Colours— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevabınız doğal ve etkili, ancak bazı cümleler gereksiz tekrar içeriyor. Cümlelerinizi daha kısa ve öz tutarak, bağlaçlar kullanarak cevaplarınızı daha akıcı hale getirebilirsiniz.

Example: My favorite color is dark green because it reminds me of nature and forests. I especially like wearing green outfits as they make me feel happy and calm.

Suggestion: Cevabınızda fikirlerinizi daha net ifade etmek için bağlaçlar kullanabilirsiniz. Ayrıca, bazı cümlelerinizde tekrarlar var, bunları azaltarak daha etkili bir cevap verebilirsiniz.

Example: I dislike orange because it pales my skin tone and makes me look sick. Moreover, it highlights the red spots on my face, which I find unpleasant.

Suggestion: Cevabınızda bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve anlamsal tekrarlar var. Cümlelerinizi daha düzgün yapılarla kurup, bağlaçlar kullanarak daha akıcı ve anlaşılır hale getirebilirsiniz.

Example: One of my best friends likes white because it reminds her of snow and purity. Another friend prefers blue since it makes him think of the sky and ocean.

Suggestion: Cevabınızda anlam bozuklukları ve dilbilgisi hataları mevcut. Daha açık ve düzgün cümleler kurarak, nedenlerinizi net bir şekilde ifade etmeye çalışın. Ayrıca, aşırı duygusal ifadeler yerine daha ölçülü ifadeler kullanabilirsiniz.

Example: I feel uncomfortable with orange in my room because it drains my energy and makes me feel uneasy. Therefore, I prefer to avoid this color in my surroundings.

× My best friends have to One of them likes white 'cause she says it's reminds her of the snow and the innocence, you know, the purity.

✓ My best friends have to. One of them likes white 'cause she says it reminds her of the snow and the innocence, you know, the purity.

The phrase 'it's reminds' is incorrect because 'it' and 'reminds' are redundant together. The correct form is 'it reminds' without the contraction 'it's'. This is a pronoun and verb agreement issue.

× I just look yellowish and orangey and it makes the red spots on my face look more.

✓ I just look yellowish and orangey and it makes the red spots on my face look more noticeable.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'look more' which is incomplete. Adding 'noticeable' completes the meaning. This is an issue with pronoun reference and sentence completeness.

× I just cannot stand seeing it 'cause it just in my opinion it W when I look something orange it just wears out my energy.

✓ I just cannot stand seeing it 'cause, in my opinion, when I look at something orange, it just wears out my energy.

The original sentence has missing prepositions and unclear phrasing. 'Look something orange' should be 'look at something orange'. Also, 'in my opinion' should be set off by commas. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and sentence structure issue.