dark colors make me uncomfortable in my room.' Then explain why using linking words, for example, 'because they make the room feel small and gloomy. Therefore, I prefer bright colors that make the room look bigger and cheerful.'

Example: Dark colors make me uncomfortable in my room because they make the room feel small and gloomy. Therefore, I prefer bright colors that make the room look bigger and cheerful.

× My favorite color is the bicolor, like a blue or white color.

✓ My favorite color is bicolor, like blue or white.

The article 'the' before 'bicolor' is unnecessary because 'bicolor' is used as an adjective here. Also, 'a blue or white color' is redundant; simply 'blue or white' suffices. This improves sentence clarity and correctness.

× I my my current desk I dislike is black color because it makes me feel depressed.

✓ The color I dislike on my current desk is black because it makes me feel depressed.

The original sentence has repeated pronouns 'I my my' which is incorrect. Also, 'black color' should be 'black' as 'color' is redundant here. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× That is dark and you feel not bright.

✓ It is dark and does not feel bright.

'That is dark' is acceptable but 'you feel not bright' is incorrect. The subject should be 'it' referring to the color or desk, and 'does not feel bright' is the correct negative form. This correction improves subject-verb agreement and sentence clarity.

× I think my favorite color that my friends like is pink because it's uh, it's bright and umm colorful.

✓ I think the color my friends like the most is pink because it's bright and colorful.

'My favorite color that my friends like' is awkward and unclear. Changing to 'the color my friends like the most' clarifies meaning. Also, removing filler words 'uh' and 'umm' improves fluency.

× It feel like a woman because my friend is a female.

✓ It feels feminine because my friend is female.

'It feel' should be 'It feels' to agree with the singular subject. 'Like a woman' is better expressed as 'feminine' to describe color. Also, 'a female' is better as 'female' without article when referring to a person.

× I think the candidates make my room feel bad is the best color because it makes my room feel dark and it look not wide.

✓ I think the color that makes my room feel bad is the darkest color because it makes my room feel dark and look small.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'Candidates make my room feel bad is the best color' is incorrect. Rephrasing to 'the color that makes my room feel bad is the darkest color' clarifies meaning. Also, 'it look not wide' should be 'it looks small' for correct verb agreement and natural expression.

× I I bef I prefer bright color because it's can make.

✓ I prefer bright colors because they can make the room feel better.

The original sentence has repeated words 'I I bef I' which is incorrect. 'Bright color' should be plural 'bright colors' to generalize. 'It's can make' is ungrammatical; 'they can make' correctly refers to 'colors'. The sentence is completed for clarity.